Otherworldly Battlefield: I Can Unlock Dual Talents

My personal suggestion is to write fewer scenes of ordinary people showing off and getting humiliated. Once you've awakened your talent, focus more on the things that awakened people do. What's the point of an awakened person constantly showing off in front of ordinary people?

I hope the author can refine the details. For example, with such amazing talent, upgrading to a new beast, and advancing to the King level, isn't anyone paying attention? Why not specially recruit him? Shouldn't they be protected and have those stuck at the peak of level nine try to advance? Making the protagonist's Star Guide ability too overpowered makes him harder to manage, right?

This book has its priorities backwards. The world-building and background setting are actually quite good, according to the author. If the protagonist had used his special abilities to develop step by step and then distinguish himself, and the story focused more on his adventures and battles, it could have been a truly legendary work. Think of it like the "Nine-Star Poisonous Milk" novel.

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After reading the free chapters, I felt it was a bit of a pity. Actually, the author's framework and concept were quite good, but unfortunately, the author didn't seem to care about the details. For example, the elite cultivation method emphasized absolute mastery and a 0.1% Improvement each time.

You're a time traveler, you must have read quite a few novels, right? Regardless of the system, it can be extremely powerful. Therefore, it's a mistake to belittle oneself from the start. This behavior makes readers think that the Earth system must be bad, and may even mislead them into believing that the entire universe considers the Earth system to be inferior.

Dual talents and double talents shouldn't be the same concept, right?

Dear author, could you please make the romance scenes a little more enjoyable, and make the protagonist a little more intelligent? After he's fully awakened, when he encounters a terrorist organization, couldn't you have been a little more cautious?

Well, it looks alright, but the attitude towards the wind instruments is incomprehensible and a bit unbearable.

After reading a few chapters, someone commented, "You're just writing useless stuff!" I totally agree. That's not how you write everyday life!