From Jailer in Heaven to Domain Lord in the Human World

In terms of military force, I hope the author can maintain the absolute invincibility of the leader in people's hearts instead of being surpassed by Li Qingfeng... I like Ming Yayin and Ji Yanwei as female characters. I hope the author can give them a happy ending. Cang Xiu and Xiao Jian Rui can also give it a try Never announce the ending that the Immortal Organization is Li Qingfeng alone Good luck to the author

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Others have written 850,000 words

At the beginning of the first 40 chapters, readers who are not very demanding can still read it. After the 40th chapter, the poison begins, and those who are a little resistant can still read it. After the 80th chapter, it will really poison you. The plot settings that appear later are not only contradictory to the previous ones, but the plot is also outrageous. Death, let's not talk about fighting in a lot of realms. Those who are going through the tribulation are all going through the tribulation in the Tianlao. The promised family has a monopoly. They also say that the Tianlao is so mysterious. It is okay to let a protagonist go through the tribulation in the Tianlao. No one cares about it. No one cares about it. No one cares about who the protagonist is. It's nonsense. They also forcibly wrote the plot to make the protagonist suspicious, and then something outrageous came. Unexpectedly by the high-ranking big shot, a lot of beautiful girls guessed that the protagonist was related to that organization 😁, which shocked me.

He's so mentally retarded that he can compete with Princess Huanzhu

Why is this novel such a mess? The initial goal was to stay alive, but then I found out that I had to be ruthless, and then I had to reach the pinnacle of martial arts, and overthrow the old dynasty and establish a world of great harmony. . . As a result, pig's feet are now related to cell biology and traditional Chinese medicine. At first I wanted to stay away from Zhang Ting, but now I am in love with her again. . . . What the hell is this?

When I saw Chapter 301, I really couldn't stand it. Without a heroine, I can give it a 10. With this heroine, I read it countless times and wanted to give up. If you can't write this kind of heroine, don't write it. And so many people said that the heroine's plot is too speechless, but they just won't change it. Don't you read book reviews?

A few shortcomings: First, what kind of ideal of great harmony do you have in a world of cultivating immortals? That is only suitable for the mortal world! Second, in the world of cultivating immortals, are you going to do research on cell reproduction? Wouldn't it be better to just make a clone! Third, since there is a heavenly tribulation and it is so powerful, you are going through the tribulation in the heavenly prison. Shouldn't the heavenly prison be damaged and then discovered?

The writing is getting better and better, and it tastes right! The only bad thing is that the heroine seems redundant!

The plot progress is a bit too slow, and the profile takes up a lot of space. Will I be able to see the August 15th Demon Slayer this year? 🥺 There are too many chapters on the protagonist's cultivation, from history to principles to the combination of ancient and modern times... I felt my eyes lit up when I first read it. I feel that the author has his own special understanding of history, culture and the human body, but if the protagonist's cultivation process is regarded as a plot... To be honest, it is a bit too boring How the protagonist cultivates, I know Just write about the principles and process of cultivation, each acupuncture point, etc., And discuss it through ancient and modern times, and even demonstrate it ... To be honest, I have read the updates very quickly in the past month, and I have passed through it twice. The main plot is a bit too little. The protagonist's cultivation really cannot be written as a plot, and we can't practice according to it, right? 😅

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This book is actually pretty good, but your sudden sentence in English really embarrassed me to death 😅

I feel like Zhang Ting is a failure, she is so fucked up that she can't stand it any longer.

This is really invincible. The profession of jailer is inherited from his father, which means that these jailers are all old acquaintances who know everything about him. After more than ten years, don't you still know whether your colleague's child is a boy or a girl? Besides, when you go to work and get promoted, there is no investigation at all. If she says he is his son, he is her son. The world of martial arts where you can tell at a glance is the same as Qiong Yao's TV series. The director said you couldn't tell if a woman dressed as a man. Even if she had a C, she would have to blindly say she was a man.

After reading more than a dozen pictures, the protagonist only improves his martial arts skills but not his own realm? There is no realm, your martial arts skills are useless, and while you are not improving your skills, you are afraid of being bewitched by others with magic sounds. It is a very speechless plot. I don't know what the author thinks. People who have a little sense of logic will basically abandon the book after reading about ten chapters. After seeing such a plot, who will care about what plot you write later.

After reading a few chapters and a few comments, don't treat others as mentally retarded. Let's put it this way. If something happens, whoever is still alive is basically the protagonist. Just because a family is fat does not mean they are stupid. One or two things are considered accidental. Three or four times, then it is impossible and possible.

A fairly good book was ruined by a female protagonist. Many people probably abandoned this book when they saw the female protagonist!

This book is a direct copy of someone else's reprinted article, and there are frequent awkward little points. It should be due to insufficient writing skills, which is very fragmented and affects reading.

There is no problem with the rhythm, plot, and writing. The only reason why it is not considered a high-quality product is probably because it has been pushing the boundaries. This kind of data flow upgrade must calculate various upgrade data at the beginning, and limit the protagonist's rhythm in the setting. It cannot be found that the protagonist gains too many cultivation points and upgrades too quickly, so it is suppressed in the plot, which feels very intellectual. Or, upgrade normally and extend your realm upwards. Either set up a necessity that presses the realm, such as body training, soul training, Qi training, the most awesome setting of balancing the three methods. Either you have to write that the protagonist's strength improvement by improving his martial arts realm in a short period of time is greater than the empty realm.

At the beginning, I withstood several poisons, and then I saw the protagonist risking a loss of cultivation points just to see Xiaochun's naked body, and he was poisoned to death. . .

I'm so scared, with this pace, I'm not going to start a harem, right? 😥 Is there really no emotional line at all, and it's all about having the strength to support other women in the future?

Better than this novel.

If you don't know how to write hard, it's weird if you don't feel disgusted if you look at it. It's cool if it's pure and refreshing 🙄

Personally, I don't think there is a world of great harmony. Our great men have understood the state when they opened up the New China. Military discipline is strict, the motherland is strong and victorious, the people have something to rely on when old, and filial piety is passed down to the family tradition.

It can be used as food. If the author's writing skills are not very good (relatively speaking), he can advance to half-step fairy grass.

At the beginning of this book, it is just a small white text, and it is still a low-level white text. However, surprisingly, the writing got better and better later on. Moreover, the author is quite accomplished in traditional Chinese medicine and biological sciences. I hope the author will keep it up and it will be a good article.

If you want to read this book, you can read the front part. The back part is almost full of parallel imports.

In the early stage, the Laughing Sword Stew was about saving people and saving the common people. Well, when I met the protagonist, he started to lose his wits. He forced the protagonist to fight at the cost of human life. It was such an outrageous thing. I don't know how the author was able to incorporate such a big thing.

Come on

The writing of people is very stupid. If according to the author's words, the human race has been wiped out long ago and there is no way to wait for the protagonist. Anyway, as long as you are an individual, you will definitely despise the protagonist and you will definitely have fun with the protagonist. If you can't kill him once, you will keep having fun.