Cangqing Immortal Clan

I am still catching up and will continue to catch up. The novel is currently a good novel, and book friends with logical obsessive-compulsive disorder can read it. However, I have only caught up to more than ninety chapters, so I don't know what will happen next. As far as the more than ninety chapters are concerned, there are no major logical problems. There are indeed a few minor problems, but they are not dramatic. Maybe my reading requirements are relatively high. How high are the requirements? There are no more than 1,000 or 800 online novels, but I can't finish more than 5 of them, and the ones I can still remember are only one that I can't remember. My favorite is about cultivating immortals, but unfortunately I haven't finished reading any of them. For example, Mortals Cultivation to Immortality, Immortal Rebellion, Covering the Sky, and Perfect World, which are very popular, I can't stand them. The reason is that they are too dramatic, and the author deliberately depicts a world instead of telling a world. It feels bad to feel like the author can do whatever he wants. If I want to read the author's fantasy, why don't I fantasize about it myself? The writing of immortality must be fantasy, but it must also be based on objective logic, and it does not mean that you can do whatever you like. I read a lot of book reviews, and many book friends attach great importance to logic issues, but a common problem in many online novels is logical flaws. Their authors focus on writing style and plot. In my opinion, the writing style can be worse and the plot can be worse, but the logic must be good. This is the soul and foundation of the book. Li Qingyun died so quickly in the book that many readers may not be able to accept it. After all, many readers like this character, including me. But instead, I praise the author for truly controlling this virtual world without personal emotions. On the contrary, it makes people feel more real and realistic. After all, in our real world, it is impossible to have everything one wishes, and it is impossible for good people to live to old age. There are many helplessness in reality, so there should be a lot of helplessness in the world of cultivating immortals. Too perfect makes people feel unreal. In some books, the minions die by the tens of thousands, but the big characters never die, which feels very dramatic. For example, there are some random force majeure encounters, and small minions die in droves, but none of the big shots die, which is very unreasonable. It is understandable that a big shot will die in a force majeure encounter, but after reading the book, this kind of random encounter will always lead to death. Don't you think it's weird? The world of books is also a world where sometimes objectively writing down an important character is a sublimation of the author's writing thoughts. I saw mortals cultivating immortality. Mortals and immortality cultivators live in the same world, but mortals seem to know nothing about immortality cultivation. This is impossible. After all, immortality cultivators also have minds, good and bad. It is impossible to accept some so-called constraints without having any interaction with mortals. Moreover, mortals also came here to cultivate immortality. It is impossible for mortals to know nothing, so I gave up after watching it. When I read Immortal Rebellion, I started to feel that it was hard to find a pill. The Nascent Soul is very awesome, and the Transformation of Gods is even more shocking and admirable. There are only one or two infant transformations in the legend, but when the protagonist reaches that state, there are thousands of them. The other Nascent Soul Transformation Levels are really crappy. I feel like I am back to the starting point of the book. If everyone is awesome, they are no longer awesome. There is no sense of superiority or difficulty. I hope the author of this book will pay attention to this and plan a range of high-level people in advance, and don't randomly pull out anyone who is a great god later. It's very dramatic and boring. Zhe Tian is still using his mobile phone in the world of cultivating immortals. I accept that cultivators can charge it, but don't you, the author, need to write down the process to explain the readers' doubts? There is also a perfect world, where stones, trees, flowers, and plants all become immortals and can become immortals. Even if you are walking on the road, you might be stabbed to death by a bug that becomes an immortal. The imagination is indeed very imaginative, but Journey to the West of the Journey to the Gods does not dare to be written like this. That is not reading a book, but relying on the author's imagination. Do you find it interesting? Fantasy does require imagination, but it must also be based on objective understanding. Having said so much, I am so serious for the first time because this book is quite good in terms of logical understanding. I recommend it to all book friends. I wonder if anyone else feels the same way.

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The reading experience is good so far, it can be regarded as a very authentic Mortal style, especially the fight in the forest in the middle, and the fierce battle between the monsters and caves in the Tan. It is very comfortable to read, the writing is very good, and some details are well handled. The relationship between brothers within the clan, including the first three chapters, highlights the sense of crisis. It has the same feeling as when watching Mortal. There are some minor flaws in it (for reference only), let me list them for the author One: Chapters 15 and 16 (big poisonous points) I can understand why the author wants to write it like this (to transform the protagonist from an ignorant family disciple who has never experienced life and death to a qualified monk), but the sentences described in it only make me feel that the protagonist is A Holy Mother, especially the dialogue in Chapter 16, looks really awkward. A robbery cultivator wanted the protagonist's life one second, but the protagonist later spoke for him. I suggest changing this paragraph, otherwise it may have an impact on recommendations and shelves Two: Chapter 35 The sense of control behind the scenes is too strong, and a person with no connection suddenly wants to Asking the protagonist to help her complete a task, it feels like an NPC playing an online game a few years ago. It reads a bit strange, but of course it does not affect the perception. After all, it can be seen that the author needs to continue the plot (it is a bit stiff) Three: (personal feeling) The pace after more than ten chapters is too fast, it seems like nothing During the training time, not all the functions of the golden finger are fully displayed, which is a little suspense In short, the author is very grateful. There are few particularly amazing books on the current family cultivation and mortal schools, and generally the data before one million words are not good. I hope the author can continue to write. As long as it is based on the current level, a million-word masterpiece will definitely be enough! Finally, I wish the author a happy New Year✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧

You should be able to build a foundation within 300,000 words.

It mainly focuses on a description of growth. The pace is quite slow and quite strenuous. I have read all the chapters so far. After many experiences, the protagonist has grown from a proper fledgling to a character close to that of other characters in fairy tales. At first, if you don't like silly, sweet, and silly words like "Mother's Heart", you may find them poisonous and shocking. However, considering that the setting is non-transformation and non-transformation, and the children are taken to the clan to teach and teach dead cultivation at a young age, the psychological age of the game is indeed not much higher after being in the teens for a few years at the beginning. But this also reflects the problem. The education and role of the family are too subtle. It can even be said that the only existence is the breakthrough pill and the initial technique. The protagonist learned some common sense from books he bought while living abroad, and he also learned various basic skills from books he learned while living abroad. Other than that, there are no big logical problems. I hope I can keep writing.

The first three chapters of Platinum Assets 😍 are well written.

There are too many realms. What is the peak in the middle stage of Qi training? If you don't look carefully, you will easily get confused.

Nonsense, isn't it a bit too much? Just say a few words from your mind about this, and a few words from your mind about that. You just made up the number of words.

Good! Read

Is this a fishing technique that the protagonist practices?

Again, authors who write about the family style and the head style can refer to the Xuanjian Immortal Clan and the Cultivation Sect Heading Road. One book is popular, and the other book was popular in the past. It doesn't have to be a copy of the plot. The most important thing is that the book should be good-looking.