Who Told You to Make Soup with Ringed Worms?

The effect of contamination is too ridiculous. The protagonists all have low health cards, and there is a 20% chance that all cards that are not immortal will be destroyed. It is not worth the gamble. The risk is too great. Although it may be for plot reasons, I still want to complain about it.

No, after more than 30 chapters, the poison has taken hold. The originally normal protagonist is very blunt, "feeling irritated inexplicably" and "suddenly losing his mind". It is clear that no matter what I said before, there will be no inexplicable bad behavior in playing cards, but God's fate suddenly leads to a wave of bad behavior. With the cards in your hand, you will lose the whole game, and then suddenly God's will comes to an end. The deus ex machina plug-in uses the power of time to go back and win again, and then the BOSS enters the second stage and the protagonist still loses. Then why did the protagonist's personality collapse and mentality collapse in the game before, and then force the plug-in to show up and go back in time to win the game? Here is a sudden change in the image of the protagonist, from a person with a normal mentality who doesn't do any bad things at all, to a person with a glass heart who suddenly has a mental breakdown and keeps doing bad things, and finally has a broken heart and admits defeat. Why? I can't understand why someone who was so normal in the past suddenly forcibly suppresses his intelligence and forcibly writes a story for the protagonist.

The book is so cool, and the unpopular subject matter can account for half of the blame 😄

Except for some problems at the beginning, the writing gets better and better later on, and the rhythm is stacked up. What I see is a return to the surface, and the pace may be slowing down. The deck battles are pretty well written, but there are many card types that cannot be written about card battles at all. Good quality food and grass, certified by bookworms.

It's a new author. The introduction to this book also references Evil Underworld, which is rare.

The whole overall structure seems to be very good so far, but there are some problems with the plot arrangement, advancement method and character creation The Lumberjack's use of the protagonist's mistakes to advance the plot almost made me die. Although it came back later, it may take some time. We have to consider whether readers have a chance to see the back Then we go back to the surface. In addition to bringing out the setting of the shepherds, the plot of this group of newcomers gave me a very bad feeling. There was competition for the leadership position, inexplicable ridicules, and the protagonist just ignored the anger. I can understand scolding and even being a member of the Virgin Mary Gang to the end. Why did the Riddler think he was incomprehensible and gave hints and warnings but only gave half of them. At present, I can only think that they were deliberately reserved for the sake of others to show off later Ways to advance the plot Generally passive, the protagonist mostly survives in desperate situations by being manipulated, misled, and drifted. Except for having the initiative in the card game, he is basically led by various tricks Finally, the protagonist makes me feel like he is suffering from a youthful version of PTS. D-like, slightly hysterical, sensitive, and somewhat emotional. In addition to not being stressed or yelling out of control when encountering certain events, I cannot perceive the reasons for these changes. I have no obvious emotional expression after learning about the time travel or suffering a loss, but I You can be called Hong Wen by Green Snake in one sentence (if the author deliberately created it this way, just pretend I didn't say it, but I don't like the protagonist with this kind of character) Only when I hit this article did I realize that most of them seemed to be complaining, but the problem is really obvious and many advantages have been covered up. After that, the rationalization of card construction, the joy of obtaining higher-strength cards, the interesting world view or the desire to explore the settings that make people want to continue to explore are not well connected. When building cards and playing cards, they are obviously very cautious and strive for perfection. If you don't read it, you're making soup about Sand Snake (I know it's highly likely to be useless, but this has nothing to do with the protagonist's cautious character and highlights the protagonist's emotional irrationality); overall, there are actually many advantages, but the lack of writing skills and the lack of smooth description make the advantages not obvious and the shortcomings are magnified. I will continue to study, and I hope to start low and go high like Chu Sheng

A very good fan novel, very imaginative. It seems to be a fan novel about evil inscriptions, but it is actually a show of your own wild imagination. The plot is meticulous and the logic is online. The reason why this book is not popular is just that the material is too unpopular. To be honest, this book should not have this achievement and should not stop there 😰

How to say it? Inscription of Evil is not very suitable as a novel theme, not only because its background is relatively complete. If you only consider Inscription of Evil and not the author's other games, it will be difficult to nest your characters in it. In fact, even if you consider it, it will be difficult to nest it. The space left for fan creators is too small. Secondly, , the plot of this series is not perfect until now, and many unsolved mysteries have not yet been revealed. Writing fan fiction in this extremely complex world view is more of a gain than a loss. My suggestion is that maybe you can try to develop in the direction of a comprehensive comic. Although I feel that this is not actually a good choice, at least you can have something to continue writing.

After reading it all in one sitting, I can only say that if you are familiar with meat pigeon games and have a good stomach, you should be able to drain the grass jelly, but if you are not familiar with it, you can only drain the grain. It was the title of the book that really persuaded me to quit. . . . I've seen this book at least four or five times, but I clicked on it because I really haven't read it recently. When can I change the title of the book? It feels like this schistosomiasis has no meaning at all. . . . .

Although I have never played this game, as long as the author expands the world view accordingly, he can write a high-quality novel with seven or eight hundred chapters. According to this momentum, There are only a few good novels like Avatar that are developed from games these days. I read one Don't Starve, one Stardew Valley, and one Darkest Dungeon. This is the fourth one. I bought the first three games, but I am not good at playing card games, so forget it.