I Tie Things up with Paper

Once I write about emotional scenes, it becomes so ugly

It's nice to write like this, but don't do those plots about the love between children.

Well, this can be written as well. Why the results are slightly worse. It's pretty. Quite interesting. As for the shortcomings. It's just that the layout is slightly worse. Isn't it true that the realm is innate and not designed? In terms of world view, there is a little less suspense. The sense of anticipation is a little bit less. Because I am comparing it with that masterpiece, Dusk Divide. Does it count as a match? I think it is an exaltation and a comparison with God. It has a little folk flavor. If I had this problem, I would go crazy. Why do you care so much? The foreshadowing for the future is not in place. Think less. For example, dusk divides. There is the mystery of the emperor's death. Shiting Covenant Secret Group. The mystery of the natal temple. The mystery of ancestral relics. Very fulfilling. Here, there are fewer things hidden in the author's plot. Then, it's not that kind of extreme writing. The onset of pleasure is a little slower. The connection between the short stories is also smaller. Then the results may be slightly worse. I think the author can think more. Write foreshadowing, pull hooks, and bury mysteries in advance. This may be the direction of progress. Overall, very good. It's pretty. A little bit hollow. Not fulfilling enough. There are few mysteries, few realms, and few cultivation systems. Both can be strengthened. Very good article. Nothing compares to the dusk boundary. Completely crushed by the masterpiece. Hahaha. Indeed, this is worse than the masterpiece. Much better than ordinary novels. It's pretty good, come on. Yes, let me say one more thing. For example, dusk divides. The villain's strength keeps doubling. The ghost in green clothes becomes the national master and becomes Tai Sui. Moreover, these villains are closely related. It can push the story to the climax. At the end, solve Tai Sui. This is one of the places where God is awesome. Think too little. This is the worst weakness of this book. The content is not substantial enough. Not enough about the future. Okay, that's all. It's very good, better than ordinary novels. Being crushed by the masterpiece in all directions. Hahaha. However, it is also well written. It's still very beautiful. Come on, come on.

I thought it was the spooky paper-man game.

Very well written, not like a newbie

It can be cut. The reason is very simple. In this world context, you cannot directly write that if you have grievances, you will turn into a ghost. Otherwise, whoever dies will have no grievances. In the ancient social background, a few people died without grievances. In ancient times, people either starved to death, were killed, or died of illness. If it is not a peaceful society, there must be other conditions, such as the house gathering Yin energy or someone deliberately doing this. In simple terms, there is a special tree next to it.

It's watchable, but nothing outstanding.

This book is ruined by three golden chapters.

Yes, but the amount is too small!

A new book has been opened. Super Dimensional Overlord cannot be found and is not displayed on the author's homepage.

So far, my writing seems to be going well, no big problems.

I borrowed the building to promote the book, Cyber×Western Fantasy. The title of the book is "The Magician of Eternal Night: From the Alchemical Warhead to the Seat of Truth" Thanks for borrowing the building

In the first plot, the female ghost's resentment was simply inexplicable.

Why are so few people speaking?

How to put it, it's like a plate of overnight food. If you can bear it, keep ordering it. If it doesn't work, give up. The writing is on the young side and white. The plot is all about fighting.

Why don't you write the book "Super Dimensional Overlord"? It was so good, but it suddenly ended 😢