Xiu Xian: My Technique Is Not Quite Right

If the protagonist is always so aggrieved, no one will necessarily watch. There is so much resentment these days, and if you do this, you will basically die.

You see, you are contradicting each other. As long as the protagonist's system keeps killing people, it can grow quickly without joining any sect. And why does the protagonist save the maid? You wrote the system like this to transplant her spiritual roots to the protagonist. Furthermore, didn't you say that some kind of spiritual root can block cause and effect? So, no wonder the author can't get up, the novel is like this

After seeing the latest chapter, my evaluation is that you can run away. If you don't practice the skills that can directly reach the innate, you can't even break through if you practice. I thought your skills can add some breakthroughs. Do you think the protagonist dies not fast enough? If you can add more than 10 points by killing the whole family, that's okay. If you only add 2 points with the Breaking Wind Sword Technique, it will crazily suppress the combat power. It would be strange if you don't die in this book.

You might as well stop writing it. Immortal cultivators use a trap to trap the protagonist in it. Immortal cultivators can also kill anyone they see as displeased. The protagonist will be ridiculed, looked down upon, scolded and belittled wherever he goes. No wonder your book is not good. I don't understand the point of writing this. Is it to show that the protagonist is kicked to death like a wild dog?

That female ghost is as disgusting to the protagonist as playing with a dog. The protagonist is still alive even if he doesn't kill her. It's extremely disgusting. Classic whitewashing of enemies. Haha, the author was still alive 10 years ago and wrote this way. I can't bear to leave.

The road is too lonely, there are no Taoist friends at the same time

I thought it was some good book, but it turned out to be another bandit cultivating immortality. These days, all kinds of nonsense dare to be labeled as classical cultivating immortality.

It's all like this, and they are given a family identity instead of a civilian identity.

Extra points for killing people? "

I just finished the first four chapters, and they are well written! Come on!