Da Feng: Demon Sealed Sword Soul, Wandering All over the World

Those who write this kind of humanistic novel are most annoyed by the protagonist who doesn't know the plot. Don't know anything

The protagonist looks like he knows the plot but doesn't know anything about it, which makes me feel uncomfortable watching it.

Either you accept the well-known female characters in the original work, or if you don't accept them, downplay the writing and write less, at least don't write about the love scenes between the female characters and other male characters. If you write about Xu Qi'an and Huaiqing bitch, I'm fine, because I don't like these two. If you write about Xu Qi'an and Su Su, I'm just a little unhappy, because this female ghost has no impression. If you write about Xu Qi'an and the nine-tailed demon fox, then I can't stand it. Because I really like this 😭 and I don't want to read any further. Goodbye

Regarding the improvement of the Dafeng system, we need to seek your opinions. The system of selling newspapers feels weird. The martial artist is almost cut into a dog in the end, and the Taoist priest's fighting method is also very simple. In this book, I will strengthen the capabilities of each system. If you have any comments and ideas, everyone can provide them.

I read your profile. There are several worlds that I really want to see, and there are several that I really find disgusting, including the original god Zhu Xian and so on. I hate Genshin Impact because the style of painting doesn't match. I hate Zhu Xian Dou Po Jiang Ye because it's such a mess. And judging from my 20 years of reading, this book must be a eunuch. Even if you insist on finishing this book, your results will not be much better. I hope the author can slap me in the face. Excellent finished copy. These days, any piece of shit about anti-theft and anti-theft can be made into a high-quality product. Don't tell me you can't do it.

I'm having fun with Akaashi, who had a stoic and aloof persona in front of him, but there were a lot of good girls around him who didn't want him, and then he suddenly went to be a ladybug in Tiangangden, and he said the quality was not as good as that of Dafeng, so you still want to be a ladybug? If you want to be a ladybug, you should have told me earlier. Why don't you go to Da Feng in the beginning? Classic sudden illness, Geneva, waste of time

Super-grade can be equal to Dou Sage, but is it too defiant to say that Dou Sheng is equal to Heaven-shading Saint? Discussions on forums and many astronomical texts tend to favor Dou Emperor = Saint. Both of them are clearly described in the original text as scenes with explosive star-level combat power. I would like to state in advance that I don't want to brag about any works, but when writing about astronomy, I have to be more rigorous in uniting the combat capabilities. As long as the differences are not too big, readers will turn a blind eye.

The protagonist has a little bit of a nanny, and the halo of intelligence is too serious. The female supporting character has no brains to criticize.

Personally, I think if Li Xingyun doesn't wake up, just leave him alone. Mud can't hold up a wall.

Scattered, chaotic. The plot is told in segments, and the skill of spacing blank lines needs to be practiced again.

The author wrote a self-pleasure article for himself, right?

I thought it was good at first, but I was confused by the sudden appearance of a chat group. Forget about the chat group, you actually have a group friend (Manji) coming to Da Feng World in the next chapter, my God. . .

I've watched your entire chat group system so well, I'm speechless.

Each dungeon world should have at least one female protagonist 😏. As long as the protagonist travels through the world without the dungeon heroine, the protagonist will immediately stop the dungeon time. If there is a chance to meet the dungeon again, time will flow. In this way, each dungeon heroine has individual characteristics 😏, and the car can keep driving.

The world in this introduction is a mess. If you arrange them in order from low martial arts to high martial arts and then Xianxia, ​​a line of struggle will naturally appear, isn't it great?

What is a person who doesn't read books doing wearing books?

I haven't watched Da Bong's Watcher, so I can't stand it.

You are not the author, but you still dare to write about this reputation that has been ruined by the OP? For the books I know (except for Genshin Impact fans), as long as I write the original version, I will be subscribed 😅😅

Have you written any more novels about Da Feng the Watcher?

The writing is too messy, too messy to explain.

Xianxia Wenwen Yuanshen, it feels weird

Can I finish it in October? I really don't think there is much left to write about the mysterious world. Now the Ring of Destiny is simply relying on the defense, which is smelly and watery. The original style of exploring mysteries is gone. The Tarot Society is full of clowns, a group of two or five ghosts, ghosts, and snakes, each showing his or her own special powers. The boss is gone and there is still a divisive confrontation. The righteous faction has no brains to act as a nanny for the male protagonist as a stepping stone, and chooses a world-destroying demon to fight against the apocalypse. The actions of the protagonist group are even more poisonous. I doubt if they continue writing it, they will cooperate with the outside gods to dismember Klein and replace him as a god. We all have a bright future, and only Klein is suffering from hanging up🤣👏

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I was so looking forward to waiting for you to explode, but this is the result? It's just hard water anyway! If I keep it for half a year, I can always wait until what I want to see.

Da Feng, at first glance, it looks like Da Qin. I also said that it would be too abstract to play with two swords in Qin without talking about martial arts.

Where did Ge Xiaolun come from? I didn't see the Super Seminary.

It feels so chaotic, and the protagonist also brings out a large number of people from the Quiba world. (I have never seen Quiba. Did the protagonist bring a large number of people out to correct some tragedy and there is no other way?). After that, a group of people made a fuss, which is very inexplicable. And there are many scenes of the people from Quiba. The author cannot assume that everyone has watched Quiba. From here on, it is a mess.

It depends

It's pretty good. It has all the anime and novels I like.

Are there any good-looking Dafeng fans 😒😒😒