Red Mansion: Aiming for the Wind and Moon

If you sign a contract, try to finish it as much as possible.

During the new book recommendation period, it's really important to follow up! ! Please don't keep books! ! Although the author promises that I will not be a eunuch and will try my best to finish every story whether my grades are good or bad, my grades will really affect my enthusiasm for creation! So I urge you all to try your best to read the latest chapters every day, please! ! (Be greedy and ask for a wave of investment by the way. The total investment will be one hundred. I heard that there will be one more recommendation spot. Thank you!)

Watching Red Mansions is just like watching a garden opera. It doesn't matter if it's about a person with a foreign surname. It also includes The Deer and the Cauldron. This shows how confident you are in your own writing skills.

The writing is quite good, and the writing style is also good. I just need to write less about The Deer and the Cauldron. The Bird Eats the Deer and the Cauldron + The Red Mansion is too abstract. The author is confident in his writing style. If I don't say it, I'm afraid that the author will leave the readers after writing. In addition, the Red Mansion fans are here to take in girls and change their lives. It's best not to miss the girls, but I don't know if the author's writing style can withstand the plot.

Let's complain after seeing the author's acceptance speech. Ximen Qing's good grades do not affect the fact that it is a rubbish subject. I always pay attention to the new book list. After Ximen Qing's book, I have seen at least a dozen or twenty books about other worlds in Red Mansions. It is difficult to collect more than 500. Yours may even be the best one among this batch of stitching monsters.

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The writing style is okay, the world view is a fusion of "A Dream of Red Mansions" and "The Deer and the Cauldron", which is quite innovative. The plot setting is natural and reasonable, and it is interesting to read. However, I feel that the main line is not very clear and the plot direction is a bit bland. The most important thing is that in the creation of the protagonist's character, the personality is not distinctive enough. The protagonist is more like a standard kid from aristocratic family. The rules are the rules, but he lacks the charm of the unique character and lacks some qualities that people can remember at a glance. For comparison, you can refer to the protagonists of the two original works: · Jia Baoyu is a playboy who is incompetent and useless, but rebellious and sentimental at heart; · Wei Xiaobao comes from a scoundrel in the market, a slippery and naughty person, but he is loyal and willing to take risks at critical moments. They all have distinct personality contrasts and memory points. On the other hand, the protagonist of this game has a vague positioning: it is said that he follows the route of an emperor and a hero, and lacks courage and heroism; It focuses on daily life, but lacks romantic charm and a bit of romantic energy; there is no contrast and lacks a clear memory point. I hope the author can deepen the protagonist's shaping in the future, making the protagonist more three-dimensional and have his own special charm. But overall it's a food item🌿 and worth a look👀

Why is it said that Jiawei Xiaobao is a failure? It is another type of pig's feet that is very vivid and naturally attracts attention. . .

I've written almost two hundred chapters and haven't had close contact with a Jin Chai yet. You'd better not write about The Red Mansion. It's so procrastinating and grinding.

Very well written. The reading feels smooth, the plot is reasonable and interesting, and there is nothing wrong with the wording.

It's so fragmented that I can't stand it! The Deer and the Cauldron basically has no logic

After watching it, the plot of The Deer and the Cauldron at the beginning was really a drag. Especially when I got to Mao Shiba, I skipped a few chapters. You can still see the ones behind. It's not that there can't be a plot like The Deer and the Cauldron, but the painting styles of the two really don't harmonize. The subsequent plot is based on the garden drama, the writing is average, and it can be seen as exciting! Don't you think the protagonist has some shortcomings? Just because he is a prince, he doesn't have much power. I feel that he is not worthy of the identity of the prince and the protagonist in the readers' minds. There is also the plot of The Deer and the Cauldron. Although it has begun to change in a positive direction, it is a bit slow and needs to be more radical. The plot of The Deer and the Cauldron should be treated as a golden finger for the protagonist. The treasure in Chapter 42 has come to be used, and the protagonist also knows the location. Accelerate the progress of cultivating forces. Some of the things the protagonist does have the impact of unknowingly becoming the biggest rebel. Isn't it great that underground forces can fight against official uniforms? The biggest rebel is myself!

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I didn't read it carefully, but I always felt it was a bit bloated. I always liked to write something like "you can think of a lot of things with just a look or a small movement", and then you will calculate this and that, and you will find it to be procrastinating and suspicious of hydrology.

I haven't watched it yet, but with so many harem openings, is there a golden finger for the protagonist? After all, ordinary people shouldn't be able to do it.

Among the fans, a good book! !

Not bad, but the word count is too few

I originally saw Red Mansions + The Deer and the Cauldron, and I wasn't very interested, but I had never seen this combination before. After clicking it, I found that it was much better than expected. The integration was quite natural, and the characters all fit the original work quite well. It's almost 50 chapters, there are no bad points, and the plot is okay. It's worth looking forward to writing more about the protagonist's personal growth in the context of the times.

The writing is very good, keep up the good work

Many of the characters described are very memorable. The reason for the mediocre results should be poor rhythm control. How many attributes should be included in writing about Red Mansion? It would be too unexciting to keep things stable like this.

The writing is good, the characters are plump, and the plot logic is clear, but it's not enough to read 😍

When I first read it, I thought the writing was good and the story was novel, so I had the motivation to keep pursuing it. I kept following it until it was released and subscribed. I was looking forward to it, hoping that the story would have twists and turns and climaxes. But in the end, it was just trivial and trivial. A novel was completely written as a family diary. Let's put it on the bookshelf for now. It's a pity to abandon it because it's tasteless. There's no need to subscribe for the time being. For me,

The writing is very good, and the plot is also good. It combines the story of The Deer and the Cauldron. I hope there is no inner strength or anything else, otherwise it will feel weird. I like to read long stories. I hope it will cost more than 4 million 😆

The author has changed his vest and is still a eunuch. The narrative is too cumbersome.

The author of the previous book of "Wan Tian Qing" I told the author that it would hit the street, but the author blocked me. Then the author is also a capable double book. He wrote "Wan Tian Qing". When Wan Tian Qing was first written and not on the shelves, I said that "Wan Tian Qing" would be popular, and "Wan Tian Qing" was indeed popular. Besides, this book, the author's writing style has been in the past two years. I have read very good ones among Red Mansions fans. So far, this book has brought me surprises, especially after reading many Red Mansions fan novels. This surprise is really rare. I think this book has great potential and will become a hit! The author is very talented in writing, work hard!

It's well written, but it's a pity that it's a eunuch.

Will there be novels in the martial arts genre in the future, such as Qin Shi Mingyue and Tian Long Ba Bu?

Can you answer the previous question?

Why hasn't it been updated?🤔