A Guide to Bone Evolution

I previously watched a zombie story where the zombie sold ducks and drank duck blood, and you're a skeleton selling pork and sucking pig blood. 🙂 The plot isn't exactly the same, it's practically identical.

This White Bone Demon is too complacent. With so many ghosts and monsters around, she's just trying to steal their yang energy. The plot is moving too slowly.

The writing is just so-so. It's readable, but not very engaging. There are no exciting moments or hooks, so I don't feel any desire to keep up with the updates. I'm also afraid that if I wait a while to read it, I'll have forgotten all the plot details.

Alright, that's enough, it's finished.

It seems to be the daily life of a wicked cultivator, like Miss Zombie...

He died from poisoning. First, he was seen shooting mosquitoes with broken bones, and then he actually came to this "Little Li Flying Dagger" to ask him to help them get rid of mosquitoes.

This looks like a self-cultivation novel, where the protagonist hides in the bustling city and slowly grows stronger by sucking blood from others. As a result, problems came knocking on their door. Hey The protagonist can't say no Your neighbor asked you to help swat a mosquito, and you really went out of your way to help!

A level 5 pro wouldn't imitate a level 1 newbie, would they?

Quantity has increased, but quality has been sacrificed. The feeling of repeatedly reading through the first 20 chapters, fearing I might miss a single sentence, is completely gone. I need to slow down my writing and go out more to find inspiration. Otherwise, it would be a real shame to abandon this book.

Out of 10 stars, it has no obvious flaws, but also no obvious strengths; it's just an unremarkable, bland piece of writing.