I Am Picking up Attributes in the Dreamland

It's too watery. If you're not practicing martial arts, you'll be ridiculed by passers-by A, B, B, D, and no one will watch the face-slapping stream anymore.

I'm looked down upon wherever I go, which sounds very depressing.

The strong rural flavor, time travel is in vain, the golden finger is in vain

When writing a story, you need to have a rough plan. Do you want to write a slow story or a cool story? According to the settings of your dream pick-up attributes, you should go the cool story route, but you don't seem to know how to write a cool story. Shuang Wenliu: First, you need to see each other for three days and treat each other with admiration; second, you must take action when it is time to take action; third, you must pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger. Although the progress of the protagonist is written, it seems to only attract jealousy and hatred, and there is no enjoyment at all. What the hell? According to the normal route, the protagonist should first use the dream attributes to endure, break the limit, and deliberately go to the martial arts academy to break the limit. Normally, you should follow the path of a barefoot doctor and save a few people in the village first. For example, the protagonist uses artificial respiration and compression techniques to revive the drowned person, or the child has a blocked throat after eating and uses the Heimlich first aid, and then the doctor is sent to the village. The reputation of martial arts has spread, but because martial arts restricts the spread of medical knowledge, there are definitely no doctors in the village, and they can't afford to hire one from the city. People from all over the country can just treat a few minor illnesses, even if they charge less, they will add up to a lot, so it is natural to launch a Qi and blood ointment. But you took out a loan shark yourself and thought that you don't have to pay it back to become a warrior. How could you be so naive? The person behind the loan money might belong to the county magistrate or a noble family. You are going to destroy your family. Also, why do you want to write about martial arts because you lack knowledge about martial arts? External strength and internal strength in martial arts are completely different. Take external strength as an example. You should first practice Qi and blood skills such as stances to improve your body and Qi and blood. Boxing and sword skills are just fighting moves. Do you think the punches of a strong person are stronger or those of a weak person? Of course, the one with greater strength is stronger, but the fighting style is just more subtle and flexible. When the strength is not much different, the stronger one will naturally be powerful.

The style is very low, and the plot is patchwork. I have read a lot of it in other novels. Some of them are copied and pasted directly. The writing is also very poor. It is just the old-fashioned upgrade mode of killing monsters. The saving grace of Goldfinger is that it combines attributes picked up in dreams and Chinese medicine, and that's it.

The protagonist is beaten everywhere. He is beaten in the dream world, but he is also beaten in the real world. He is beaten everywhere.

The plot is copied from another book. In the other book, brothers also want to practice martial arts.

I hope you can teach me a lot

Learn from the "female protagonist" in the previous book and write well 😁

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I thought it was okay after reading it for a while, but the female characters written in the previous book were so disgusting, especially one named Zhang Yan, who was so disgusting that she felt like vomiting. A piece of pure rat shit was force-fed into the reader's mouth. The comments continued to criticize, but the author still refused to change. The junior sister in this book behaves like the disgusting girl in the previous book, and decisively abandons the book to reduce losses.