An American Farmer: Facing the Kill Line from the Start

The subject matter is good, but the parts about women are too outrageous. If your relationship hasn't reached that stage yet, don't write about it. You wrote about it and then rejected it, which is a bit inexplicable. Are you being hypocritical?

I know you're currently working on reaching the word count to prepare for publication, but have you considered this: your content is too weak, and with only a few updates per day, you're simply not retaining readers...

I watched TV for two chapters and still no results.

Does anyone still believe the fairy tale of Chinese people getting rich in America?

Using techniques from Japanese romance novels to write about American farming life feels out of place.

For those of you who, like me, were drawn in by the sword-forging competition in the synopsis, I'd like to remind you that you should aim to participate from the very beginning, but you don't actually join until nearly two hundred chapters in.

Before anything even happened, a woman appeared first...

As expected of a novice author, ten chapters have passed and the author has only raised the conflict without taking any action to resolve the issue. He's even started chasing girls. The most anticipated chapters are completely uninteresting, and I'm thinking of giving up. I'll read two more chapters, and if it's still just filler, I'll quit.

Can't we strike it rich? The protagonist is always so poor; what a waste of his time-traveling experience! 😁

In Chapter 8, I saw that I was about to start forging knives, but after scrolling through the table of contents, I didn't see the kitchen knife and folding knife being forged until Chapter 70...