Living in the Song Dynasty: He Tricked Murong Fu into Working for Me

There are many flaws, the settings are not perfect, and the details are not good. There are too many inconsistencies. Maybe my ideas have changed as I write, and it seems difficult to understand what the protagonist is thinking. There is a big problem with character creation. The other characters are only set up on one side, which does not affect the viewing. However, the portrayal of the protagonist should have been close to perfection, but occasionally the protagonist is exposed to be hypocritical, cold-blooded and slightly childish. It is difficult to understand why this is done. Overall, he is a well-disguised hypocrite. If this was the original purpose, I can only say that I admire it. Overall, I can watch it but it's not worth spending money on. The back part is very dull.

After reading Shao Song Dynasty, now, I feel that the threshold for reading other historical fans about Song Dynasty is a bit high and boring Song Dynasty can be destroyed, but the world cannot be destroyed, long live the duck≧▽≦

I subscribed to a chapter specifically to criticize. It can be seen that the author does not understand Internet writing at all. The writing is a piece of shit. The writing is excellent and the story is smooth. It is just a piece of shit. If this book becomes popular, I will eat ten pounds💩

If you are a practicing author, you can write a book of 10 million words. If you want to make money, hurry up and join the factory. I'm afraid you'll be hungry when you write a book.

In the capital, he specially rescued the baby from Ye Erniang and sent it to the welfare home of the Song Dynasty. He also emphasized that he was not a living Bodhisattva. The author, you are really a living king of hell. You are afraid that the child will not die, right? It would be better for you to throw it at the door of a random household. I asked Ye Erniang for information on martial arts secrets, and then refused to ask where she had stolen them. If you really want to be a cousin, you still have to erect an archway.

This age is designed to drag out the plot with just a few words. How about suppressing the protagonist with the excuse that he is young, has no strength and power, and should be angry? Is my analysis correct?

Personally, I feel that the plot is really boring, the setting of the protagonist is also lackluster, and I have no desire to follow it.

The author can follow his own pace. As long as there is no cuckold, the poisonous plots of Turtle Man will be fine. The hydrology mentioned above is free anyway, but it will not work if it is too watery to be put on the shelves The second one is slow, as long as it is non-toxic and free, I don't mind. The author decides it himself Rhythm The third history of the Song Dynasty, the fanfic of the Song Dynasty, and the author's original works can be combined to read, use history to spray fandom, or use fanfic to spray history. I think it is a bit magical. The fourth heroine question, do you want to be the emperor, don't be a eunuch? Don't accept it just because it's a girl. There's no need to write about everything you want to see and make old stories. The fifth one is the protagonist's martial arts. You can learn from the 13th year of Tianlong next door. If you have an idea, the protagonist will be original. The name should be cool and the special effects should be awesome. If it doesn't work, Just get Xiaoyao and come up with your own new ideas After all, Qiao Feng is just kidding about Taizu beating you to subdue the dragon. Another point is that Gang Leader Qiao thinks about it, he is much better than Murong Ke In short, follow your own pace, read the comments, and don't believe them all.

I hope it will be written that Wang Yuyan is the number one heroine

You should take a screenshot of Duan Zhengchun's wife, it will easily attract the interest of reading the novel.

The story setting is pretty good, generally okay, but there are a lot of inconsistencies, and the addition of the physical training system is a bit hasty. The pig-like qualifications and understanding set in the early stage are not understood, so what's the point? There are too many contradictions. I have not taken Bei Ming for a long time. I have to wait 10 years before I go. If I take it, I say I will not practice. I will start practicing again on the road while I wait for the practice to be taught. Beggars also writes a lot, making the protagonist see injustice on the road? And then a baby is dealt with casually, not caring about anyone he encounters, and still wants to save the world? When I took Wang Yuyan to the Deaf and Mute Valley, I was completely acting as a tool. Now the protagonist's image has been shaped into a selfish time traveler who is scheming and wants to rebel and become the emperor. He is always on the surface and occasionally reveals his true thoughts. Don't bring too much of the author's thoughts into it, it's going to be so embarrassing now.

It's not like the 60-odd chapters are all about five- or six-year-old children. This way of writing is so brave. No wonder there are so many fierce words in the comment area.

Is the heroine Wang Yuyan coming to see Wang Yuyan?

First, during the period of Zhe Zong and Wei Zong, if the protagonist wanted to be promoted to the Ninth Five-Year Plan, he could only follow the path of a powerful minister in the temple (see Wang Mang and Yang Jian). The best policy was to let the emperor abdicate. To start a rebellion, the success rate was extremely low, and it was also unpopular with the people. Second, the character of the protagonist is very important, and the identity outside is given by oneself. So by maintaining the character of the folk, it is better to fool the gangsters (such as the Beggar Gang) into doing something for you (actually, it is to use moral kidnapping to get them to do something dark for you, the basic method of the temple). Thirdly, this is the time when the old and new parties are fighting. Er Su is still alive, the Six Thieves have not yet risen, and Han Shizhong is still a little kid, so the Six Thieves and Han Shizhong are your first choices. Recover as many subordinates as possible. In addition, find a way to join Er Su's sect to facilitate your future career. It is best to be under Su Che's sect. The struggle between the two parties is a good opportunity for advancement, so you must make good use of it. Fourth, when powerful ministers steal the country, the best time is after Zhezong's death. Before then, it is best to build a good relationship with Queen Mother Xiang. It is best to restore the clan status at this stage. When King Rui is frivolous and unable to rule the world, it is okay to choose Song Huizong who is only 18 years old. According to Empress Dowager Xiang's wishes, she could use the help of Song Huizong to intervene in military affairs. After the death of Empress Dowager Xiang, she used the excuse that King Rui was frivolous and could not rule the world to force Song Huizong to abdicate (this time is best after the implementation of the New Deal, when corruption in the court is the best opportunity to intervene). Fifth, during this period, the Western Xia and Liao Kingdoms were also weak, and the Jin Kingdom also rose during this period, so whether you can regain the Yanyun Sixteenth Prefecture and rebuild the Western Region Protectorate depends on your methods. Off topic, to be honest, I really don't like Murong Fu. He wanted to restore the country, but his usual methods were just like a joke. He didn't go to temples, didn't raise private soldiers, and didn't build a reputation. He only had the slightest means to go to Xixia and work as a spy. With this method, he still wanted to provoke war between countries. It's ridiculous.

Specially rewarded for commenting. The author's writing skills are good, but he doesn't understand web writing at all. The story is sparsely written, and the characterization is difficult to comment on. In the end, you wrote a fanfic, but ended up changing the characters in the original text into a mess... It's amazing!

The writing is a bit disorganized. No clue.

Come on, author! That's fine, as long as it doesn't violate the pace of the story or the pace of life. Insist on yourself not to be swayed by comments and write according to your own outline

Order a chapter and write a review First of all, the writing style is okay The plot is dull, the characters are ordinary, and the main line is not very clear. That is to say, after watching it, you don't know what he wants to express, what he wants to do, and what he wants to achieve in the future? Just like the Dead Sea, it looks vast, but there is no Poland.

It's getting better and better! Come on! I'll give you two tickets

Awesome, it's already very good, just write at this pace and don't worry about anything else

After reading it for so long, the novel is generally very good. It would be better if the author could update it. Thank you.

Qiao Feng died at the age of 33. Murong Bo faked his death in the same year as the Battle of Yanmen Pass 30 years ago, and Murong Fu was already wearing white cloth and kneeling in the mourning hall. In other words, Murong Fu was older than Qiao Feng, and Murong Fu didn't know that his father faked his death. Wang Yuyan appeared at the age of 16, so when Wang Yuyan was born, Murong Fu was not a child but an adult of 18 to 19 years old.

There are 125 chapters with a total of 270,000 words, and each chapter averages 2,160 words. 2K is not enough to stabilize three chapters a day.

I feel like I don't want to read the content before it's put on the shelves, but I want to read the content after it's put on the shelves. But is this reasonable?🤔

Will Qin Shimingyue's novel be opened in the future?

The plot and characters of this book are both unattractive and I couldn't stand it. But the author's writing skills should be good enough, but the entry point is not good and the rhythm is not right.