Douluo Dalu: A Clay Martial Soul That Creates All Things

I see absolutely no need for the Baron storyline. Why not write about the Baron's past? Why not write about his entire lineage and his ancestors? Let me see how the Baron struggled. Who is the main character anyway? They even added a soul-battle with the baron's son to decide who gets the soul ring. You're dragging this out for a hundred-year-old soul beast with just one ring; I can't stand it. I can't even imagine how bad it will be when it's released.

The ideas are excellent, with a lot of creative development of martial spirits, essence, spirit, and cultivation techniques. The development path is clear, the goals are well-defined, and the protagonist's charisma is also very good. All the characters have clear plans, and the family and romantic relationships are also well-developed.

Piloting a Gundam is just making you a target; it's useless.

I can't stand it! I don't mind the male lead calling Dugu Yan and Ye Lingling, Little Snake Girl, or Mute Sister in private or occasionally, but you... The narrator keeps using these two names. I'm fed up with you. Even if you don't make me feel nauseous, I still feel nauseous listening to you.

I've noticed that those who write Douluo Continent fanfiction are all just using my imagination. They think that if I understand the Ren and Du meridians, I can create internal energy cultivation methods. The Xuan Tian Gong is, after all, a martial arts world technique. It's already impressive that a modern person could understand cultivation in the past, let alone create various cultivation methods. 🙂 This is hard to understand.

Many people think that once you enter Luoding Academy, Gangzi will be targeting you. If you're at level 8 or 9 or higher, you might have a chance, but for those of you below the passing grade, Gangzi won't even give you a second glance. He might not even remember you until you graduate; it's almost impossible for you to have any interaction.

The protagonist drinks pesticide to change his fate. The starting point of the clay character is too low. In Douluo Continent III, there is a character with a clay dog ​​martial soul who drinks pesticide and his martial soul mutates into a Five Elements Qilin, possessing five extreme attributes. He can easily reach level 99, the Limit Douluo.

The protagonist's soul skills are completely different from everyone else's. At level 29, using his first soul skill, "Fossil to Mud," he could use it for an entire day with virtually no consumption (even while carrying two people, in a space equivalent to a small room). If mud, rocks, and tree roots could be transformed so easily, it would have taken at least 100,000 years.

Having read around chapter 200, I have a suggestion. Honestly, if the protagonist wants to seduce someone, he should just be open about it. The constant explanations and accusations that he's not interested feel rather contrived. The protagonist isn't the emotionally oblivious type found in harem anime; a more straightforward approach would be better.

I couldn't continue reading after getting to the part about acquiring the first spirit ring. The first two months saw him level up to level two, then three months to level three, which was reasonable. Logically, the speed should decrease as the time went on, but he only leveled up five times in a year, averaging one level every two months.