Battle Through the Heavens: Crossing Between Two Worlds with Douluo Dalu, I Forge an Emperor with Godhood!

1. The protagonist is the martial spirit of Blue Silver Grass. It can obviously be written as the true form, but it must be written that Blue Silver Grass is disgusting. 2. The protagonist is deliberately set up to not understand Douluo's world view, which is very disgusting. 3. The protagonist's mind is not like that of a second generation, with no plans and no goals. The first ten chapters of this book are very discouraging. If you can endure it, you can try it.

What kind of elixir is the most famous one in Doupo? The martial spirit is directly in the elixir furnace, which is not much better than you and the Blue Silver Grass. What, you also want to be haunted by your own mother?

Awakening the blue silver grass against the sky, what, you also want to be entangled by your own mother?

The protagonist is the son of Tang San and Xiao Wu, right. The Blue Silver Emperor has the only martial spirit plus the second martial spirit of the Soft Bone Rabbit. The author probably wants to recognize Tang San and Xiao Wu as his parents in the future, saying that he has traveled from the future. I understand the author's little ingenuity.

Is the second martial spirit really the soft-bone rabbit? Author, are you serious? It's just the Blue Silver Emperor. What the hell is a soft-bone rabbit?

I really beg you. The first martial spirit is Blue Silver Grass, which is poisonous enough. What a pity.

It's too abstract. The second martial spirit is a rabbit, and the protagonist's martial spirit is the rabbit man♂️lang🤣. But to be honest, I feel a bit disgusting. The grown man has rabbit ears 🙄

It's hard to break down when the protagonist is vague about the plot.

Other places are fine, but even with your third soul ring, the soul skills given to you are too rubbish, right? This is your ten-thousand-year soul ring, but its effectiveness is completely overshadowed by Dai Mubai's thousand-year soul ring. Look at what the Thousand-Year Soul Ring does: "The muscles of the body swell, and black horizontal lines appear on the skin. Within half an hour of transformation, the resistance to abnormal conditions, attack power, defense power, and strength are doubled at the same time. Self-strengthening amplification skills" How can your ten-thousand-year soul ring only increase your mental power by 20%? Don't you feel that compared with this, what is your ten-thousand-year soul ring?

The plot is pretty good, you double wear it. It's just that the martial spirit is not very good. If you really don't know how to write martial arts, you can go to Xiaohongshu to find a bunch of martial arts. The soul skills of Wuhun have been thought out for you. I don't even know what kind of fanfic you are writing about the double-crossing protagonist Douluo? You don't even know the main character's plot, so you can persuade almost half of them to leave.