High Martial: I Grinded the Golden Bell Shield from the Start

Bro, it lacks originality, and the plot is mediocre. The writing is okay. You won't make money from it. Constantly changing techniques and maps based on skill level won't attract readers. You need to focus on either the plot or the techniques. You could take inspiration from Hong Kong comics, or Warhammer 3: Three Lungs and Two Hearts.

Let's all play house! My son loves listening to this story; it's like playing house. He's still wide awake even after we've fallen asleep. 😁

It's the kind of bland, forgettable story you read after one reading.

The changes and developments are too rapid, and the characters are unpredictable.

If you can't break through the defense while practicing, then don't try jumping off a building – one floor, two floors, three floors – there's bound to be one that suits your Golden Bell Shield.

It was going well at first, but then some government officials came along and arrested people right away. I didn't want to watch anymore then; it felt a bit cowardly and didn't fit the training method I was practicing.

The premise is far-fetched and unrealistic. If martial arts were truly that powerful, it would be impossible to completely control them.