The Spirit Card Era: Beginning with the Stone Monkey

This kind of mythical and legendary card-making flow always feels like it has a high possibility of explosion. There is an old eunuch who is wandering in this field and has collected all the taxes from the field of starting point 200 years later. Read a book of eunuchs. I hope you are not the trumpet of that old eunuch, and I hope you will not degenerate into the behavior of your predecessors.

Why is it monkey again? Is there no new way to write about this subject?

I found two problems. 1. The Lingming Stone Monkey is a spiritual monkey bred from the Sky-Building Stone. It cannot be a white grade, not to mention it has two powerful skills. It should be an ordinary monkey with some spiritual monkey blood to be a white grade. 2. Without plug-ins, just memorizing a book and telling a story to create a card is too childish. The society you traveled to is not a primitive society. A society with extraordinary power should have a higher power system with literary works created by fictional fantasy. It is your turn to dominate with earthly cultural works

After reading the introduction, I put forward some of my opinions. I think there are too many themes for this type of novel and are too complex. One theme is enough to write about. At most, two or three similar themes should be selected. This book is about Journey to the West and the Three Kingdoms Water Margin. It is not easy to balance the combat power relationship between different themes.

It's already the interstellar era, and the ascending channel is still blocked. All human forces are from aristocratic families, right? I don't dare to say it online or in public places, why not spread it through word of mouth? How do you sanction it? Especially the fifth chapter of the classic left-brain exchange. Oops, you have guessed that there is some connection. Let me tell you, if you guess there is a connection, you can tell. God is so amazing. Common people are idiots. How about you make another one and set those with high IQs as aristocratic families, and those with low IQs as common people.

It's a good idea, but the writing is so confusing

If you encounter any bad points, please tell me and I can change them! o(╥╥)o

All I can say is to read more novels and see how they are written.

Personally, I feel there is a problem with the priority. The title and introduction of your book are all about cards, but the content is more like a normal fantasy novel. The cards are just a gimmick. Some people click on the introduction to read the content of the cards. But if you write some in the east and some in the west, the spread is too big, and it is easy to lose some people.

Is there any use in joining this stupid guild? When I came up, the person who paid the fee disappeared and I still questioned him.