Douluo: My Method of Death Is Divided into Three Parts?

Too damn alive, let's have another main god space. Anyway, this Gu field is not short of one or two.

Being free is not a reason for you to write a bunch of meaningless plots. I'm not here to read something that's 600,000 words long and still stuck at the beginning. I thought a 600,000-word plot would at least reach the point where Shrek can advance the plot... You've made a lot of mistakes. If the element is added, these things become things that drag down the plot. Even if you open three, it is theoretically impossible to drag it to 600,000 words and still not get a soul ring. I think you really need a way to die Others at least start to get frustrated in the middle and late stages, but what about you? How long does it take to start watering in the early stage?

I said you really did this book. It's the first time I've seen so many books.

Is there such a large number of time-travelers coming to Douluo?

I'm so crazy, I can only see half of it even if I try my best

I like it, it looks good and lively, come on

What can I say, there are a lot of things sewn, but the story line is not advanced very much. It keeps telling the story and what is the perspective? There are dozens of pictures, all of which are on the clone of the master of the fightingthree planes

I have finished watching it now. It is very exciting and free, but there are too few. Speaking of which, can I mention Huo Yuhao's perspective? I have Dou Yi and Dou Three, and I started to play invincible. I started to be curious about Dou Er.

If I block this memory gem, it will be useful when I turn the tables later.

Who can tell me what the plot is and what the progress is?

I'm sorry that I couldn't get the author to use his full strength. I was forced to quit in the first chapter.

I feel that the protagonist of Dou San is too frustrated. Anyone can try to plot against him. Can the protagonist be more stable? And Dou Er has too little plot, it is like air, and nothing has been promoted at all Then Dou Yi's situation is even worse, giving people a sense that there is no way to advance the plot Finally, it is the content, which gives me a clear understanding What can be described in one sentence has been exhausted for many paragraphs. You now have 600,000 words, but you are still standing still at the age of six, and the distribution among the three periods is not even enough. What plot are you promoting? From Chapter 112 to the Digital World, and then to Chapter 249, you theoretically have to stay in the Digital World for sixty days. Do you want to write a digital world adventure of hundreds of thousands of words in this place ( And even if you describe other things, each description will take four or five chapters to start. And why do you need to spend such a long space to introduce the history of the digital world? Why can't you simply say that there have been many disputes, but they were all solved by the four holy beasts of the host, Morning Star? Generally speaking, although it is very lively, it is too slow, too slow, and the proportions of the three periods are unevenly distributed. 3>1>2, 2. The current plot only has one escape from the Duke's Palace. If you want to see the real beginning, you have to wait for at least three years. And at the moment, I don't know what you will come up with when you are nine years old...

Can there be more plot during the Dou Er period? The perspective is too little.

Is this kind of novel with a lot of time-travelers also popular in Douluo Continent now?