American Cop: An Outlaw Beyond the Law

When writing American cops with overpowered abilities, never overshadow the protagonist. These days, people read American cops for the thrill, not for the constant getting arrested or framed. You've missed the very first exciting part. The protagonist is being followed, then fights back and kills you, and you call the police?

Sig Sauer, even dogs don't use it, is Glock not good enough anymore? Are you planning to jam your pistol the next time you're on a call, giving the other side a chance to fire at you?

You haven't had a break. One thing hasn't finished before another comes. You're not playing a game, are you?

The "getting beaten down" style is all about being passively attacked; there's no real satisfaction in it. It only jumps up when someone pushes it away, like a toad.

It's a bit lacking. The combat power is chaotic; the system-enhanced body can't beat the assassin 🙂, and a mob boss can lift 400 kg. They keep throwing in new plot twists, and just when you think it's a normal American cop story, suddenly there's a cyborg, then a ghost—it feels disjointed.

American police are never "outside the law"; they are always "within the law." If an unexpected incident occurs, they either destroy the evidence or amend the law to make that incident a legal matter.

Well, the storyline as it is now, if placed in a game, I think it would be believable and even fun. But when presented in a novel, it always feels too fantastical and lacks credibility.

Did the protagonist forget about the howitzer? Thirty consecutive shots—how could anyone survive? Even in a heavily fortified area, death is inevitable; no one could possibly predict being shelled in the city.

The American police novel that included supernatural events was still in its early days when it was first published. The author felt his sales were too good. What kind of rubbish is this?!

It's pretty good. Since it's a lighthearted story, this is how it should be; it's better than some so-called "level 5" authors or "great writers" who just write filler content every day.