Unscientific Card Development Plan

Isn't it the setting where Cthulhu outweighs everything else? I feel like Cthulhu became completely popular in Internet literature at some point. I just want to read it in any book, and then the setting is almost outrageous. Why can't Taozu invade Cthulhu in reverse? It's so difficult to do

It is recommended not to be all female, otherwise it will be no different from the others.

Cards are equivalent to having a world inside. The card master can use cards to summon the protagonist in the card. The creator, the card master's spiritual illustration mutation, can extract other people and items other than the protagonist in the card to form a card. Strengthening masters, some card masters' spiritual illustrations have a high resonance with the spirit of the card protagonist. —— Cards are divided into two types. First, native cards, the protagonist in the card world is still alive. The Enhancer can control the flow of time in the card world, allowing the card protagonist to complete a quality transition over several months to several years. Second, ordinary cards, the protagonist of the card world has died. —— The composition of a card. Life form cards, world system cards. For example, life form - Ye Fan, world system - Zhetian World These two cards can be turned into a character card in the hands of the card master. —— Finally, it is an event of fate. For example, the Destiny-Decisive Card can make the protagonist in the character card become more decisive. Filial piety gone bad, stepmother cards, etc. These destiny event cards are the main means for enhancers in this world to strengthen their cards. But the difference between the protagonist of this book is that he can directly enter the card world.

After reading it, the main plot is probably that I traveled back in time at the beginning, inherited the body's cause and effect, and then saved my good brother's wife and daughter, was hunted by the underworld, and was protected by the boss and the protagonist's first love. After revealing his talent as an enhancer, he reconciled. While returning the favor, he couldn't break away because of his own value. After strengthening the card with the Zhou family, he was attacked and escaped from his original identity. But there are many problems. The biggest problem is confusion. There are many places that are not explained clearly and many places that are inexplicable. I can't understand where the card of the old Taoist Immortal World comes from. Then there is a personal issue. The protagonist is a time traveler and does not have a goal concept. Who am I, where am I, where should I go, and there is no third point. Then there is the theme of the world to be written, which is like posing a question. There may be no answer, but the protagonist's choice is not very clear. Send

The plot was too rushed, and I didn't understand why things kept intensifying and the protagonist moved forward without a plan.

It's a mess without a main plot, and there is no main card that keeps messing around at low levels.

I was so confused while watching the plot that I ran away

It feels too messy. . I keep cultivating different cards but don't see any use.

To be honest, for food, the writing is too messy. The setting is very complicated but it is not written seriously for the readers. I see a heavenly palace invasion and an apocalypse, and the demon god before, I really can't stand it anymore.

It made my head spin. There are too many card background scenes. Those who know about the card world, but those who don't, think it is a copy world.

The setting is interesting, but it feels messy and unclear. All the characters that appear at the beginning are female characters, which is very similar to the description of urban harem novels. The card is female, and the person he meets is also female.

I took a look and found out that the author's writing is pretty good, but now that cool writing is in the spotlight, I didn't read any cool points. At first, I thought the descriptions of women were so detailed and I thought it was the old pornographic style, but it turned out to be just writing? Then Goldfinger didn't understand it very well. I saw that you wrote in the brochure that there is foreshadowing, but this has nothing to do with the fun. You wrote the foreshadowing to serve the main line, not for foreshadowing The author must write novels to make money, but I think you may be tempted. I think you must be a sincere person after writing so much. You must have saved a draft and are still sorting it out. The creativity of this book is okay. Just as you said, each world is an original world. It does not mean that each world cannot be long, but must be exciting. For example, the dozens of stories about Lao Jian Xian are very bland stories. They can be written more tightly or more exciting, instead of seeming to read nothing. Thanks to the writing logic of the great master, I believe that you will write wonderfully next time.

The main character, who is in his 40s, is not likable. The plot is still outdated. There is a beautiful boss who takes care of the original owner for no reason, and I don't know if it is XP. As long as she is a woman, she has the attributes of wife ➕ daughter. The plot is also inexplicable. One moment a woman comes to give cards, and another brother comes to give cards. A gang came to look for trouble, and a consortium was invited to buy cards to seek revenge. I didn't know what I realized when I was halfway through writing it, and I said that the consortium was going to play tricks and would not come, so forget about it. Enhanced cards even appeared out of nowhere. Cthulhu appeared out of nowhere. The world had been normal before the protagonist came, but when the protagonist came, all the elements came into play.

Author, could you please make your sentences more fluent? I have been through more than 100 chapters and I really can't stand it anymore. It's very uncomfortable and uncomfortable. For example, "In my heart, Chen Ang has already concluded that his current experience is inseparable from the woman with glasses." It's extremely awkward. Although I am a person who doesn't pay attention to sentences, the author's fluent sentences have obviously affected my perception of this novel. I always feel that when I read this book. It's inexplicable. Although the logic of the plot can be clarified, the psychological description of the characters and the description of the plot development of the novel feel like the author is abbreviating a complete sentence and showing it to us. As a result, when I read the book, I always expand and improve these sentences in my mind to make it logically smooth. It is uncomfortable and it feels very laborious to read. Author, before you publish the chapters, can you read the article yourself and modify the sentences? It's really awkward to watch, very awkward.

After reading the second chapter, I can only say that the author's writing is good, but the author's spirit is really abnormal. Forcibly pushing the plot disgusts readers... If people would still read it in the early years, but now most people will just click on it

It looks good, but it feels a little messy

To sum up the problem, there are inconsistencies. The world and professional system are not yet determined. The card world was said before that it is a world on the verge of destruction, and later it was said that it is not sure whether it is real. Then there is no story outline. I have been hanging around in the card world. My own cards have not been improved much. I have been working on new cards. Ah, you help others upgrade their cards. Why do you write so much? →_→You should upgrade yourself.

It's a mess, I'm tired of looking at it, and the prices are ridiculous. A bronze card costs hundreds of thousands, and wine worth seven or eight thousand is very expensive. It sounds ridiculous.

The writing is messy. There is no main line and the plot is confusing😕

In the past week, there have been about three chapters updated daily.

Why don't you write it? Very well written!

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