Saoyou Wanjie Bus

"I Have a Bus of All Worlds" will be much better The book title + the introduction are enough to make many readers stop and read As for whether it can retain readers the content needs to be eye-catching enough

"The Bus" is not another systematic novel that follows the trend. It is a carefully polished "depth bomb". Under the light and funny appearance, it contains amazing potential that can subvert the traditional fantasy structure. Its comprehensive evaluation can be carried out from the following core dimensions: 1. Core creativity: S+ level - "unique setting, the thrill of dimensionality reduction" The core competitiveness of this work lies in its unprecedented setting. · The subversive nature of Goldfinger: The combination of "Invincible Bus" + "Beauty Capture Upgrade System" is a genius idea. It violently grafts the "steel torrent" of modern industrial creation with the "fairy air" of classical fantasy, producing an extremely strong chemical reaction and contrasting comedy effect. This is far from being comparable to an ordinary "system" or "artifact", it is a mobile "topic creation machine" and "famous scene engine". · The precise control of the cool points: The protagonist drives a bus and rampages in a different world, using BGM and cool operations to carry out "cultural dimensionality reduction attacks" on the indigenous people. This cool point is straightforward, novel and highly contagious. It accurately captures readers' reading needs for novelty and stress relief, and provides an ultimate experience that cannot be replicated by other works.

😍😍I also want to travel to another world to be free and sexy. B

😢What do you think?

Dear friends, can you give me some guidance on the first three chapters I wrote? Any valuable suggestions I will adopt. 😁