Seeking Good Fortune and Avoiding Misfortune: Starting from Death Row in Prison

Hey, let's talk about the shortcomings. The gags are not very timely, and the plot is very funny. Basically, it belongs to the new three plots. It is more magical and can't be read with brains. The writing style needs to be refined. In fact, the plug-ins and plot settings are good, but the writing is really unreasonable. If you rewrite it, I suggest that you don't make random jokes and make the plot more reasonable. I can only say that I am speechless for such a far-fetched conspiracy.

A general book with great potential, looking forward to updates

It's a bit interesting, but the protagonist is more like a native, doesn't know what he wants to do, and has no purpose. The current progress is not about cultivating immortality or becoming a gang leader. There is no foreshadowing and no connection between the front and back. You can read any chapter.

The protagonist is in a step-by-step manner, and the plug-ins are not prominent or deliberately suppressed, which is good.

When I saw Chapter 29, Chun Chun was the loyal character I disliked the most.

The title of the book is not good, but the writing is very good. Keep it up and it will be a great book.

If you start with Bibi, you will die a hundred times.

The book is okay, but some areas need more improvement and revision. There is potential.