Otherworldly Battlefield: I Can Unlock Dual Talents

My personal suggestion is to write less about showing off in front of ordinary people. Once you have awakened your talent, thank the awakened people more. What's the point of you, an awakened person, always showing off in front of ordinary people?

I hope the author can elaborate on the details. For example, if such an awesome talent has been upgraded to a beast and a king, no one pays attention to it? No special move? Shouldn't we protect it and try to advance to the ninth level of the card level? Isn't it because the main character Xing's ability to lead teachers is too awesome to be accepted? Also, Zhao has been promoted to the king. Should the secretary remember and let him go? The certifier can also guide the promotion. It seems more and more illogical. Don't always publish the manuscript at 12 o'clock and publish it during the day. I still like this book. I hope you can work out the logic and correct the unreasonableness.

This book puts the cart before the horse. According to the world view written by the author, the background setting is actually quite good. If the protagonist uses the golden finger to develop step by step and rise to prominence, and writes more plots about experience and adventure or fighting against enemies, it will really be possible to become a god. Referring to Nine Star Poisonous Milk, it is a pity that the author only focuses on unlocking talents for others. The entire text describes these things in a large amount of space, and the protagonist's own experience is completely suppressed! What readers see is that the protagonist is given skills, and passers-by are awesome. The protagonist improves a little, and then he is given skills to improve a little. Although there is progress, there is no plot at all, and it becomes boring after a few times... It's a pity that it is a good setting. It will definitely be popular if it is written as an adventure fighting style.

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After reading the free chapter, I feel a little pity. In fact, the author's framework concept is not bad, but it is a pity that the author does not seem to care about the details. For example, the elite cultivation method emphasizes absolute mastery and improves by 0.1% Each time. Later, after practicing seriously for a few days, the improvement of the earth element is completely guided by skills. The improvement of dozens of times of the cultivation method requirements at a time may even lead to a missed skill understanding. Since such a talent can be upgraded quickly, why bother to create a contradictory cultivation method setting? In addition, I'm actually very curious. Since he experienced the kidnapping of an outstanding student's family and clashed with the local cult forces when he returned to Saturn, the author spent a lot of pen and ink to depict family relationships, but it seems that after experiencing the assassination of a painter at his doorstep, the protagonist never considered the safety of his parents? Just like out of kindness, when teaching skills to the city lord's daughter, do you place your own safety on the kindness of others? How should I put it, what should be written is not written, but what should not be written is written, which is confusing. As for the things that have been commented on in other chapters, I won't repeat them too much. Although there are many flaws, after all, progress always requires a process. It's just that the free chapters did not attract me to continue to subscribe and understand the author's progress.

You, a time traveler, have read a lot of novels, right? No matter which department, it can be very strong. So it is a mistake to beat yourself up at the beginning. This behavior makes readers think that the earth system must be bad. At the same time, it may lead readers to think that the entire universe thinks that the earth system is bad The earth breeds metal, which can be stronger than gold The earth breeds lava, which can be hotter than fire I will not talk about other systems. All systems are related, so the systems merge into a complete universe.

Shouldn't double talent and double talent be the same concept?

Author, could you please be more relaxed in the emotional scenes, make the main character have a normal IQ, and be more cautious when he meets a terrorist organization?

How should I put it? It feels pretty good when I look at it, but I can't stand it when I see that the attitude towards wind instruments is not understandable.

After reading a few chapters, someone in the chapter comments said, "Just write something useless!" I agree with this sentence very much, this is not how it is written every day!