Mortal's Beginning Spirit Beast Mountain

Don't worry too much about Han Li, after all, the protagonist of the fanfic is not Han Li.

Author, author, you must not write about the harem or concubines, that would be disgusting. There is nothing to read as I write this.

I would like to make a small comment. The concepts of the two realms are completely different, especially in the new generation immortal cultivation novels such as Xuanjian Clan. In the golden elixir stage, one is already a real immortal who picks the sun and the moon with his hands, while in the mortal novels, the one who forms the elixir is just an ant with some magical powers.

No, the fanfic makes the protagonist look useless and aggrieved. What do you want to do? I was very unhappy before the baby was born, and after the baby was born, I was chased by the Golden Dragon King, and I had no desire to continue watching. Think it over yourself, fanfiction, what else do you want?

😌I wanted to see the protagonist be awesome, but it turns out the protagonist is not awesome at all

96 Cards are enough to form the elixir, and the breakthrough to the mid-term is 243 cards. Your disciples have reached their peak in the early stage before you break through. Keep improving your foundation. What's the use of pressing so hard.

No, how come you, the protagonist, are so unlucky? You were targeted by all the forces in the Chaotic Star Sea in the early stage of forming the core. Moreover, it's more than 200 chapters and it's still the early stage of forming the core. I have no desire to continue reading 😒😒😒

The protagonist's qualifications, even if all the resources in the human world are used up, are not enough to transform into a god.

The exercises selected from the three spiritual roots of metal, water, earth, and the three spiritual roots are actually fire-attribute exercises. 😰😰😰 After reading dozens of chapters, I still don't know whether to major in gold, water or earth. There is no one who does not have the fire attribute spiritual root to choose the fire attribute technique.

Author, please don't accept Nangong Wan, Zi Ling Yuanyao, these belong to Han Li, just look for others. 😁😁😁

The writing is a bit mediocre. This magic weapon can also transform. Damn, it has a little bit of that. It's still a magic weapon. I feel uncomfortable hearing it. If you were some sort of liquid, I would still have to be able to understand it. Beads would turn into mirrors and swords. Damn it. There is also nothing outstanding about the exercises, there are no powerful magical powers, it is too mediocre.

After reading more than a hundred chapters, I always feel that the author is very coy, and the more he writes, the more poisonous he becomes. I feel that after a few chapters, I will be so angry that I don't want to read it. I put it away for a few days before reading it, and after a few chapters, I don't want to read it anymore. Whether it is the choice of major exercises, or the natal magic weapon, as well as the protagonist's character and behavior, in short, they are all quite poisonous. I feel that this book is difficult.

The protagonist always wants to follow the plot, and Dayan will not go looking for it, nor will he take the spider eggs. He will let Han Li get the Void Heaven Cauldron in the future. His skills are rubbish, and his combat power is just that of a normal monk. He just has more spiritual beasts, talismans, Han Li's little nanny, a lavish flower with spiritual stones, and the four arts of cultivating immortals are just talismans. Let's take a look. If you are still in this state, you can only skip and subscribe to watch the high-burning chapters.

High emotional intelligence: The author still has a lot of room for improvement!

Don't lick Han Li, I can understand if you don't accept Nangong Wan, but don't give it to Han Li

Share the list of books to be read. Those who have passed by can help me read it and give feedback on which one is good. I can't read it myself.

"Popular Science Article on Cultivation of Immortality" I don't know if the author has really cultivated immortality, otherwise why would he write such nonsense? "Pure trash article" The spiritual stones of Biling Island, the plug-in small tripod, various opportunities, not to mention encountering bottlenecks, but the realm just can't be improved. "Eunuch Literature" Han Li, Wang Chan, Wen Tianren, all the original characters have Taoist companions, but the fan fiction written by the author does not

Many people are debating whether to have a harem heroine, a bunch of brats, of course not a heroine, just have a woman, why? Do I have to be responsible for sleeping? What kind of child psychology? I am a demonic monk, a bunch of virgin children.

Suddenly I want to say that I basically subscribe fully and add a monthly pass. So I would like to share my feelings after reading it. The writing in the book by colleagues has a feeling of cultivating immortals, and there are not so many female characters. The disadvantage is that there are too many battles and it is a bit intensive. It hasn't slowed down yet and it's time to start a new battle mode again! I personally feel a little tired and the rhythm is not very good. Keep your personal feelings! If there is a chapter on the spiritual world, please slow down a bit! The author still bases his opinion on himself. I just think it's pretty good after reading it. I don't understand why it's not popular! The updated content is also good! This result is a bit of a pity! I hope the author will get better and better!

Is the protagonist suitable for raising gold-eating insects? I saw that I was running to raise this thing again, so I couldn't do something different.

I've read over 100 chapters and I feel like the main character is stupid and greedy.

I want to ask, is it Han Li's licking dog?

In the new year, I wish you all that all your wishes will come true, and may all your wishes come true in the new year! Being able to read Mortal fan books means that everyone likes Mortal books, or Mortal type of books. Everyone may have their own opinions on some of the settings inside. I have been thinking about the setting of earth escape recently, and I feel that this type of spell requires at least a golden elixir or above to be cast. Because the Earth Escape Technique should not be a simple matter of digging a hole in the soil, but also the body has a high affinity with the earth attribute mana, which allows the body to be spiritualized for a short period of time, and the body can run very far without damaging the underground structure. I feel that if the golden elixir stage monk uses it, the maximum distance should be similar to the detection distance of his own spiritual consciousness, for example, ten miles away. Also, if you want to learn such a spell, the only prerequisite is that you have earth spiritual roots, or you can use a high-level earth escape talisman to cast it. I wonder what fellow Taoists think? 😁

It's really boring. All kinds of conflicts arise out of nowhere, and the beast control is also the same old evolution route of the four divine beasts.

The pressure is too strong, I don't want to watch it

The hairy author writes another book

If you set it up really, one moment there are too many spiritual roots that are not weak, and another moment there is still a certain gap. Now it takes more than ten years to digest the Heaven-Building Pill, and now 100 years have passed, and it will take decades to digest the Heaven-Building Pill, right?

Without the Holy Mother, without wisdom, the killing is decisive

There is no heroine, and it is a beast-control style. I feel that the heroine should be some transformed monsters or silver moon ice phoenixes.

Suddenly realized that someone was missing? Where is Zi Ling?