Travel Through the Prehistoric Times and Become the Founder of Shangyuan

I don't know if it's good or not Anyway, I've read it from the first chapter to now Well, several chapters are written about him practicing there himself It's not easy, writing so many words I've read a lot of prehistoric novels, and I feel they are all low-end combat power But it doesn't matter, as long as the plot is good

You see, what you wrote is simply inconsistent. Zixiao Palace gave a lecture earlier, and he quickly sat on several futons by himself. When Hongyun was killed, there was talk of a fight for position. Ah, have you forgotten? There is also Hongyun's Hongmeng Purple Qi, which was not written to Hongyun when Hongjun distributed it, but now it suddenly appeared. Also, during the battle between Tao and Demon, Luo Hu clearly produced the Dharma form of Destruction Damo, but he did not die. As a result, during the Lich War, Luo Hu died and was left with only a remnant soul. There are also three clans fighting for hegemony. I only saw the Phoenix clan and Qilin. As for the dragon clan, there was no scene at all. Not a single dragon appeared. And you, the Quiet Envoy, are just a pushover. You seek death wherever you go. You have been talking about finding allies, but I only see that you have been cultivating disciples. Is this disciple your ally? Sanqing Nuwa has no contact at all. There is also no introduction to how the human race appeared. Zixiao Palace directly gave Sanqing the leader to take it seriously! Obviously there were three sermons in Zixiao Palace, but you made it into one and it ended. Just talk about it once. In the battle between Tao and Demon, Hongjun and Luo Hu defeated all living beings in the West. You, who cultivated the White Lotus to purify the world, didn't feel anything at all. Is this reasonable? Is this the rule? The Battle of Dao Demon is a patch I gave you, otherwise I wouldn't be able to tell how Luo Hu suddenly became a remnant soul. The content and plot are okay, but brother, brother, can you sort out the logic of what you wrote? There are really a lot of inconsistencies in the content.