Two Apocalyptic Worlds: Traveling Through the Modern World for 60 Seconds Each Time

The plot advances very slowly, and there are a lot of descriptions of my heart and thoughts. Some of the diary entries are also very detailed, and almost the main parts can be skipped without being greatly affected. You can raise it to see if it is not poisonous for the time being.

Around chapter 160, it ends in Luochuan City. Overall, I quite like the leisurely plot. The protagonist is like a bystander watching how other people survive in the apocalypse, something like this. However, the plot of this book feels more and more biased. I will share some of my opinions in the following points. The first point is that the early stage is a bit watery, and the sense of crisis is not created enough. In fact, there is no problem in reading from chapter 40 onwards. As long as you know the protagonist's cheats and the ability to train, you can read it smoothly. The protagonist's experiment with plug-ins is actually nothing new, it's just about getting supplies, and there's nothing interesting about it. The second point is about the weight of plug-ins and body training. In fact, the protagonist's biggest reliance is his ability to train his body. He can actually survive without cheats, and his life will not be worse. The effect of this plug-in becomes smaller and smaller as it goes on, and the plug-in is completely incomparable with the coolness of the plug-in, which makes the status of the plug-in very embarrassing. You said that you can get guns through plug-in, then you can also buy guns in Jiangcheng later. Even if human technology advances in the future and uses supernatural materials to make weapons or something, the plug-in will become even more useless. This problem caused what I read to be inconsistent with what I expected, especially because of the title. I wanted to see the protagonist use plug-ins to continuously obtain resources, high technology, superpowers or whatever, and then become stronger in the end of the world and save the world💪. The result now becomes "I am refining my body alone in the last days" The third point is that the Dandelion plan is not reasonable, which is why I don't want to read any more. A human as strong as the protagonist almost overturned in Luochuan City, while others were just dying. I can understand if you send 100 superpowers, but 100 ordinary people, these people have trouble fighting level one zombies. Going thousands of kilometers alone is no different from committing suicide. Wanderers all know to go together. If this really happened in reality, every superior who proposed and executed this plan would be shot. In fact, I can understand the idea of ​​increasing the intensity of the external environment in order to match the protagonist's upgrade speed. However, in Chapter 160, the core part of the apocalypse about the superpowers has not been developed at all, which leads to the gap in strength between other people and the protagonist being a bit too big. Finally, I still want to know what the author wants to write, whether he wants to study plug-ins and how to develop them, or whether he wants to refine his body and gradually become an immortal.

It's acceptable to practice martial arts to strengthen your body. Your whole second uncle is still invulnerable when he comes out. It really doesn't fit in with the zombie apocalypse. If you want to give the protagonist some advice on abilities, you should use the enhancer Evolution Liquid or something like that. If you want the plot to be more natural, you can change it to something like going through the past with different physiques and having a fever. If you really want to write about martial arts, you can accept it if you write the secret book of magic skills that you can find in the apocalypse.

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W made a classic story, Chapter 93, a group of people are about to break the protagonist's legs, This situation in the apocalypse is basically equivalent to killing people, The result is a classic story, the protagonist just fights back and knocks all the opponent's people down. When holding a knife, he must be careful to hit it with the back of the knife, and he must control it accurately to avoid fatality. Goodbye, awesome.

The protagonist Xu Mo has basically entered retirement mode since the mission of garrisoning at the Red Star Industrial Zone in Jiangcheng Shelter ended! The general environment and the protagonist's personal life are extremely comfortable! Thirteen chapters have passed, either leisurely listening to neighbors chatting or lying on a recliner and sleeping. What about the end of the world? What about Goldfinger? The plot of traveling between two worlds to obtain enough resources and materials to improve oneself is also seriously missing, and the sense of apocalyptic crisis seems to have disappeared! What is the protagonist's inner motivation to become stronger? Was there any huge growth in mood? 1. Basically just take a walk and analyze sociology there. The key is that the protagonist is currently low in strength and has no status. He has not formed a small group of his own. He cannot obtain any important information in time. He relies entirely on random guesses. How can he analyze the true shape of the apocalyptic society? The protagonist does not go deep into the apocalypse to improve his strength or power! Where does the leisure and contentment come from? 2. The protagonist's training system has serious flaws! Just relying on the foundation of martial arts obtained from a second uncle who only had a superficial understanding of martial arts theory when he was a teenager, he quickly became a transcendent comparable to a high-level superpower. There is an obvious logical loophole here. The guidance of famous teachers, the inheritance of martial arts, natural materials and earthly treasures, bloody actual combat, and his own hard training and other factors are combined to have any hope of becoming a transcendent. Only in line with the logic of the training system! The Golden Finger double-traveling door can quickly obtain these from other worlds, but the representation in the text is seriously lacking. Only ordinary precious medicinal materials and energy foods are reflected. According to this theory, the peaceful modern society before the protagonist traveled and the apocalyptic society should be full of extraordinary people. In short, it is possible to practice and become an extraordinary person! But the details are lacking and the protagonist's training system is untenable. 3. The prosperity of aerospace technology represented by satellites is not appropriate in this period when the apocalypse has just begun for more than a year. Once the satellite system is fully established and global communications and positioning are fully restored, it will basically be a comprehensive and three-dimensional elimination strike against zombies and mutated creatures in conjunction with powerful industrial weapons! Zombies and mutated biological species with generally low current evolutionary levels cannot be stopped at all. In the early stage, the apocalypse caused by sudden mutations, infections, and huge changes in the environment was basically ended quickly! At least it must be done so that the satellite system cannot continue to maintain signal contact. Occasionally discovering some important information can promote the plot! Factors such as magnetic field disturbances and ionospheric disturbances can make satellite systems unable to sustain signal communications. 4. The description of mutant biological species is too general! The detailed description of the wolves in Qingsongling Town in the early stage is very good! However, the description of the massive flocks of birds forming several thick layers of dark clouds covering the sky in Hongxing Industrial Park is too bland and lacks details! Led by high-level intelligent mutant birds, such a huge flock of birds completely collapsed with just one attack from the pre-apocalyptic weapons of Jiangcheng Sanctuary, without any reversal or splash! The leader of the advanced intelligent mutant birds has completely become a retarded creature with low perception. He has not reacted at all to the previous approaching inspections by a large number of human aircraft, neither blocking nor interfering. The leaders of other small groups of mutant birds can only act instinctively and react. When they encounter the Jiangcheng Sanctuary, they flee in all directions without daring to retaliate. There is no cruelty and cunning of the mutated creatures. Where is the ferocity of the wolves and other mutated creatures that actively attacked various sanctuaries during the eternal night? In short, it overemphasizes the preparedness and courage of the leaders of Jiangcheng Sanctuary, and overly deifies the "firepower supremacy" of pre-apocalyptic technological weapons! The sensitive perception, commanding command, cruelty and treachery of advanced intelligent zombies and advanced intelligent mutated creatures are not reflected at all! Ordinary middle and low-level mutated creatures and mutated zombies have no hunting thoughts at all. Even the hunting instincts of ordinary bears, wild boars, wolves, ligers and other animals before the end of the world are inferior!

To be honest, the journey from Jiangcheng to Pearl Harbor is more than 3,000 kilometers and the danger level on the road means that the protagonist can only make it back alive. The intensity of the danger is too high, and second-level mutants are very common. Even ordinary superpowers have no hope of going back and forth alone~~

This is a road novel. The protagonist has no goal at all. He just goes wherever he goes. I suggest you think about it yourself. Whether you like road novels or not?

The beginning was okay, I traveled through the door to get supplies, then I practiced skills and advanced to a higher level. Later I entered the Jiangcheng Sanctuary and the door became a decoration. I started to practice skills and do tasks. Finally, there was a long-distance mission. I had forgotten about practicing skills to increase my level. I was immersed in driving and killing monsters every day. I didn't know what I was writing?

What I wrote later became more and more embarrassing. They already have golden fingers, and they still write in such a petty manner. If you don't write some small crises, it won't show that the author is in the end of the world. They all have golden fingers, and they still have to fight for bones with the people of the last days.

Limited exemptions are coming in, but only limited exemptions are available. Almost all of them can clearly set the time. Many authors have no concept of time. It only takes 1 minute to travel to the past. The result is all kinds of grinding, various psychological activities, and various sighs. It is better to just write a frame and go in and get it, and then sigh after getting it back. Especially when I saw the clip of the gun room, I opened the door and forced it for five or six seconds. After entering, I went straight to Ada. I fumbled with various firearms again, imagining how powerful the firearm was. I found it was fake, and then I fumbled to find it real. Then I described the gun kit and ammunition in detail... One minute? 10 Minutes is almost enough... Just like many chapter talks, it feels like I want to use AI to expand the content, but the AI ​​uses too much force.

Where is the door? There is no need to worry, there are so many mental journeys to survive in the wilderness every day. Brother, what is your topic? Have you forgotten? It's all beside the point. There are not many apocalyptic articles at the moment, and I really want to support it. After reading your comments on the launch, I also felt that there will be adjustments after subscribing. I patiently read dozens of chapters, but it became more and more bland and tasteless. If this continues, this article will be useless.

I've read Chapter 167 so far. I thought it was pretty good before, but now I feel like I can't stand it anymore. I still don't know what the main plot is. Can I make myself stronger? Build power? To explore the truth about the world? Keep writing irrelevant things, without any excitement or excitement. When you meet someone who is worthy of help and pleasing to the eye, why not give some supplies? If you are poor, you can benefit yourself; if you are prosperous, you can help the world! ! ! Don't you have a way? Aren't your supplies unlimited? Isn't it okay to give something to someone who is pleasing to the eye, just to make your own thoughts clearer? It's really baffling. It's been baffling ever since I took on an inexplicable letter delivery task! In such a dangerous world, thousands of kilometers away, a person is given a gun and drives off by himself? Is it normal to write like this? Since it is written that the protagonist takes on this task, shouldn't the task process be written in a more colorful way? The same self-association, sometimes half of a chapter is written about one's own inner drama, without any outstanding features... I regret spending money to watch it

Hello, fellow book lovers, let me chat with you today First of all, let me tell you why I wrote this book In fact, I mainly wanted to read a book about zombies running rampant in the apocalypse and then wandering and growing up alone, but I didn't like it very much after reading some before, so I rebelled and wrote it myself. Of course, it is also selfish. After encountering a series of changes in 2000, the author has also been saddled with a lot of debt, and he also wanted to see if writing a book could provide him with some additional financial support. I signed the contract after many twists and turns (some friends know the situation), I hope some good results can help me lighten some of my burden. I also hope that everyone can vote and support me, hehehe~ In reality, I am engaged in sociology and psychology, and I also want to use this book to integrate some of my complicated thoughts on the social structure of the end of the world, which can be regarded as refining some of my own utopian thinking. What will the social structure look like after the collapse of civilization? The growth of external threats will inevitably lead to the surviving humans' extreme pursuit of personal force. This extreme pursuit coupled with external factors may lead to the emergence of a new human being (which may enhance personal force through physical mutation). A chain of suspicion and contempt between the old humans and the new humans will inevitably arise. It is also very good to study (can't say too much, it will be shown one by one in the subsequent books). The first large section of this book is actually about personal growth, which will begin after more than a hundred chapters. Everyone can communicate together. After all, it is never good to work behind closed doors. I am not very good at writing dialogue content. This is my shortcoming, so I will try to avoid it in the future. I don't know how it will be written, but thank you for your support. ======================== For the comment area For the comment area, this is my principle. First of all, I think everyone communicated with me in a kind way, because in some places it may be that my experience is not enough, resulting in everyone's reading experience not being very good, but everyone kindly gave me a positive reminder. Of course, if I follow up I will delete some comments. The possible reason may be that some of the complaints you think are insignificant have touched some of my sensitive points, so I will delete the comments based on my own self-defense mechanism. If this happens in the future, I apologize in advance. I hope everyone will forgive me and understand me. Thank you very much~ Finally, will you vote for me? . . I saw that the data on my various votes were terrible. The person who voted the most was actually me. It was so embarrassing. It turns out that the six monthly votes every day are actually welfare monthly votes. I thought that others had voted for many, so I voted all the monthly votes for myself. Now I find that the sky has fallen. . . Who of you can push my data down? . . .

Writing a novel is a waste of time, ① I have no gold fingers, and I haven't written any gold fingers for a hundred or two hundred chapters. ② Control the protagonist through IQ, running around and being pushed around without any proper reason.

After watching it patiently for a while, there was nothing outstanding, but a lot of poison.

Zombies + martial arts are just like ice-American style with fried dough sticks, nothing is right.

I really want to criticize people. I wrote it well before. I picked up the mission for no reason and went to Pearl City. I couldn't figure it out. The mission was unclear. This kind of mission to contact the base is that the matter of sending someone to death was not done internally. The key is that the protagonist accepted it and became noble?

A bunch of people, running to the end of the world to practice martial arts. Ha ha ha ha

I have read hundreds of chapters, and the details are well written, and there are not too many surprises. But the problem is, firstly, there is no female protagonist, and secondly, if you have such a good talent, it feels like you are a person with physical abilities, so what is the use of your talent? As the saying goes, wealth cannot return to its hometown like a journey at night in brocade clothes. You don't have a girlfriend and you don't pretend to be cool. You just read it insipidly. You need to learn how to capture the readers.

Cultural workers must be literate, and they must have common sense even if they are not literate. It's over 20 degrees below zero, not cold at all. In Heilongjiang, this is called warm winter. At minus 25 degrees, I don't know whether zombies freeze or not, but I can go shopping without wearing a down jacket. The temperature in Heilongjiang last year was minus 33 degrees. Do you write zombie stories only for southerners to read? I can still bear this, but the author, you tell me how wolves can survive in temperatures that are more than 20 degrees below zero. I really can't stand it anymore. Is it possible that they are in groups trying to keep each other warm? It still has fur! Can it be colder than me? The author's "Gate" setting is very good, but as a Heilongjiang native, I really can't stand it anymore. Abandon the article.

There are too many psychological descriptions, and there are just some gorgeous words piled together in a dark and dark world, which has a strong AI flavor (as we all know, AI likes to pile up adjectives when writing books, and this book is similar)

I can't stand it any longer. What's the difference between this and the tone of the pornographic article I generated using AI? There are too many useless descriptions and descriptions.

I was relieved when I saw that I was not the only one who felt that the book was getting worse and worse as it was written. I thought it was too picky.

I lost interest after watching 60 seconds!

What I want to watch is The End of the Supernatural Confrontation. I don't know if there are any recommendations.

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The 60-second setting is interesting, but the writing is too wordy. Chapter 13 actually devotes five pages to psychological activities. The second time I tried to read it, I still couldn't read it, and I even gave up faster than the last time.

The writing is like a primary school student writing good words and sentences, with a lot of adjectives and attributives. If you can write clearly in 20 words, you must write 100 words.

In fact, most people look at the door. The 60-second setting is a bit novel. If new elements can be added around this theme, it will be more interesting. For example, in addition to a countdown after entering the door, the void can also automatically pop up the details and locations of all items in the door. This can make up for the lack of 60 seconds and make this setting more realistic. . . Etc. What a pity. Since the Dandelion Project, the author has deliberately weakened the existence of the door. It is really a pity! Then the setting of the crystal core, I think it can be included, but I feel that the author has no own discussion, and it is a bit cliché. Including the Thirteen Horizontal Exercises for Physical Training, which are clearly about martial arts, but they are written to be so powerful that they look like the Nine Yang Divine Art. Personally, I feel that this is a very unfortunate book.