American Landowner: Starting with Hunting in Alaska

After reading over 700,000 words, I felt that the story started off incredibly well, but the protagonist managed to ruin it with a terrible ending and pacing. He clearly possesses the most overpowered cheat code: he can generate skills simply by accessing enough information.

The protagonist's personality is a bit weak; his overpowered abilities are practically nonexistent, which is frustrating. He even has to act subservient to others to improve his skill proficiency. And even though you've transmigrated, you still need to cultivate relationships with others, which is fine, but couldn't the supporting characters be a little more normal? I really dislike it. I finished over 200 chapters, and there was one satisfying moment, but only a tiny bit.

All I want to say is this: America's largest landowners own 9,800 square kilometers of land. Newly emerging landowners like Bill Gates own 220,000 acres. The police on those lands are appointed by them, and they have thousands of armed henchmen. Your 20 acres seem a bit too small. How many years will it take you to build that up? If you're not a large landowner, you'll have to pay a lot of taxes.

The beginning was well-written, but the prices started to go haywire later on, so your losses weren't significant. Besides, if there were truly a way to make big money, those pirates would have already done it. It just shows the author has never been to America. With his method of selling prey, the IRS would have shot him 800 times over.

The beginning was really well-written, and then starting with the meal he cooked in the chart room, almost 80 chapters were dedicated to building an extremely comfortable house for the client. It felt like I was reading a home decorating novel. Is Charles the protagonist's father? Even a biological father wouldn't need to pamper him like this. 😒

The book is good, but could you please stop with the filler? You've padded three chapters with the content of one chapter, and the pretentious and face-slapping moments are all too forced.

1. What is the purpose of the character Aruk? Is he just a comedic character to glorify the protagonist? He's always making a fuss, but does he have any positive role in hunting or daily life? And isn't the protagonist a transmigrator? What is the relationship between the original owner's childhood friend and the protagonist? This seems very disconnected!

A female author? She's always spouting all sorts of sentimental remarks and psychological descriptions.

I hope the author can keep it up! Although I've seen some people say that when you write about things and daily life, the details seem verbose and padded. But in my opinion, this is precisely the soul of slice-of-life stories: the occasional transition, enjoying delicious food, and interacting with marshmallows. Marshmallows are truly adorable. So therapeutic!!

Let's cut down on the psychological drama. It's fine to do it occasionally, but don't write it all the time.