The Invincible Female Ghost Has a Bit of a Love Brain

It's the first time I've read the book for so long and I've posted it to you. The author's previous writing was so good that it tricked me into being a shark. The protagonist suddenly turned from a sincere heart to a sinister clown. The author completely wrote that no matter the combat power or the character, he had to work hard to find the Thunder Fire Stone to save Qiao'er. He just took out the top magic weapon in the Tianzun Conference. All the audience were like merciless praise, and it was just to show off the protagonist's awesomeness. It's really poisonous. I finally understand that you are just like Jiangnan. You write a book without an outline. There is only one picture in your mind that I have to write out. There is no foreshadowing, no context, no logic, no logic. You can't even use cool points to attract readers' attention to cover up loopholes. Inspired writing cannot produce stable output over a long period of time, and it is not suitable for such a long series. Or you should read more books

I saw the poisonous death in Chapter 130 In Chapter 130, the combat power collapsed and the plot was separated. Before, I was careful to rely on female ghosts to get through the plot. The magic weapon has no effect. The ancestor's upper body had just been patched up before. More than 120 chapters were left to tease me. What top-notch magic weapon did Mengmeng use? In the novel, there is authenticity verification. How moral it seems in the front, but how hypocritical and cowardly it appears in the back Finally I know why there is no readership. If there is a difference, I would have to go over and scold you.

In the three golden chapters, nothing can be seen except for a zombie. The rest is all about women and swear words, disgusting supporting characters, and a loser protagonist.

It has been getting weirder and weirder since the Tianzun Conference. In the past, I felt that I was on the right track. Although I was a bit holy, I felt a little bit dedicated to the livelihood of the people. But as the Tianzun Conference began, I felt more and more that it was not the right path, and the same was true for saving Master later on. Unlike a Taoist priest who has the right path, he only sees endless anger for the master. Do you also want to portray a family hero? From the beginning of the Tianzun Conference, the focus of the book completely shifted, and it was really uncomfortable to read later!

The emotional intelligence is too low. Luo Liba is a master of heaven. Isn't it okay to dare to love and hate? A waste

It's really long-winded, and I feel like I can't finish it after writing so many chapters to solve one disaster. Before, there were so many exciting scenes and they were so simple. The big scenes were really sloppy and the small scenes were long-winded and trivial.

I saw Chapter 196... I couldn't stand it any longer. I couldn't stand it anymore. I hung up until I was flying. The protagonist could just lie down. I lost sight of it and ran away ヽ(ー_ー)ノ

Great book! 😍😍😍

It's okay, but it feels like the follow-up is like Avengers 5. The main plot is gone after Thanos. I haven't seen my aunt for a long time. The senior sister line has also been on hiatus for a long time. The current chapter of cleaning up thirty-seven evil places feels like a second week. Can there be more plots about the Tiger sisters? It's so cute and lovable.

Dear, please update soon

You didn't send me the royalties, how can I subscribe?

If the author doesn't pay me the royalties, how can I subscribe?

Awesome bro, I don't even dare to dub this latest chapter.

Except for the appearance of the female ghost and the amorous encounter at the beginning, there is nothing too cliché. I would say that the description of the supporting characters around the protagonist is too market-oriented. Nowadays, people read books instead of archeology, so it may be difficult to accept this. Emmmm, the supporting characters are authentic, but their words are too rough, and the title of the book can actually be changed? Let the editor test the waters and recommend the book. If the content is of good quality and the data will not be bad, it is more important to change the book title to a simple and clear title and an introduction containing an outline of the content.

It's well written, but I'm just curious. Did you, the author, sell the hook for review?

I should have thought of it a long time ago. When I saw this cooked meat literature, I should have known who the author was.

I have a few questions about this book. Is it well written? In fact, judging from the content in the early and middle stages, including fighting and daily joy, it is good. It is a little bit poisonous, but I can still read it without thinking. But why do I say early and middle stages? Because I chased Tianshi at two o'clock in the morning. My brain was groggy, and suddenly I felt something was wrong, and I couldn't read it at all. The first one, two aunts, is a plot that everyone loves to hear and watch, and the majority of people like to watch it. However, the homogeneity is too serious. There is no problem if two are combined into one, and it does not affect the plot. It is too facial, and it has to be for the chu nuv complex. Later, a setting was specially made that the two have not slept with each other. To be honest, you are already an aunt, so you can still be like a girl, right? You expect the witch of the Hehuan Sect to be devoted to you and keep you safe, right? Second, in the mid-term, a main line is to clean up the place where demons are raised. They are all very difficult to fight, and they all kill the protagonist. I don't know how I can survive if it is replaced by someone else to subjugate and eliminate demons. This is one, and the second is that you, the Heavenly Master, use so many magical weapons to hit people, and you have to fight hard. When you subjugate demons and eliminate demons, why is it useless? You are all counting on someone to save you, right? The third, still the same sentence, after opening the gong, most readers do not like the Crystal Palace part, but they hate the facial makeup characters too much. Two aunts can be combined into one. I won't talk about it. I don't know what new beauty god is coming out. What role does Tao have? Its role completely overlaps with that of a female ghost. It is not as good as a female ghost. You might as well write a simple and cute little maid, naive and ignorant. After being purified by the ancestor, she turns into a little girl. Like a little pet at any time, she turns into a pendant and wears it on her body. Who wouldn't like to see it? There is no conflict with the current character. The fourth one, the protagonist's golden finger, has no idea what it is used for. What is it for? Pure authors give whatever props they want, and write whatever they want. We accept invincible articles, cool articles, but I didn't mention a bunch of top-level magic weapons before. I took out a bunch of them when I was done and the Celestial Master Conference. I don't quite understand it The fifth one is the same sentence just now. First of all, the character is broken. When fighting ghosts, I don't fight hard and don't burn my soul. After the Celestial Master Conference is over, when I fight my future father-in-law, I just go to death. The fight is completely different from the protagonist's previous character design, and the storyline falls apart. He can write that he stands up for the common people and makes a big fuss; he can write that he fights the small boss first, and finally escapes from the big boss at level 100; You can write that the protagonist cannot defeat them, and then the master and his uncle take action, and the two brothers together take over the entire Celestial Master Alliance. You can write that the protagonist is about to die, and the heroine senses it and appears in seconds. There were so many things to write about, so many successful routes, but he chose the worst route. To be honest, to borrow the words of other book friends, if you keep fighting for the heroine's Gundam, or if you just slay demons and demons all the way, this book will go all the way. You can understand the Celestial Master Conference this way. When fighting monsters, you are going to die. If you don't hold all the magic weapons, the protagonist will be in a life-or-death situation. Behind him was a bunch of top-notch magic weapons that I didn't know where they came from. He chose the full-level boss from the human race, just to win a name for his master? And he was also his future father-in-law, and he completely ignored his little girlfriend The combat power collapsed, the plot collapsed, the golden finger collapsed, the protagonist's personality collapsed, and the female characters were seriously homogenized. By about 140 chapters, there was no need to read anymore. Looking forward, it was still passable. I really chased the book until the early morning, and it was really uncomfortable

Speechless. Why are you still talking about these two junior brothers? No, you can look back. The author said that he is a fan of Meifen. Later, these two people worked honestly and didn't say anything. What? Going back to the day when the author wrote about these two people, did he kill him?

This is not a criticism, just a personal feeling. If the heroine's name is too vulgar, it may reduce the reader's desire to get involved Just like "Ask the Red World", Cheng Cheng is called Cheng Cheng instead of "Cuihua", and Nangong in "The Law of Yuanshi" is called Nangong instead of "Baicai" when he appears. It is enough for the author to give the heroine a very vulgar real name out of some bad taste. It's weird. If the heroine's name is like this, it's really a disaster Just like this book, the plot and details are really good, but at first I saw the character card "Song Meiqin", which is a bit boring, and "Zhao Qiaoer", uh, a bit like the name of the female supporting character (no offense, just personal opinion), I almost crossed it out directly, but the first heroine is "Gu Qingwan" This relatively beautiful name barely offsets this discomfort. emmm, to be honest, in terms of details, realism and plot, this book is really good, so I am willing to spend some time and hope that my suggestions will be helpful to the author

After reading the comments section, it turns out I'm not the only one who thought that after finishing this book

I couldn't stand watching it since the beginning. The two supporting characters are disgusting here. I don't know if they are of low quality or if they are deliberately trying to disgust the readers 😅

What's going on with this book? It's full of words. I'm so tired from reading it 🙂

What's the situation with these two junior brothers? They haven't even finished two chapters yet and they're just trying to cause hatred for the senior brothers.

After more than 100 chapters of yours, it was not written by AI. I will eat it. There is no human touch at all.

Maybe the later chapters are good, but the first few chapters are terrible. I read nine chapters in total and died of poison. The three golden chapters are like turds. The two junior brothers are portrayed like imbeciles, and the Taoist priest is also like a rz. The plot advancement is abrupt, the twists are blunt, and the character dialogue is like a book from 20 years ago. The heroine who appears is also not likeable. This writing style was created by the author 10 years ago?

What the hell are you writing about in the first three chapters? The two henchmen are not only stupid pigs but also have a bad mouth. You can just say it once or twice if you want to establish the character. Damn, this supporting character was called a slut a few times in this chapter. The heroine was also called that. Is the author out of his mind?

Old man

This... Why are so many people complaining? I think the writing is okay, different flavors of grains

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I think there are several aspects: Frequent double quotation marks and the quotes are very "accurate". There are multiple adjectives or adverbs in one sentence, which provide sufficient semantics. There are also precise short sentences that are continuous and can feel like a forced phrase. The tomatoes also have a lot of this smell. I feel like it might be AI polishing or something? Can you explain it to me? It's probably not my misunderstanding.