Traveling Simultaneously: Integrating World Views

It's quite novel. It's not the common sharing of cultivation or talent, but the mechanism of sharing each other's world. The best thing is that the mechanism is only useful around the protagonist. The protagonist can pass the mechanism to his friends as he wishes. I won't say that once the protagonists merge inexplicably, and then the whole world shares it to the extreme, it would be really difficult to fight in that case.

The setting of this book is a bit new. It is different from the traditional Tongchuanliu. The setting of this book is that every time a protagonist is added to the world, the settings of the other protagonists' worlds will be upgraded. For example, there are 00 more Ouchi secret agents, a new lightning strike and internal force setting; there are more Douluo, JoJo's stand-in can add soul rings... And the protagonists are always ahead by virtue of the preview of the version, this idea is OK, and I look forward to the follow-up story

How can I write about a protagonist who would fight for someone else after just a few days of friendship? If there is no benefit to saving people, just take risks, just like a deadpool.

The biggest problem with the same time travel is that there are multiple protagonists, and each world is a different protagonist, which makes the sense of substitution extremely poor. There's no main plot and no real protagonist, it's all, a little bit here, a little bit there. Then gave up. I hope the author doesn't follow the same old path. . . .

The setting and the imagination are very interesting, but I still slipped away. The writing is good, but it is incoherent. The world jumps here and there. When I see the excitement, I jump away. It is like watching the Divine Eagle to destroy the Meng Yuan Dynasty and prepare to go south to destroy the Song Dynasty and become the emperor. However, he jumped to the world. He is really prone to internal injuries, so he slipped away. Many times. Xiao Li's flying knife is also the same. It's a great killing. Jumping around the world, I can't stand it anymore

I collected Lin Xianer when I was not here, so I had to collect it when my shoes were broken.

I laughed so hard, I was so entangled, so pitiful

To be honest, the author had a problem with the outline from the beginning. Why did Jojo change it to Ruthless Swordsman halfway through writing? What does the previous paragraph mean? The writing of The Ruthless Swordsman is also a bit shaky and too discouraging. If you feel it's hard to survive, you can read Huang Tian's book. Might as well be designed like that

The setting is relatively novel. The author likes to write weak words, such as the description of weak characters. The descriptions of Hong Lingbo and the two little girls are too weak, and there are also problems with the description of the protagonist's perspective. It is the right time to cut off one interesting point. I deeply doubt that the author will think that we readers want to read the subsequent interesting points and follow his books.

Li Xunhuan's copy suggestion is just a suggestion! It's better to end it as soon as possible. The novel is actually not enjoyable. I can only say that the TV series is really good! There aren't many people in the book who don't deserve to die!

The creative writing is very good, but the writing method is wrong. The audience attracted by the shared worldview wants to see the performance of different systems in a misaligned world. Otherwise, it's just a fantastic use of animation abilities in a misplaced world. The beginning is well written and has a good look and feel, but what about after ten chapters? What did you write? Selling dog meat on a sheep's head, JOJO barely passes the test, what the hell is Cologne? If you want to see the grudges and grievances, the outbreak of violence, and the saintly appearance in front of people, will you read the beginning of you? Besides, this paragraph was not written well. The purest thing is that the addition of Stephen Chow's worldview in the movie directly improves the protagonist's combat power system. Directly leading to the most core setting, a shared worldview is more numerically inflated than shared power. Moreover, the core setting also causes the improvement of the protagonist to be continuously diluted by the things in the world (after all, by the middle stage of writing, you will have at least a dozen systems, as well as the funny movie type system at the top of the contempt chain). I can't even understand what I wrote in the article. Can I understand the numerical value when I write it?

What's more interesting about traveling through the same world is that there are several worlds. Jumping back and forth will bring a lot of freshness, but the Gu Long novel stage in the middle is really not interesting at all. It is just a slap in the face, the plot is nothing new, and then it is broken, and it continues for more than ten pictures.

It depends on the situation. Gu Long's writing is good. JOJO is reluctant because many people don't know JOJO. The author didn't explain it. Later, Douluo's writing is very fast and has no plot feeling, as if he is running for his life. It's too rushed. If the author wants to write, just write well and read it. If you don't want to read it, just skip. Most authors and books are written in such a way that they look good in the early stage and read the whole thing in the later stage. If you don't work straight from takeoff to the later stage, it is better to write a good-looking early stage.

I feel like the author is too easily swayed. Lin Xian'er obviously compromised once and rushed to accept it at first, but then hesitated and asked again, causing the tug and pull to obviously mess up the rhythm. Including Lin Shiyin again, she insisted on finishing it until the end. She couldn't help thinking about Cao Pi. Isn't the latest chapter also considered to be finished? If you are afraid, hesitation will only lose readers who want to follow you.

The first world where you dare to write Douluo, I respect you as a man 👍👍👍

The Gu Long chapter clearly stated that the evildoers in the world should be killed, but Ye Xianer did not. The character doesn't match.

The audiences for martial arts and co-dressing are not the same, right? I'm not particularly interested in this martial arts plot.

No memories can be shared. How do you confirm that you are still you? The world is different, and the protagonists' experiences are different. Memories cannot be shared or fused, and this thing is no longer the same person.

After seeing the latest 72 chapters, the most interesting chapter is actually the Gu Long chapter. I feel very good about it. Unfortunately, the woman is a failure, and the ending of "Slaying the Dragon" by Xiaoyun is not very good. So far, it is considered a good one. There are no suppression or common poisonous points.

The author is indeed unconventional, but there is one big flaw. The world he chooses and the positioning of the people who have watched Douluo are too different. It is too big. Young readers simply don't read these worlds. No wonder there are so few collections. At least choose a world that is popular, brother.

I just read it, and the author said that the data of Divine Condor is good, but that of Naruto is worse. In fact, the reason is simple, because the previous article was integrated with the TV series and then reduced the dimensionality. It has the refreshing feeling of invincible flow, and readers naturally love to watch it. Naruto does not continue that refreshing feeling, and it cannot write too many new ideas. The poor data is also deserved. The author should stay in the comfort zone, write more about low-level martial arts, and then directly come back to high-level Wudang. For example, you, the Hokage, will mention it a little bit, and then write about one person, write about the protagonist driving Susanoo to complete the entire several-hundred-meter-high gun competition, write about the protagonist showing off with one palm and a divine dragon, and then destroying the Wang family, and then write the above because the protagonist has the value of united front to please the protagonist, so that the reader will feel satisfied, and then find the next chapter to continue writing like this. Can the data be lost? ! Use all the infinitely terrifying gene locks of the Heaven-shading Dao species for hacking, and then write a few more mid-level weapons. When switching to high-level martial arts, it is like writing infinite horror, and add more backgrounds of other high-level martial arts for hacking. In addition, the infinite horror itself is simple and enjoyable. It is not difficult to continue the sense of refreshment. Then you can consider finishing it. Generally, writing high-level martial arts will be almost finished. If you think about water, you can write a simple and exciting world like Samsara Paradise, otherwise it will easily cause crotch loss.

The settings and ideas are quite interesting, come on, keep it up

Is it because you are a eunuch, or is it because you are preparing a new book that you are slower?

When will this book be updated? When will the new book come out?

There are two gods in the comment area who recommend them every day and don't even want to read them.

Just like mixed martial arts. Nowadays, when newcomers write about mixed martial arts, it is equivalent to committing suicide.

I have never played card duels, and I completely understand the logic of their duels, so I gave them up after a while. All kinds of dragon maid vocabulary appeared in an ordinary way, which made my ears tingle.

Author, please put the extra chapter at the front, otherwise you won't even know there is an update after it is updated.

Basically, every website has several books about traveling through time at the same time. Every time I click in to read it, I exit with a confused look on my face. I never know how to read this kind of book. Which world is the protagonist? Do you regard the protagonists from other worlds as their alter egos?

Is this the end of the novel? This is what happened next