You Are Asked to Be a Good Grandson, and You Raise a Group of Banshees?

From the beginning of the drought control, there were various 🐶💩. I originally thought it was because the author was in a bad state, but it still looked like this after skipping more than ten chapters. It's so disgusting that you spent so much money on it💩

I couldn't stand it when I saw the bicycle scene, and some people also said that this is the world view set by the author. I can only say that the author's setting is much more distorted than watching Cthulhu. It can be written in any way, and many of them are cobbled together 😰

🤝🤝🤝 Originally, it was okay to write it at the beginning, but as I continued, it completely collapsed, and there was even no content to continue writing. The author may not know why this is the case, so let me tell you. First, the overall outline is not clear. I don't know what kind of main line I want to write. It seems that I just write whatever comes to mind. In order to cater to the trend and the appetite of readers, it becomes a hodgepodge, which is really confusing. Second, the plot is pushed forward too fast. Let's not talk about anything else, just talk about climbing the technology tree. Climb one technology in each chapter, and after a few chapters tanks will appear. So if you climb technology so fast, how will you write later? Can your imagination surpass technology to satisfy readers' appetite? Originally, there was still a lot of content that could be written while slowly climbing the technology tree. For details, you can read "The First Undercover Agent of the Southern Song Dynasty" (although the book has started to make progress after chapter 1200, but before chapter 1200, there is really nothing to say. The main line is clear, the promotion is reasonable, and the space given by the technology tree is also reasonable). Third, the narrative mode. It may be acceptable at first, but in this large explanatory novel mode, I am afraid that readers will not understand whether I am reading a novel or an analysis of the novel, but every content must be explained in the space. Finally, I suggest the author finish this novel as soon as possible. Eunuch, change your mood and pick up your first novel again. At the beginning, you picked up a five-star empress wife. That novel is still writeable, but it is also suspected of being broken. Plan it carefully. Stop being so messy. First, clarify the main plot before writing.

Sometimes the author can stop making the protagonist feel aggrieved. I don't like that anymore. I get inexplicably angry when I see others belittling the protagonist and the protagonist is still happy. I'm just a bad reader. In real life, I just look at people's faces. I still suffer from this when I read novels😓 (I'm also convinced, I'm a bit too emotional, I'm sorry＞＜)

How did the ancients ride bicycles even if they were wearing the same clothes?

In fact, it's good to write about the banshee, and the Lingju part is quite nice. There is no need to use technology to come up with that bicycle, not to mention that bicycle chains may not have been made in ancient times, and things like iron are not controlled by the state...

It is strongly recommended to build a three-wheeled bicycle. The efficiency of a three-wheeled bicycle is too great.

Starting from more than 140 chapters, there is no need to read it. It is a piece of shit. I feel that the protagonist is a retarded person. He brought his strongest combat power and ran to solve the case, but the key was still played around. For the sake of water word count, you write well. If you want to make money, water numbers are fine, but you can't feed it💩ah, it's still the same after skipping seven or eight chapters, bye

The male protagonist drugged people for three days and the female protagonist touched them. You like this, right?

The author seems to have changed, and the following is a bunch of history. Newcomers can leave directly.

Bicycles are a bit poisonous, let's not talk about whether they are capable of manufacturing them. In that context, bicycles were a completely loss-making business and the cost was too high. Even an imaginary world cannot explain this poisonous point. Ordinary people cannot afford them, and rich people don't need them. The main plot was originally well written, but now it feels disconnected.

The writing in the back is messy, sudden wisdom, inexplicable gods and men, and long-term considerations, is it more important to control drought or to be a monster? There is a dragon, is it difficult to rain, a little relief is a little, rubbish, abandoned the book

The author changes his waistcoat for a long time, eunuch. The author's waistcoat has five crowns, Juechen, three crowns, and Lingguan. I hope you can add more.

Talent, the protagonist is a holy grandson, and he can be called a big boy, Sheng. I really don't know what to say. Does everyone think that they are hard-headed?

With just a few chapters of 130, the story of the severe drought in Liaocheng is completely unwatchable, and you can't watch it without thinking. The character loses its power to propel the plot from the very beginning. I don't know if the author's outline is gone or if someone has been replaced. Author, your online article is better than the main text. The cool points in the YY article are great. The plot setting in Liaocheng is very confusing. It is difficult for me to understand the choice of a country's heir apparent who is drugged by his subordinates. How many members of the protagonist group secretly went to provide disaster relief? ? Do you provide disaster relief or solve crimes? Even if someone is responsible for the disaster, the first priority is to provide disaster relief. Also, Lu Qing's character, the Holy Son, is pretending to be sick? Is this what makes you so troublesome that you can't even come off stage? Personal comment: 130 chapters ago! You can watch it during the plot of the severe drought in Liaocheng. After that, it is not recommended to separate it too seriously. It's like an expired tin can that tasted good at first and then went bad. Author, have you sold your account? The first part of the plot is interesting and short, but the second part is so boring that it just feels like shit.

Which editor recommended this? Where can I block the book recommended by this editor? Can I see the editor-in-chief's name? Can such a person be an editor-in-chief? The starting point is that we have no money and can't recruit people?

The part about dealing with the drought in Liaocheng was written in the same way as 💩. The character of Prince Lu Qing was completely ruined. The protagonist looked like a fool. Did he hire a ghostwriter? Two comparisons

The original author died miserably due to an incurable disease. Starting from the drought chapter, it was continued by the original author's incestuous son, which is completely wrong.

The front is fine. I ordered them all. Then. What the hell. The bull's head is wrong and the horse's mouth is talking nonsense. The plot doesn't connect. Previous settings. The back is the same as what. Me. Abandoned

I'm the only girl?

A new person has written it, so you don't need to read it. The most recent updates are all defenses. I just said that I felt something was wrong when I saw his brother suddenly starting to make small moves. Inexplicably, he was still a close friend at the beginning. Although there was a bit of awkwardness between the brothers, it was because the brother was a little tsundere. Now he suddenly started to win over his direct descendants. The "goblin" in the title of the book is getting weaker and weaker, and it doesn't have that flavor anymore. And now that the author has published a new book, he must have sold it to a studio and gone.

I was familiar with seeing the remnant used as a spiritual lamp, but when I saw this sentence, I suddenly remembered where I had seen it. I went out to check, and it turned out that it was your kid who cut off the five-star empress with a cut-off beard, and now you are doing this again? The name of the protagonist has not been changed, the name of the empress has been directly used, and a new book has been opened directly through a small account, right? Thanks to your book, it is still one of the few subscriptions I have.

The new writing is so greasy. You can't say it. If you say it, you will be banned. It's such a big official authority. Haha.

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Anchor, why is your new book about Girl Ghost removed from the shelves?

666, I have been ordering more and waiting to be fattened and slaughtered, but I got swine fever and the pig died.

The book is gone? I just read a few chapters yesterday Who reported it to be blocked? Can it still be released? I think Lao Liu's Reborn Civil Servant is no longer available. Every order is worth 100,000 yuan. Good luck. I just need to revise it and release it. After all, after a year of hard work, you finally wrote a book worth 10,000 orders.

Your grades plummeted and your mentality collapsed?

Has it been reported? I finally found a good book, but you took it off the shelf

I haven't watched it for just a few days and it's gone? ? ? ? What's going on? Are you writing unscrupulously, or are you jealous?