Zuo Dao Becomes an Immortal and Makes up for the Red Mansion

The protagonist is now the kept Xiao Lanliang, or a cosplayer of a Taoist priest

The most important thing about the romantic scenes in The Red Mansion is that it opens up a harem, but there is a point in how to contain it. Going to bed as soon as they meet is vulgar.

Author, can you handle it well and stop similar plots from happening again?

If you have the intention to poison Jia Jing, who used to be nice to you, you won't kill the people who bullied you before. Good people deserve to be held at gunpoint. This sentence is still rising.

Hurry up, how can you not be popular if you update ten times a day? You just don't update much now, and my friend likes to watch something with color.

I hope that plots like Yangzhou won't appear too frequently in the future, unless you plan to follow ordinary cultivation novels and all kinds of big battles. Mortal forces, cities and areas are all controlled by various cultivation forces. The protagonist has various talents and adventures, and obtains treasures to increase his strength, but the enemies are also constantly upgrading. Every time, he uses all his strength to finally defeat the enemy. . . I don't know if other readers are enthusiastic about this, I just feel 😴

The protagonist's own fate has changed. Just by becoming a Taoist boy, he is as light as a swallow. Jia Jing died early and gained supernatural powers. He is not afraid of killing people. Hasn't the Taoist boy been a bad person in the past few years? Because Tongtian Avenue is all about killing. Isn't it easy to just kill someone in the Red Mansion? You are as light as a swallow and can kill more than a dozen. You can track a group of Taoist priests, assassinate and kill them head-on. You can probably use countless magical powers in one night.

I thought there was something new, but wearing the skin of Red Mansion is still like a fantasy pornographic novel. It's disgusting.

Your protagonist has no clan legislation. There is no moral concept. If you look at it from another angle, you and Jia Zhen are no different. No matter how beautiful you describe the protagonist. In my impression, he is wretched. A good man, even if you are writing a Yuanzi play in Red Mansions, you can't write about the things in your crotch all day long. And you changed my life in just one day. What are your settings?

Don't be like the one I read before. I wrote two chapters about Yuanchun serving the emperor. This is the first time. The author must not write this kind of outrageous plot. If you don't accept Yuanchun, don't write in that direction.

It's the stuff in the original book, hosting a crab feast for Shi Xiangyun, running a poetry club to write rough poems for people, arranging painting materials for people, eavesdropping for a long time and being found framed, saying that Lin Daiyu was bitten by a snake, Jin Chuan went to Mrs. Wang as soon as possible after his death, Xue Baochai, the most popular person in the Jia family. Go up a pole and go to Jia Baoyu's place to embroider his bellyband. Nowadays, the author writes about a high-ranking official protagonist who has extraordinary abilities and is also suave, handsome and rich in gold. If the author writes about Xue Baochai carrying a shelf, you don't write a plot similar to Xue Baochai climbing up a pole, such as everyone at noon Don't blame the readers for criticizing you for the plot where she went to embroider her bellyband during the afternoon nap It's not that I dislike Xue Baochai, but I don't want to write about being dignified, virtuous, and well-managed in the household. It's completely inconsistent with Xue Baochai's setting. It's pretty good for Haofeng to send me to Qingyun with his strength.

If you read the original work carefully, you will know that this girl Baochai has a strong sense of motherhood and is a petty person. The crab feast is so embarrassing.

After all, Zuo Dao is also a cultivator, not like that.

It's interesting to write a novel, but you have to deal with it to the death

Xiang Ling

Edition 89

My evaluation is the abridged version of Liu Huangshu

Come on, I've read so many Red Mansions, some pure garden dramas, some combining chaotang and garden dramas. This one doesn't write much about chaotang, but it's the most comfortable one to read.

Edition 89

Qian Xue fell asleep several times, but she didn't sleep again in Chapter 65. I remember it was hinted that she slept twice for the first time. Can I still read Chapter 65 after Forgetting Three Times?

Is there a family bucket or something like that? Hey, it doesn't matter if there isn't one.

I finished reading Chapter 300 in two days. Are there any other masterpieces?😠

Edition 89

The update is too slow. Please update it faster.

Shadow version

Shadow version

I don't know why, but the author's segmentation looks very uncomfortable😣

Edition 89

The 89 version is actually really good, but the color tone is like a ghost.

Why are you so sluggish in cleaning up the Lai family? Your character is completely ruined.