From Immortal Clerk to Heavenly Venerable

He took the first place in the pig's trotter exam all the way, and even graduated and became an official in his freshman year, which made the third-year Taoist students feel inferior for a lifetime. After being an official for three years, he took the ladder and saved 5,000 people from emptying a cave to build a foundation. He is so awesome and high-profile. The author, why do you call this Gou? The content has nothing to do with the title of the book. What do you think? I just want to use the word "gou" to gain traffic, rubbish! There is no need to look at the rest. That awesome thing can go directly to the sky. It is empty and big. Everything else is useless and has no meaning at all.

A poor family means that the ancestors have been wealthy. The protagonist's family has been farming for generations. This is not a poor family at all, but a muddy family.

How can this second uncle be so short-sighted as a businessman? Being able to sign up successfully means that he is already at the first level of Qi training. He knowingly breaks off relations with an immortal cultivator and refuses to accommodate him even though he is going for an exam. This is not something that a qualified and accomplished relative can do.

Cheating is no better than others. The protagonist also broke through one month earlier than others. In the March period, the protagonist's fate, proficiency panel, and chance blessings will give you a trace of 52 auras in two days. The proficiency reaches a breakthrough in one day and two months in Qi training. According to three days and one silk, 180 days, you, a supporting character, only have 60 silks of spiritual energy. Where did you get 40 silks of spiritual energy?

The further you go, the less you can stand it. It's a good thing that there wasn't much involvement in the plot of Immortal Dynasty in the early stages. After reading later, I discovered that the setting of the Immortal Dynasty in this book is completely opposite to the cultivation of immortality. The so-called Immortal Dynasty is exactly the same as the ancient feudal dynasty, which is denying the concept of immortality. You have denied the idea of ​​cultivation, so why write a novel about immortality? As for the setting of being controlled in cultivating immortals, what kind of super power does it take to do it? It's funny that such a powerful person can't even destroy monsters and monsters, and even established a feudal dynasty. There are no other immortal cultivators of the same level to slap him down

Overall, it's good, but some plots need to be carefully conceived, and some are quite inexplicable 1. As mentioned earlier, the second uncle is related to the grandfather and the protagonist. I thought he was the second uncle. The author can't tell the difference between the uncle and the uncle. It was not until the next few dozen pictures that the second uncle's name came out 2. The protagonist went to the exam immediately and arrived at the examination room. He didn't know how many admission places there were. Several examiners were talking about it 3. The announcement of the scores was quite funny. The second one was announced first, then the third one, and finally the first one. Forcibly pretending to be cool, just three, two, and one is enough, how can there be two, three, and one 4. Zhang Daochang knows that the protagonist has amazing talent, and does not provide resources to the protagonist. From the beginning to the end, I felt that no help was provided, and the treatment of the disciples who entered the house was a bit poor 5. The protagonist went to Fucheng immediately, and Taoist Zhang introduced his connections in the county to the protagonist at a banquet, which made me even more confused. I changed a big map, what is the use of the connections in the county? I can't figure it out Such as this makes me confused. There are a lot of things that are a bit baffling. Maybe some of them are due to my misunderstanding. If there is any inappropriateness, please feel free to comment.

You're selling dog meat on a sheep's head. You've been pushing people all the way to say that Goucheng is a god. Is he a real dog or a fake?

This kind of novel that was crazy about Jenga in the early days is a bit like that book about how to become an immortal without money, but that book collapsed later, and this one is probably going to be too soon. The writing in the early stage of Qi training was too exaggerated, and there is not much room for imagination later. It should be the scene where the Crazy Tyrant Ice Shock Sky Spear stabbed the Shadow Emperor Crayfish, Jenga over Jenga, it's not interesting at all

I don't understand where Gou is

How to put it this way, many of the settings and parameters in this book are very poisonous. When the first-level high-grade magic weapon for cultivating immortals was first released, it was said to be rare and could only be sold by the big families. If you put thousands of taels of silver behind it, it disgusted me to death. Also, when the author writes about the political system, he writes in a mess. If you don't understand it, just write less. I'm confused when it comes to explaining the setting, but there are still some merits in the fighting of cultivating immortals, spells and techniques, and the character of the protagonist is still okay. But your title is "Go to Heaven", and I don't see it. The content is just a traditional routine, some big competition, the protagonist is a dark horse, counterattacking all the way, is this Gou? And the protagonist is modest, you can just open and shut up and get lucky, but no, what are you doing if you can't get on the stage?