Ordinary People's Cultivation of Immortality

I have been following this book for several months, starting when it only had a few dozen chapters. The pace is indeed average at the beginning, as the author starts writing from the birth of the protagonist. But then the author changed the beginning of one edition, which is the current edition, and brought the content of the next dozen chapters to the front. A suspense is created in the form of flashback, that is, why the protagonist ran away on a rainy day. How to say it? The rhythm still feels the same. Because this book, as the author himself said, the story does not revolve around Goldfinger. The story can develop in another form without Goldfinger. At the same time, the golden finger is not strong enough to solve the problem directly. At the beginning, the protagonist is a weak fighter. The author cannot write a strong conflict, so he can only sketch it slowly. This situation can be said to have continued until the first thirty chapters. The author devoted a lot of space to writing many supporting characters. Although these supporting characters are the same as what the author said, they will appear one after another in the follow-up, especially Wan Jun, the leader of the Tianling Sect. At first, he thought he was a passerby, but later many chapters were connected through him. At the same time, there are also supporting characters who appeared earlier and played other roles in the follow-up. They are not pure tool workers. After more than thirty chapters, the protagonist joins a new sect of cultivating immortals, and the author introduces some supporting characters. Many of the supporting characters at this time are beginning to have their own stories and even character arcs. For example, Li Chengfeng, although he came from a family of cultivators, he was from a collateral line. It was with the help and guidance of his uncle Li Qingyuan that he was able to build the foundation. Later, it was because of Li Qingyuan's elixir formation that he was able to get rid of secular affairs and successfully advance to the middle stage of foundation building. But later, due to various reasons, Li Qingyuan had to personally destroy Li Chengfeng's cultivation, turning Li Chengfeng into a useless person. There is also Yang Yi. This man was originally considered a genius in cultivation, but his foundation was accidentally damaged and his cultivation level plummeted, basically ending his path to immortality. From then on, he pinned his personal beliefs and ideals on buying a flying boat. I originally thought that this guy would have no more roles in the future, but I didn't expect that he would appear again in recent chapters. But just when I was waiting to see what this guy would do next, the author actually asked for leave, and said it was for one day, but a week passed and there was no update. But fortunately, in the past two days, the author said that although he has not signed a contract and there is not much traffic, he still sees that there are book friends who have been supporting him and coming back. And the ending of Yang Yi that I have been waiting for has finally come. It's just that Yang Yi now is no longer the cold Senior Brother Yang back then, but an old man Yang who has suffered a lot. Not only is he as old as an old farmer, his waist is also bent, and he no longer looks like a cultivator of immortality. He met the protagonist to buy elixir for a former friend. It happens that this shop is opened by the protagonist, and the two of them just happen to meet. Then there are words like reminiscing about the past. Later, the protagonist learned that he also knew Yang Yi's former friend, and that this person had caused many things, so he and Yang Yi went to see this person. As a result, this person was caught up by the enemy. Although the protagonist saved this person, he was still a step too late and the person died. This man gave everything he had to the protagonist before he died. Please help the protagonist send something back somewhere for him. This is definitely the plot behind it, we won't say more. What we want to say is that among the things this person gave to the protagonist, there happened to be a flying boat, and Yang Yi happened to notice this flying boat. Finally, after some consideration, the protagonist gave the flying boat to Yang Yi. Yang Yi was naturally moved and immediately set foot on the flying boat to test the flight. But after flying for a while, he took the initiative to lower the flying boat. The protagonist caught up with him and asked him what happened. He said that he was old and could no longer fly. The regrets in it really make people have mixed feelings. What I have been pursuing for most of my life, I finally got it, but it was already too late. What is even more sad is what Yang Yi said next. He said that the reason why he wanted a flying boat after the path to immortality was cut off was because his ancestor had a fake alchemy monk who drove a flying boat. It was this person who founded the immortal cultivating family where Yang Yi belonged. Yang Yi has heard many stories about this person since he was a child. He not only regards this person as a role model, but also takes the initiative to shoulder the mission of revitalizing the family. In this way, Yang Yi's life will be completely complete. When I was a child, I grew up listening to the stories of my ancestors. When I grew up, I wanted to be the same person as my ancestors. Unfortunately, fate played a trick on me and damaged my foundation. I had to settle for the next best thing and just want a flying boat. But it is a pity that after he got the flying boat, he could no longer fly, and because he was suffering from illness, he chose to commit suicide after realizing his dream, which is even more sad. I originally wanted to say something when I saw the protagonist and Cai Xing meet. After all, that chapter really made me cry, but I didn't think about what to say. Now that I saw Yang Yi's ending, I couldn't calm down for a long time, so I just said this. Finally, I just want to say one thing: This book is worth pursuing.

There is a supporting character named Li Changsheng in it. Before he died, he said this: "My life should not be like this." At first glance, it is just the cry of an unwilling person before his death. But the specific plot is this. The protagonist and several foundation-building monks destroyed a sect called the Blood Refining Sect. It was said that this sect used monks to practice exercises and was an "evil sect". But after the protagonist and others entered the simple sect of Blood Refining Sect, they found several children, and then Li Changsheng appeared. The oldest of these children was only fifteen or sixteen years old, and the youngest was only eleven or twelve years old. They were wearing the red clothes of Blood Refining Sect disciples. Each of them looked at Wang Daoyi and Chen Hong in front of them with fearful expressions as if they were facing a formidable enemy. Chen Feng looked at those children and seemed to see himself in Qingliu Village back then. It's just that at the beginning, he was full of infinite expectations and hopes for cultivating immortals, but these children were already at the end of their rope. Chen Hong and Wang Daoyi stood opposite these children with complicated expressions and did not make any move. Zhao Ying, who was one step ahead of Chen Feng, stood behind Chen Hong and looked at these children with the same complicated expression. The first time Chen Feng saw these children, he could tell that these children were all cultivators of immortality. It's just that their highest level of cultivation is only at the third level of Qi Refining, which poses no threat to them, the foundation-building monks. Obviously, Chen Hong and others were in trouble. Judging from the clothes of these children, they are undoubtedly Blood Refining Sect disciples. Judging from the expressions and reactions of these children, they are obviously not familiar with the world, and most of them probably don't know anything about the Blood Refining Sect. As a result, how to deal with these children has become a problem. "Chen Hong, these children..." Zhao Ying asked hesitantly. In the middle of her words, Chen Hong suddenly interrupted: "Since they all have spiritual roots and are still young, let's take them all back to the valley." "Bring them back to the valley!?" As soon as Chen Hong finished speaking, a burst of laughter suddenly came from the back of the hall. Then an old man's unceremonious sarcastic words sounded. Chen Feng and others' expressions suddenly changed, and they each raised their heads to look at the place where the sound came from. "Who is it!" Chen Hong shouted coldly, but his brows furrowed. Because he actually felt that this voice was very similar to his childhood playmate. "Seniors, don't be nervous. The old man is just a bad old man who is about to die." After the words fell, a rickety figure slowly walked out from the back aisle of the hall. "Uncle Changsheng, it's you!" When Chen Hong saw clearly the face of the old man in brown clothes who came out of the shadows, he couldn't help but exclaimed with a huge change in his expression. The rickety old man was slightly startled when he heard this. After looking at Chen Hong's face for a while, he finally found the shadow of the child in Chen Hong's face. He showed an extremely playful smile: "Chen Hong, I didn't expect that a sick man like you would actually build a foundation." "Uncle Changsheng, you..." Chen Hong obviously didn't expect that Li Changsheng would talk to him like this, and he was speechless for a moment. "Li Changsheng, it's not that you don't have spiritual roots, how can you cultivate immortality!" Zhao Ying was a little angry when she heard Li Changsheng's words, but when she used the Qi-gazing technique to check Li Changsheng, she discovered that Li Changsheng was already a peak Qi refining monk. Chen Hong's expression changed greatly after hearing this, and he quickly asked: "Uncle Changsheng, are you..." "What?" Li Changsheng asked disdainfully, "Am I the same as Sect Master Kou, who sacrificed blood to other monks?" Chen Hong looked solemn and was speechless for a moment. He really wanted to ask about this, but judging from the way the other person spoke, he probably didn't do such a sinful thing. This made him even more confused. If it weren't for the secret techniques of the evil sect, how could Li Changsheng become an immortal cultivator without spiritual roots? Moreover, when Li Changsheng disappeared from the clan, he was almost fifty years old and had long passed the best age for cultivation. How come he had reached the peak of Qi refining in just a dozen years. Chen Feng has walked to Chen Hong, who now looks thoughtful. From the conversation between the two, it was not difficult for him to see that Chen Hong obviously had a good relationship with Li Changsheng and respected him very much. It's just that Li Changsheng hates Chen Hong extremely. It seems that Chen Hong owes Li Changsheng something, but Chen Hong doesn't know it at all. "Uncle Changsheng, don't get me wrong. I just want to know, how can you cultivate immortality without spiritual roots? And where have you been in the past thirteen years? Why did you suddenly disappear from the clan." Chen Hong softened his words and asked sincerely. "Haha..." Li Changsheng laughed strangely when he heard Chen Hong's words, as if he had heard the most ridiculous thing in the world. After laughing for a while, he put away his smile sadly, and said with a ferocious face: "Who said I don't have spiritual roots? I am the only one in the world with heavenly spiritual roots!" "What!" "This is impossible!" When Chen Hong, Zhao Ying, and Wang Dao heard this, they all looked shocked and lost their voices. Chen Feng even looked thoughtful. Anyone can see now that this matter is not simple, and there must be a secret in it. "Uncle Changsheng, are you mistaken? Everyone in the valley has a chance to test their spiritual roots once they reach the age of twelve. As a cultivator now, you should know that except for the extremely special existence of the hidden spiritual roots, the elders responsible for testing the spiritual roots will never make mistakes." Wang Daoyi thought for a while and said carefully. Li Changsheng sneered when he heard this and said sarcastically: "What if it was not a mistake, but a deliberate mistake?" "This is impossible!" Zhao Ying heard this and immediately refuted, "Dao Yi and I both have spiritual roots detected by the elders in the valley. If you really have heavenly spiritual roots, will the family be happy? "How could you deliberately make a mistake!" "Little girl Pianzi is still naive and brainless even if she has established the foundation. Haven't you ever thought about it, if I, a person with a different surname from Tianlinggen, were to cultivate immortality after I formed the elixir..." Li Changsheng smiled bitterly and shook his head. As he spoke, he looked at Zhao Ying and others and continued: "Do you think Gu Nei listens to the Chen and Wang families or to me? And who I want to support in the future are the children of the Chen and Wang families or the children of my Li family?" "This..." As soon as these words came out, Zhao Ying suddenly didn't know how to argue. She looked at Chen Hong and Wang Daoyi at a loss, but saw that both of them had a heavy expression. Chen Feng narrowed his eyes when he heard Li Changsheng's words. Although what Li Changsheng said was very realistic and cruel, it was a truth that had to be acknowledged. Although everyone knows that there is no immortal sect in this world, let alone an immortal cultivating family. But almost all immortal cultivating families hope that their family can continue as long as possible, and also hope that their descendants can enjoy the convenience brought by the family for a long time. To achieve this, in addition to ensuring that oneself are strong enough, one must also ensure that no existence more powerful than oneself will appear within one's own sphere of influence. Otherwise, the family might be replaced by others at some point. Tianlinggen monks have no bottleneck in forming pills. Therefore, it is "reasonable" for Chen Wanggu, which only has monks in the late stage of foundation building, not to allow Li Changsheng to cultivate immortality. "Uncle Changsheng, how did you know that you have spiritual roots?" After a while of silence, Chen Hong suddenly asked. Li Changsheng was suddenly enlightened, and a trace of reminiscence flashed in his eyes: "Of course it was Sect Master Kou who told me. When I came out of the valley alone, I wanted to go to Changning City to visit an old friend. I didn't want to meet the seriously injured Sect Master Kou, so I saved Sect Master Kou. After the death, Sect Master Kou was seriously injured and needed to replenish his vitality. He lost control and was about to attack me. Unexpectedly, he discovered that there was a restriction in my body that blocked my spiritual roots..." "It's ridiculous to say that this restriction that ruined my life was actually intentional. Sect Master Kou woke up and saved my life. Later, Sect Master Kou told me that there are many people like me, and we are all victims of some cultivating families to maintain their own rule. " "I didn't believe it at all, just like you. Sect Leader Kou unlocked the confinement spell on my body and used the spirit-testing stone to test my spiritual roots again. I looked at the red light emitted by the spirit-testing stone, and then I realized that I was actually the one-of-a-kind Heavenly Spiritual Root cultivator." At this point, Li Changsheng couldn't help but burst into tears. Chen Hong couldn't help but show a hint of understanding. In the past, he always wondered why the spirit roots in the valley were not tested by spirit stones, but the elders in the foundation building stage tested them one by one. Now that Li Changsheng said this, he finally understood. Li Changsheng continued sentimentally: "My mother told me more than once that she and my father gave me the name Changsheng in the hope that our Li family could also produce an immortal cultivator to pursue the road to immortality." "But the two elders will die. I thought that their child was just an ordinary person without spiritual roots, and I will always remember the disappointed look in the eyes of the second elder when he learned that I had no spiritual roots and could not become an immortal." After saying this, Li Changsheng and his party shed tears. "My life shouldn't be like this." After a long time, he gritted his teeth and said bitterly, then stretched out a finger and pointed at Chen Hong and others: "It's all because of your selfish cultivating families, for the sake of the continuation of your own family tradition, you have deprived those of us who are promising to achieve greatness. Opportunity to cultivate immortality! " "Who knows whether what you said is true or not, even if you are really a Tianlinggen monk, if you can cultivate to this level at an age when your spiritual root is about to close, you may have sacrificed a lot of innocent monks!" After listening to Li Changsheng's story, Zhao Ying was really convinced at first. But when she thought about it carefully, she felt that Li Changsheng had been in the Blood Refining Sect for so many years and had cultivated to this level, so he probably killed innocent people indiscriminately. So she asked with a cold snort. Li Changsheng laughed when he heard this. He took a deep breath and shook his head: "Innocent monk? It seems that you really regard the Blood Refining Sect as an evil sect." "Isn't it true?" Zhao Ying raised her eyebrows and asked. "At first, I thought so too. After all, after I saved Sect Master Kou, he wanted to suck my blood. But over the years, the people whom Sect Master Kou sacrificed were either vicious cultivators who oppressed mortals. Either the disciples of the sect did it voluntarily. Where did the innocent monks come from? " "It's nonsense. There may be vicious monks, but how can anyone be willing to be sacrificed?" Zhao Ying immediately scolded after hearing this. Chen Feng also felt that this matter was a bit incredible, but what Li Changsheng said next greatly shocked his mind. "Do you know what it means for a scholar to die for a confidant? Sect Master Kou practices evil methods not to live longer, nor to compete for other people's opportunities. He does it to allow ordinary people like me to practice immortality!" "He told us that once he cultivates to the Nascent Soul stage, he will let the elders Everyone near Ningcheng has equal opportunities to cultivate immortality. "So, as long as Sect Master Kou needs it, we will all be sacrificed. However, Sect Master Kou will never sacrifice his disciples unless he has to. Otherwise, after five hundred years of cultivation, he will never reach the middle stage of foundation establishment!" When Zhao Ying heard this, she raised her eyebrows and snorted coldly: "I think you have been deceived by that Kou! What do you mean by equal opportunities to cultivate immortality? It's just a high-sounding reason for him to use you!" As soon as she finished speaking, a girl of about thirteen or fourteen years old in front of her suddenly broke out. He opened his companion's hand and shouted with a blushing face: "You are wrong! Two years ago, I participated in the spirit trial meeting in Chen Wang Valley, and you said that I have no spiritual roots. But the sect master told me that I have supernatural spiritual roots!" Chen Feng saw the stubborn face of the girl and couldn't help but begin to believe what Li Changsheng said. And he couldn't help but think of the two Blood Refining Sect elders who burned themselves with real fire. Isn't the behavior of these two people a voluntary sacrifice to the leader Kou! Li Changsheng smiled miserably, then looked up at Zhao Ying, with a sad tone: "You don't believe me, don't you still believe this child? Although Sect Leader Kou practices evil, his heart has never been crooked. All he thinks about is to enable us people to cultivate as immortals." "These children , they were all immortal seedlings with good qualifications that Sect Leader Kou and the two elders had found from everywhere. They had no chance of becoming immortals, but Sect Master Kou gave them this opportunity. " He paused and sighed: "Sect Master Kou and the two elders were not willing to use them at all, and almost all of them were given to them. Those of us who practice normal skills. " "It's a pity that Sect Master Kou and the two elders have not returned yet, and you have found this place. I think it is true that God has not blessed me, the Blood Refining Sect, and I have not been blessed by Li Changsheng!" He looked up to the sky and sighed, tears flowing down the ravine. Zongheng's cheeks slid down: "Obviously, as long as I have one more year, I will be able to successfully build the foundation, and my spiritual roots will be able to be reopened by then. If this is true, given time, I will be able to successfully build the elixir. What a pity!" Li Changsheng's sigh contained regret, sadness and helplessness, but also a bit of relief. It seems that he has taken it lightly or looked away from it all. Chen Hong frowned, took a step forward, and said sincerely: "Uncle Changsheng, you come back to the valley with us, I will explain everything to my third uncle." "Go back? Chen Hong, I have told you so much, don't you understand yet?" Li Changsheng looked at Chen Hong and smiled miserably, slowly shaking his head and saying. As he spoke, he sighed again, looked at the children in front of him and said helplessly: "Although we people are born extraordinary, our background has destined us to have a difficult life. There is no place for people like us in Chenwang Valley." As he said, his voice suddenly softened, "Okay, the time is almost up, let's hit the road together!" As soon as he finished speaking, the entire cave suddenly shook violently, and gravel fell. "What's going on?" Zhao Ying suddenly panicked. The children were also frightened, and they obviously didn't know what was going on. "Someone is activating the spell behind the cave hall, and the cave is going to collapse!" Chen Feng used his spiritual sense to explore the back where Li Changsheng walked out, and there was a violent energy surging in it. Near the energy, there are three Blood Refining Sect disciples standing, transporting their flesh and blood to the energy center through a blood line. After Chen Feng finished speaking, a flash of inspiration flashed under his feet, and he was about to run out. But it was too late. I saw Li Changsheng pinching out a weird spell with one hand and saying fiercely: "Master Kou is dead, you must pay the price!" After saying that, he raised one hand above his head and pressed down suddenly, and the entire cave collapsed in an instant. But before the collapse, a gray-white light flashed through it, and then Chen Hong and others felt their heads go dark and could not see anything.

I feel like the writing is pretty good, and it's not like there's not even a single person there.

In this poor place like Qidian, you can either rely on your reputation to attract readers, or you can rely on your introduction and name to attract readers, and here writing is not the most important creativity. You are too old, and even if you want to write such old articles, you must at least be famous first. Just like those on the monthly ticket list, no matter how old they are, people will read them.

Thank you to all the book collectors! Although this data is very bad, it is finally a milestone for me. This book is not a cool article, a fast food article, or an upgrade flow, but a story flow. At the beginning, it was limited to my writing ability, which I was not very good at. However, many supporting characters who appear later have their own joys and sorrows and complete story lines without affecting the main line. Such novels written by newcomers may not be popular with the mainstream Just like some people say that I, a newcomer, am still slow to write fairy tales and group portraits, and I have a lot of Street Fighter servers. Actually, one thing I haven't said yet is that this book often has two or even three-line narratives, and the protagonist even doesn't appear in two or three chapters. However, I didn't write it down, but it became smoother and smoother as I wrote it. But, in this situation, I don't know how long I can hold on. But what I can guarantee is that the story of this book will definitely become more and more interesting, because I have prepared nearly 100,000 words for the outline of the character biography, and now it is time to realize a lot of the foreshadowing and foreshadowing in the previous article. So, I will definitely try my best to write it down. Finally, I would like to thank my book friends who have always supported me. "When drinking water, think of the source."

Not bad, see you later😍

Man, you can really do it. Just with this perseverance, you can surpass 99% of the authors! ! !

It's okay. Why has no one read this book? I've read four pictures.

I feel that the idea of ​​writing the article is similar to mine. I originally wanted to post it, but now it seems that it is just for my own entertainment.

It's almost 300 chapters and you still haven't signed a contract but you still want to continue writing? The author should try adding some elements to attract readers. This is too miserable.

I came here from a recommended post on Zhihu. The writing is pretty good. Come on, author.

Welcome all book friends to join the group to discuss the plot

Add a bookshelf to support it, and take a careful look at it. There are very few books that I can read now. Firstly, I'm older, and secondly, I can't stand anything that's illogical. The main reason is that it's logical, and I can accept anything slow-paced.

Please support me. If you have the perseverance to finish this book, you can start a new book that can be signed.

I have already written 120,000 words. I don't know if I have the perseverance to write 740,000 words like my husband. I am very lucky that I started writing in volumes, so that I can end the first volume and write the second volume as a brand new story.

The author's story is actually quite new.

I just watched it. There is a crisis at the beginning. Isn't there an escape plot? How did you let this go? If you don't write about the crisis at the beginning, why write about your life experience?

We are both fallen people at the end of the world 🙂. It is impossible to cut the book. You can change it, but if you copy the story, who can have so many well-thought-out stories?

After flipping through it, I was the sixth one to see the latest chapter. What do you think would happen if you saved these more than 300 chapters? But to put it simply, how many people can save the manuscript to 1 million, and there is no contract signed yet, why not delete it and modify it, re-issue the book, and change the internal submission at the beginning. A major plot change is better than not signing the contract and not getting a penny. Seeing your promotion on Zhihu, this book seems to be published by ordinary people. It is not bad. It will be better if you revise it and repost it.

If you don't understand, just ask, is this an underworld cultivating immortality?

The original title of your book is pretty good. I also like the mortal flow, and I am also writing the mortal flow. I have saved 300,000 yuan for the manuscript and feel that it is not enough. If I push back and revise, you just lack the patience and do not polish the beginning seriously. Seriously, why are you in a hurry? If you pass the beginning, you can still get it on the shelves no matter how short it is of 300,000 yuan. For example, the book "Mortals Asking the Immortal Way" was read by no one in the early stage. It was also a newcomer and had more than 200,000 words. When you find that no editor wants you, you have to start writing again and save the plot. To be honest, I have been revising and revising my novel for two years, more or less. I have been learning how to write, how to write the beginning, revising many times, from being rejected by the template for internal submission, to being allowed to publish it directly. At least I have made progress. I was confident at the beginning this time, but I was slow in writing so I saved the manuscript. The advantage of saving the manuscript is that I can go back and revise what I wrote before, especially when the newly thought of plot needs to be patched, and there are still some logical illogicalities. The same event will become better and more reasonable with more foreshadowing. Seeing that what you wrote is the kind of mortal flow I like to read, let's encourage each other. It is also my first time to write a novel, but I am very ambitious. What I have to do is to work hard to match my ambition. At least you have to make money from your first novel, not from love. From the time I wanted to write a novel to the time I started writing it, I was studying, watching live broadcasts on Douyin, and studying with Longkong.

You already have golden fingers, why are you still called an ordinary person?

It is recommended that authors should not immerse themselves in writing all the time. Polishing their own content is the key. Some of the beginnings of other great masters can be polished for a month or two before being released.