
In Swallowed Star, I Awaken a Martial Arts System
人在吞噬星空,觉醒武侠系统
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- Myriad Worlds
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Does the author really think that an expert in the world of martial arts can be ranked in Swallowing Starry Sky? There are tens of billions of planets that swallow up the starry sky human race, and the higher the bloodline, the higher the talent. In an ordinary martial arts world, the bloodline is probably only the 10th level. Can he also be ranked among the hundreds of millions of human geniuses? Zhang Sanfeng or Dugu Qiufei are at most a planet-level person on Earth.
If you write about the understanding of ancient saints, I can accept it, but if you write about the understanding of martial arts characters, I really can't accept it. They are all the best in the world of martial arts, and they cannot be invincible for a thousand years A Qing, Zhang Sanfeng, Huang Shang, the sweeping monk, the founder of the Xiaoyao sect, and Brother Gou, which one is stronger and which one is weaker? Who can win when Dugu Qiufei faces them?
To be honest, if you really want to write about Tomato Heavens, you might as well ask about it in Wild Age, Snow Eagle Lord or Feijian.
The levels of these three books are clearly set and not complicated. From a timeline perspective, Fei Jianwen and Cangyuan Tubi published Devouring Starry Sky, Snow Eagle Lord, Wild Era Star Transformation, and Coiling Dragon relatively earlier, which are more complete, because the previous books only pursued numerical enhancement and were all about accumulation of destructive power. Tomato's Flying Sword Questions writes about the art of cultivation, comprehensiveness, system, and many magical powers unique to the avenue. Both are Xianxia, Manghuang Ji's combat power is several orders of magnitude greater than that of Fei Jianwen. But from the perspective of the construction and perfection of the practice system, the Feijian system is far more attractive than the Wild Age system.
Has the author read the original work? Bolan is a genius who only appeared in the Ten Thousand Era. You are really talented when you wrote it in the Ten Thousand Era.
The setting is okay, but I know too little about the original work. If it is 8.2 Billion years from the earth's era, then Ganwu has fallen three times, as you wrote, twice. In addition, the level of the Nine Swords is similar to Bolan or slightly higher. In other words, the Nine Swords should have been published once in tens of thousands of epochs, and up to 100,000 epochs. Yuan, far less than the one who came out in tens of millions of eras, and even Bolan, who came out in tens of thousands of eras, has broken through the sixth level. How could Coty, who was born in tens of millions of eras, only break through the sixth level? He must at least break through the eighth level, or even the ninth level, otherwise he will not have time to break through the cosmic-level Tongtian Mountain.
It's really hard to watch. The genius of billions of years has been written so rubbish by you that he has been abandoned.
There are too many anchor points, and it feels like the protagonist has been written as a fool by the author. There are several people who are born immortal with genetic levels exceeding 1,000 times 😅😅
Hey, the introduction and content have all been changed?
Let me recommend a few to you
Isn't it just martial arts? What did you summon? I recommend one to you, Meng Qi from the later period of The Lord of the World. If you haven't seen it, you can go and find out about it. Don't ask why he is a martial arts man, because the label given by the author at that time was martial arts. Even the other side can fight with Lord Chaotic Source. Fighting against the Swallowing Starry Sky is not that simple.
The original Nine Swords is about the Space Master. The author has changed it all. It has been changed into a time-based one. It is poisonous. Please change it as soon as possible 😅