Raising All of Humanity: Starting with a Backyard Pool World

So far it's pretty average, nothing eye-catching. This type of article either depends on the story or the setting, but now the plot does not have a grand and epic feel, and there are no characters like Di Qi and Kasha who can support the reading experience. Currently, it is just a small Western fantasy world, with nothing special about the world view. The same is true for the cultivation system. The three new gods left their respective systems and then passed them over in one go. The creation stream does not look at the path opened by the protagonist or the indigenous people, so what should I look at? See how you treat cancer using the ancestral method? Then there are all kinds of confusing logic and bugs, which are very inexplicable. The human race sometimes does not have them. Goldfinger is also unclear about what the core needs are, how to upgrade and obtain new abilities, and whether it is a small garden or a small world? Although what you wrote earlier was about the ecological box you bought yourself, the feeling when looking at it is that of a low-dimensional space. These natives have no sense or "interaction" with the map boundaries at all. The same goes for the three time-travelers. They have completely indigenous thinking and are purely plot-promoting tools. Does time-traveling have any impact? The thing that puzzles me the most is where does the "magical knowledge" in this small Western fantasy world come from? Natural development? That is true, so in theory the protagonist and people on earth can also use it, but it just needs to be "localized". But what you wrote seems to be a spore simulation. If it is simulated, then it is "fake", similar to a computer game. Skills are realized through code. The well does not need to actually contain water, only the action of fetching water is required. This is how the "underlying rules" are designed, and they only belong to the scientific truth of this "world", but that's it, it can only take effect in the world of spore structure. So how can your fake "rules" make the knife sharper in the world of Little Garden? There is no logic behind it. Anyway, it's just a cheat and it's over. The problem is that you, the golden finger, don't even write it clearly.

You can't copy these two masterpieces, Feeding All Humanity and I Am God.

Didn't write a refreshing plot

It's like raising the same 300-pound smile as the entire human race.

How did I write more than 300 tables, but there are less than 20 comments?

It's not like a novel. There are too many settings. It's just about the settings, and there's no description of the characters' emotions.

It's not interesting, you didn't explain the system clearly, and you didn't tell the story well.

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