It Turns Out I'm a Villainous Prodigy

The writing is okay, but if you think about it, there are a lot of bugs. For example, the cost of practicing martial arts is obviously not high, but the protagonist has to ask the old man's permission to practice martial arts. He clearly asked his family to pay some money to practice martial arts three years ago, detect the superior bones, and take off directly. Why waste three years in the countryside? And the protagonist Ming Jin started lending money and started to offend people. It is obvious that one only needs to wait one year to break through the dark power, and the protagonist is not short of resources or money, so why can't he wait one more year and then develop his power after breaking through? I really don't understand what this operation is. This kind of mindless plot is forced to create conflict, which makes people speechless.

The more I read, the more uncomfortable I feel. The class consolidation is too serious, there is no hope of breaking the situation, and the suppression is too severe. The class suppression described by the author cannot break the situation even if the protagonist is defeated, because the source of the great medicine cannot be explained at all, and the pressure on resources is forgettable. Add the suppression of fame, and the protagonist has had it all his life, and he cannot survive. In fact, it is an endless cycle. If he wants to break the mirror, he must show his strength to the court. , Show strength to the court and then be exterminated by the family above, unless the protagonist has the resources to break the mirror and immediately enter the next peak state, but the resource monopoly described in the book has cut off this possibility. Without resources, the protagonist will not be able to get up for the rest of his life, and can only survive by relying on the constant mistakes of others. It is disgusting to see this situation happen too often, and there is no way to face higher-level countermeasures.

I understand that the protagonist's desire to build a family requires more masters, but what you wrote is too dramatic. At that time, the protagonist transformed his energy into Dharma, flesh, and blood. Every step was not without difficulties and dangers, and all kinds of sufferings, including the protagonist's opponents. As a result, when it came to the protagonist's family members, they were all deprived of their qualifications, resources, bottlenecks, and refinement. Their realms soared one by one, and the result was that the protagonist looked like a mentally retarded person.

After it was put on the shelves, it was indeed different😅😅But I didn't expect that the protagonist still married Wang Fang😅😅😒😒 After a long time, he still married a village girl😅😅😅😅😅

This book gives me the feeling that the author's level fluctuates high and low, and there are many poisonous points that we can't imagine, only situations where he can't do it.

There are so many troubles, hurry up and break through. It's not a big deal. You have to make trouble and it will make a mess.

This book just stuffs all kinds of bloody plots into it, and then writes it in reverse, and the protagonist's character is also written in reverse.

Don't understand what this is? For a small martial arts gym, the requirements for recruiting disciples are still so high. It's not like he's from a famous family. Those with good qualifications would have gone to famous families long ago.

The protagonist needs all kinds of powerful medicines for decades to break through the skin and flesh. As a result, the younger brother has no great medicine and can break through in just a few years. It's so strange.

The first three chapters do have an online IQ, and the character of the protagonist is also acceptable, so they are used to screen readers. However, in your martial arts world, strength growth is a big point. It's not that you are too weak, but that your expressive power is too weak. How about the bright power and the dark power can be divided into stages. It's simple to do the early, middle and late stages. This is a very early system of Chinese martial arts. Why are they now using the nine-fold system to increase readers' sense of gain? Secondly, you don't have the means to build the basic stage. Don't you have the means to break through the bright and dark energies? You have martial arts, equipment, hidden weapons, there are many things you can write about. To summarize a few points, the performance of strength growth is poor, readers have little sense of gain, lack of motivation to achieve goals leads to low expectations, an added crisis forces the protagonist to go, and big goals can be dismantled, one after another, if you want to improve strength, dismantle training resources, medicinal baths, what kind of meat to eat, and elixirs. After dismantling the martial arts, boxing and body skills, and subsidizing them all, the performance of failure will be revealed. How much silver is needed to build equipment and weapons from foreign objects? In this way, your need to earn silver will increase. Anyway, what I talk about is just on paper, but I think that splitting realms and splitting big goals into simple small cycles can still be improved in the short term. This is already the case. I feel that the combat power has improved too fast, and the martial arts system may not be able to hold it, unless the system is changed later.