Civilization Simulator

1. There are a lot of bugs. The population reproduction and martial arts training in the deduction have become systematic. Although it is a low-level martial arts, why can't the population reproduce? In the past 300,000 years, the population has been less than one million? 2. It was said earlier that there are eggs in the dungeon, and you have to buy them with credit points. This means that chickens can be raised in the dungeon. Otherwise, where would the eggs come from? Why did the protagonist die when he got chicken trisomy? Is there a noble area in the dungeon? I haven't seen it written yet 3. In this deduction, the protagonist has no participation at all and just reads the data. Since there is no participation, why would the human beings in the deduction think that things like martial arts are given by gods? Isn't that what people are born with? There are too many logical loopholes. Let's take a snack. I have only read less than 10 chapters. It's hard to imagine how many bugs you have in the back. If you want to think about it, I haven't seen it. This subject has been out for many years. How can the deduction civilization be described in a straightforward manner?

A novel with obvious advantages and disadvantages. Advantages: The subject matter and settings are quite good. It is a mutant simulator that uses civilization as the main body to conduct deductions. It gradually unlocks the world view and the truth, supplemented by the apocalyptic background. In the later stage, it can turn to lead the human race to the surface and save the world. The future is promising. Disadvantages: The content of the evolution of civilization cannot withstand scrutiny, but it can be looked at without thinking, so the problem is not big. But the rhythm is not good, and there is no focus on reality and simulation content. I have been writing about simulation content in the front, and suddenly there are more than ten chapters of real-world content in the middle, and it is still a lack of nutrition to learn to get stronger.

Chuangshiliu does not have the highest level of writing, and it is definitely a piece of cake when written.

The deduction is good, but the reality is less

When engaging in the creation stream, civilization should not start with early Homo sapiens. This would be very troublesome and would cause problems with the time acceleration rate. The Paleolithic Age stuck with Homo sapiens for 3 million years, and the Neolithic Age followed 10,000 years, and then 4,000 years passed quickly through the Bronze Age, Iron Age, Steam Age, Electric Age, and Information Age. If you start with early Homo sapiens and accelerate at a constant rate, you will waste most of your time in the Paleolithic Age. Civilization in the true sense is only in the last 10,000 years.

A mere thousand-year-old monster. How can I defeat China's 5,000-year heritage? I don't know what to say.

Haha, you can tell from the introduction that this is a no-brainer.

There are a bit too many paragraphs. Why are there only one paragraph in two sentences?

At first glance, as a newbie, this idea is good, but the writing skills are too poor. The three golden chapters have no feeling at all. They are boring and boring. I don't want to read anymore.

Write less about reality, reality is too boring