Dragon Fist

If the title of the book doesn't attract enough attention, ask the editor!

If the content inside is acceptable, I hope the author can optimize it

This book was written with a view to high combat effectiveness. I thought it was about the Ming Jin of Chinese martial arts. If you look at it this way, the author has made changes.

The original writing was okay, but I guess the author of Goldfinger was confused when writing it. There is no specific system. Some professions have unique talents at different levels, and some are the same as the general public. The author is not willing to explain it. Moreover, this synthetic profession is not detailed. It seems that it just came out of a whim, and it never appeared again. I have to design a goal for myself to synthesize an awesome profession. It seems that there is no main line. Moreover, as I learn more and more professions later on, it becomes increasingly difficult to gain experience. There is also the chivalrous spirit of standing up for the people. This chivalrous spirit seems to have been forcibly given by the author. I did not find that it fits this feeling very well from the protagonist himself. Many things are done by force. Generally speaking, the early stage is okay, but after the mid-term, the golden finger setting is not clear, the main plot is unclear, and the protagonist's character does not feel very harmonious. There is a feeling of being superficial and disappearing from everyone.

The writing power is a bit scary. Is the author the reincarnation of an old demon and a reformer, or is it a demon from outside the realm who has attained enlightenment?

Why are there so many good reviews? Isn't it just the same old-fashioned panel show about little people saving money to practice martial arts?

The other novels are all enjoyable to read, but this one is about an aggrieved person with a pure bloodline.

As soon as the fire level comes out, it collapses. It is the most exciting when pulling the car.

I am a novice on Chinese martial arts and martial arts. I read half of the book, but the author is still bare-handed and doesn't even have a weapon, let alone a foreign cannon or a gun in the background. The author really practices Chinese martial arts, but for someone who doesn't understand Chinese martial arts at all, Guowu has never been good at fists and kicks, but is good at using weapons in conjunction. Qi Jiguang also said that fists and kicks are useless. As for the author, after all you write about national military affairs, how come you don't have any knowledge in this area?

To be honest, the plot is good, but the realm is really messy. I can't tell where it is messy, but the reading is very messy, a mess 😒😒😒

The writing and plot are top-notch, and at first glance it looks like the kind of good book that can be read on the table. Tieba Qunzhuli family is proud of you👍

It seems that the main character is to be a court eagle dog and wants to win over both black and white. Although it has not been stated which prototype it is, most people should default to the Manchu and Qing Dynasties. Being a hawk dog for the Manchu and Qing court is poisonous to many people, including myself, but putting other dynasties in the place of the Manchu and Qing Dynasties is a problem. It feels like he is slandering other dynasties who performed the same in the Manchu and Qing Dynasties. This is also a poisonous point. If the author blurs the background of the dynasty, it will be assumed to be the Manchu and Qing Dynasties. The protagonist is an Aboriginal and will not look at the current court from the perspective of God. I feel that setting the protagonist as an Aboriginal is not a good decision.

It feels very fragmented 1. When the protagonist is in charge, there is a third floor in Nancheng. There is a car dealership above. Does the car dealership charge no fees? 2. When the protagonist closes the car shop, he still closes the third floor. What does the boss below eat? 3. Then the protagonist is too clever in dealing with things, and he doesn't look like a fledgling young man at all. He can make great progress in martial arts, but it is impossible to behave like this. I have never seen a scene before, just imagine it out of thin air? Once you get the hang of it, you will learn quickly. It is not like a compressed file package. After decompressing it, you will have everything.

First of all, I am sure that there is nothing wrong with the general direction and writing style of this book. It is a very traditional martial arts novel. Here I will mainly talk about some details. 1: The author's timeline of this book is based on the late Qing Dynasty. Although it is an imaginary world, it describes a lot of customs and customs in the old age. Therefore, readers will treat this world as a magical version of the late Qing Dynasty based on this text information. It is not surprising that zombies, monsters and abnormal invasion routes of foreigners appear. The author has already explained that this is a characteristic of the world. However, it is very strange that there are things that existed in history but should not have existed in the late Qing Dynasty. For example, the Chinese tunic suit and Hardman cigarettes were all products of the Republic of China period, so it is obvious that this was caused by the author's lack of rigor in the references, especially the Chinese tunic suit, which is very famous, so it feels particularly inconsistent. 2: Regarding the performance of the protagonist. The protagonist is a very traditional and upright person. The author made a lot of notes for the protagonist. For example, why the protagonist is knowledgeable about literature and etiquette even though he is a cart puller. This is because his family was rich when he was a child. For example, under the guidance of Mr. Xin, the protagonist knows the rules of the world. But! It was too fast, too logical, and lacked some setbacks and bumps. Readers did not feel the protagonist's growth. They only saw that the protagonist had been doing the right things, and he did it very standardly, lacking a sense of freshness. This is also a problem with the protagonists of many novels. Here I need to mention the way the protagonist is established in the book "The Corpse Digger". His protagonist is also young and always correct. However, the author cleverly sets the protagonist as "having a special disease" and "naturally intelligent", and he directly beats Baihui during his travels in the rivers and lakes. I don't talk about your rules, only mine. But when it comes to this book, our little fifth master is very good at following rules, and there is no growth curve. This is the lack of freshness I mentioned before. 3: Some plots are a bit too dull. For example, in the death of Mr. Xin, the protagonist behaved too calmly. You must know that the protagonist's setting is a family misfortune. He met a beastly father wholost his family. He fell from great wealth to the bottom of society at a young age and experienced all the sufferings in the world. The protagonist himself is a person who values ​​love and justice. For example, if he buys a watch for his aunt, or if something happens to his shack partner, the protagonist has no choice but to step in. However, Mr. Xin treats the protagonist almost unconditionally and gives his money and life experience to the protagonist. It can be said that Mr. Xin makes up for the protagonist's regret of lacking a father, and the author also describes it this way. However, our protagonist, a young man who attaches great importance to love and justice and has regained his father's love, behaves like an old man who has seen through life and death, no impulsivity, no gaffes, sadness but self-control, regarding the long-lost family love that has been regained and lost again. Is he still a young man? A sense of twilight! The Dragon King Association has provoked many times, and even wanted to take away the remains of the "most loved one", so that he could die with no peace of mind. Hey, our protagonist He Wei took the overall situation into consideration and cooperated with the organization's actions. It was really terrible to watch. 4: The description of the details is not enough. For example, at the time when selling cattle and fish, the protagonist is a martial arts practitioner who is 1.8 Meters tall with dragon muscles and tiger bones. Does that spirit look the same as that of the dock coolies in troubled times? A little gangster who looks at people every day doesn't even have this in his eyes? Is this reasonable? There is also a Westerner Li Shizhen, a villain who plans to overthrow a great country and is a villain in a magical world. His strength is just rubbing the dirt on his body and spreading poison. He also yells out his own moves. He is at a disadvantage and begs for mercy like a bastard. . . . . What is this written about? . . And the No. 1 Punch in Jinmen. In the troubled times of the troubled times, this respected old man was captured and used to refine corpses, and young children were captured and used as materials for human experiments. Did he just watch, right? Also, in the past, samurai could dodge the bullets that suddenly rushed out of the attack. How come in the final battle, when the villains are face to face with their opponents holding guns, they don't know how to be careful and can't dodge? The above are my personal opinions on this book. I hope the author can control the details and write better.

It was written by the reincarnation of the old man from ancient times, and his writing style is sophisticated. The old man and the new man do not write about the indigenous pig's feet. Only ancient records of indigenous pig trotters exist.

Your book was fired🙂 Almost exactly the same😄

I originally thought that there was finally a book that could compete with Under the Fist. I was even more optimistic about this book, thinking that I had met my opponent under the Fist. But it turns out that you, the author, really can't hold up the wall with mud! Normally when I encounter a bad book, I don't just abandon the book, I also abandon the eunuch author!

The indigenous protagonist, Golden Finger, is the sudden appearance of the Baiye Shu system.

Suddenly I understood that many novels began to write about the Republic of China era. Just like when I wrote about the son-in-law before, I naturally overpower the protagonist. But the son-in-law version is still too disgusting. Now it has been upgraded. The environment of the Republic of China is not good. There are many enemies, including warlords, foreign devils, and traitors. This puts pressure on the protagonist even more. Moreover, it directly set the main line and goal, which aroused great patriotic sentiment resonance! Holy shit, this is simply the best example of an upgrading emotional flow!

No, I just finished watching it and found out that it has been half a month since I entered the palace.

A novel that is so out of the ordinary is actually a eunuch. You really have no chance of making any money

It's not pleasant to watch at all. I broke through a lonely place, but I was still beaten when I broke through. I couldn't hold myself any longer.

Grass dead eunuch

If your writing skills are at this level, then what else can you say? I'll give you the vote.

Good book, why are you a eunuch?

Fortunately, I only picked up on it after reading a few of them, so I didn't read any more.

6. At that time, I thought it was too slow to update, so I bought it, and then I saw TJ.

This is a narration, the logic is in line with the society, the fantasy is beyond the ordinary, there are many outstanding places, it is a fine product, worth watching and recommending.

After voting for the monthly ticket and subscribing, I found out it was a eunuch 😅

The flaws do not cover up the virtues, and gradually get better. Praise the author.