American Landowner: Starting with Hunting in Alaska

After reading more than 700,000 words, I just feel that the protagonist started with a bad start and was beaten to a bad ending by the protagonist. Obviously, he has the bugiest golden finger: skills can be generated as long as the contact information is complete enough. The overwhelming loan in the early stage has long been paid off. He has a deposit of 3 million, is debt-free, and has a stable starting point. The path given by the author is clear: you are a hunter. You should first improve your strength steadily and unlock extraordinary skills. Then build your own hunting club step by step. Slowly but with a solid foundation. This should be the most comfortable growth stream. As a result, the protagonist's heart is as high as the sky and his hands are as chaotic as his feet from beginning to end. In the beginning, he shouted that the old house should be demolished and rebuilt. He shouted hundreds of thousands of words, but the house did not move. He turned around and smashed most of his wealth to build a specimen exhibition hall. The foundation was not laid, and the building was built to the sky. He became a master and said that he wanted to learn hunting, but he only kept it in words; he had an ambiguous relationship with his childhood sweetheart and immediately broke off the relationship; he learned taxidermy for three days, fished and posted nets for two days; as a hunter, his physique was so weak that he called for exercise every day, but never practiced once - the most ironic thing is that his golden finger that can generate any skill never thought of using it for any skills related to fitness, fighting, and physical fitness. The most eye-catching mechanical maintenance talent in the early stage has just disappeared from the world. You don't even have a shadow of your own hunting ground, so you dare to set up a membership system, review assets, and cling to billionaires in a whimsical way. You look like you are about to join the top circle. In essence, you are just a castle in the air, so ambitious. After finally getting 500,000 yuan into the account, he was immediately targeted by the tax bureau, the funds were under supervision, and his life was in someone's hands. The protagonist was still happy with it, without any sense of crisis. This was originally a cool article template about an individual rising through force → reaching full skill points → building a steady career → reaching the top, but it ended up being written like a headless fly: a hammer here and a stick here and there, trying to touch everything but accomplishing nothing. I shouted hundreds of thousands of words of goals, but none of them landed; I had a good hand, but I had to play cards randomly. After reading more than 700,000 words, I just feel that the protagonist has accomplished nothing, is impetuous to the point of irritation, and has wasted the top-notch opening and setting.

The protagonist's character is a bit soft, and it's as if he didn't play the game. It's a bit frustrating, and he has to pretend to be a grandson for others to gain skill proficiency. Also, you have lost your soul, and you still need to build good relationships with others. It's okay to build relationships, but can your supporting characters have normal personalities? Really don't like it. I have read more than 200 chapters, and I feel a little bit better.

I just want to say. . The largest landowner in the United States owns 9,800 square kilometers of land. Emerging landowner Bill Gates owns 220,000 acres. The police on the land are appointed by them, and there are thousands of armed servants. Is your 20 acres too small? How many years will it take to get up? If you are not a big landowner, you will have to pay a lot of taxes.

The first article is very good, but then prices start to go crazy, and you don't have much to lose, and there are really ways to make a lot of money. Those pirates have already snatched him away. I can only say that the author has never been to the beautiful country. With the way he sells prey, the IRS has killed him 800 times.

The previous writing is really good, and then starting from cooking a meal in the chart room, nearly 80 chapters are spent building a house for the client to create the ultimate comfort. I felt like I was reading a home decoration novel. Is Charles the protagonist's father? There's no need for your biological father to coax you like this 😒

The book is good, but can you please stop talking about it? You can talk about three chapters of the content in one chapter, and the pretense of being slapped in the face is a bit too stiff.

1. What is the significance of the existence of the character Aruke? A pure buffoon to support the protagonist? Does always bluffing have a positive effect in hunting and life? And isn't the protagonist's soul traveling through time? What does the original person's childhood have to do with the protagonist? It looks very disconnected! 2. Why are you pretending to be cool after hunting the bear for three chapters? Can the pretentious slap-in-the-face routine of pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger still be so clumsy and embarrassing in 2026? I sincerely suggest that the author stop writing such awkward pretentious plots, which are both watery and awkward 3. The author always uses long dialogues to "promote" the plot, but writing most of the chapters has no meaning at all. I quite like the concept of this book, a modern daily story of hunting and planting. Without too much pretense, isn't it just a leisurely life of hunting and farming? I hope the author will position the theme of this book well, spread out the stalls less, and not be like the book that just finished building a house in Alaski and filled the world with pretentiousness. It's nice to have a leisurely life every day. (Only a personal opinion, I like to read leisurely and daily life, but I've had enough of pretentious articles. I hope you can comment and thank you) Finally, I wish this book good results.

Female author? There are various emotions and psychological descriptions at every turn.

I hope the author can keep it up! Although I think some people say that when you write about some things and daily life, the details seem wordy and watery. But in my opinion, this is precisely the soul of daily writing, the occasional transitional link, eating delicious food, and interacting with marshmallows. Marshmallows are really cute. Very healing! ! I hope the author will keep it up and write seriously! Of course, in my opinion it is not without problems. But considering that the author is writing a book for the first time, he can still make progress slowly. Come on! Best wishes! !

Less psychological drama, just do it occasionally, don't write all the time.