Esoteric Cult Simulator: Starting as a Killer

The plot and setting are interesting, but the connection and turning points are not enough. Especially when Officer An Qi died, he did not show that sense of wonder. I hope the author can maintain the current level and continue to improve.

This novel is very bland and tasteless. Even when he writes about conflicts, he feels that there is no feeling at all. To put it harshly, the protagonist does not look like a living creature. There are stones that can be seen everywhere on the roadside, and there is no sense of danger or gratitude at all.

Coming from the previous book, the writing is very good and exciting!

Like the title says, this is really important to me.

🎬 Plot: The beginning is okay, a bit catchy, I hope the follow-up plot will be better

If I change my identity, I feel that writing is much more difficult. If I don't change it, it's better to just delete the reincarnation in Goldfinger. I hope the author doesn't write it as badly as the previous one.

I haven't seen anything so far, I hope there won't be any poisonous points later on.

The protagonist's character is not very three-dimensional, but the plot and writing are good, and it can be used to amuse the reader.

I currently live alone and am in a good mental state. I know that my writing ability is limited, and I don't care about my grades. I will get perfect attendance if I can. I do not accept any criticism or encouragement. (The former just makes me suspicious, the latter stresses me out) So most comments won't be replied to. But the comments will not be deleted. I don't need a monthly vote. Readers of the previous book should know that this is a disclaimer. Don't ask me for additional updates by voting for a monthly vote. Writing is not a sacred thing to me. I also have no feelings about the books I write. The last reason why the last book was discontinued was because of pressure. Now that this book has poor grades, I don't feel any pressure. So everyone, reading novels is just for entertainment, don't feel bad about it.

The protagonist is possessed, right? He is surrounded by a person with vague murderous intent, and he feels that he can't hide from the danger coming from him. He wants to contact him, let him in, sleep in his room, and then save him? And he acted like Savage at the beginning. Do you like your brother or your sister? Or let's talk about this person in the process of transformation If the protagonist likes Savage, then I put it bluntly, it's better not to save him. Anyway, you also like his brother If it's his sister, it's even more nonsense. His original appearance has not been revealed to the protagonist at all, and besides, people don't regard the protagonist as a friend, at most. It's just a thug, a useful tool to cultivate Besides, the protagonist has just started, and it feels no different from the strip area. He has no power at all, so he has to blend in. It's a bit interesting It takes only half a year to grow up, to be able to fight against an entire secret sect, and then save people. His combat power is too inflated It feels a bit stupid.