The Mage Was Completely Defeated

If you are not the author, tell me, this is an extraordinary world, why can't nobles be killed? What confidence do you have to fight against the legend? Moreover, there is no anti-aristocratic organization here? Do you think it is reasonable? I already read books without thinking. This is a bit outrageous.

Your wording is too inconsistent, it doesn't sound like a fantasy background, it sounds like fantasy

There are a lot of plots that are very weak, the wording in many places is also very dramatic, and the plot is a bit boring. I haven't read the latest chapter yet. I will decide whether to remove it from the bookshelf after I read the latest chapter 😅

Hmm... How should I put it? Do you need to have faith in gods to be a mage? It's not what I thought 🙂. What kind of mage is this mage?

Damn it, the main character doesn't have a golden finger, so I'm afraid he won't be able to make it to the shelves.

It's normal not to believe in gods in a world without demons. If you travel to a fantasy world where true gods exist, you can just believe it. If you don't believe in gods, it will be difficult to upgrade in the beginning.

Emmmm I didn't want to read it as soon as I saw that a mage needs to believe in gods to take up his job...

Isn't your fantasy classification wrong? It smells like a light novel.

The original Slow Heat doesn't have a golden finger, I'm afraid it's a bit difficult.

It's too slow and slow to upgrade. If you don't follow the market, there will be no results.

This novel uses coincidence and deus ex machina (omniscient mage) too straightforwardly to advance the plot and solve the main problem, which makes it less exciting than it is. The structure is basically problematic - suddenly find a solution - encounter an event - get a solution. Many times the solution is found by others, and the key items to be solved rely on coincidence. This way of advancing the plot is a bit too single and obvious, and it is not well hidden. At the same time, the protagonist is more like an executor rather than the proposer and leader of solutions, which also reduces the enjoyment point.

It's pretty good, and it suits my taste anyway. The heroine's father is so weird, and if the mage is strong, rich and has brains, why would he cling to power? Where did the noble status of the kingdom come from. And I feel that the strength is too great. Now enemies at level 4 and 5 are coming. Although the development is reasonable according to the setting, the level 4 Necromancer also exploded, but it has already begun a big scene. How to continue it feels like a problem. As for the messy writing style, I can only say that I have my own personal hobbies and don't like reading it, so there's nothing I can do about it. If the logic is not complete enough, it just relies on the superposition of settings and the combat power of Honkai Impact. Without a complete outline, it feels like it is not far from cutting it off. Everyone is an adult and a few old eunuchs promise not to cut it off. It is also a beautiful move. Up to now, I have fully subscribed and voted for the monthly ticket. I still hope to read a good book.

It reads a bit like a Chinese fantasy. The plot is okay, but it feels like "being arranged". I don't know whether there is a big hand arranging the plot or the author is arranging it.

This beginning gave me a sense of deja vu as a working record in Stormwind City.

This brochure looks like a record of working in Stormwind City

There is a feeling that the author has not read novels for too long, and has become somewhat dull about the poisonous points. The plot is () watchable, and it belongs to this category: It is finally a fantasy novel with a plot. Although it has been a long time since I encountered the main plot, it is not all a running story. However, small poisonous spots are quite frequent. I consider it to be at the first level of the passing grade of rations here.

Investigation report: "Number"-457 Investigation target: "The Master Failed" - Male Protagonist - [Ryan Blood Moon] Investigation Result: [Reincarnation] Judgment Basis: Abnormal Characteristics: A time-travel investigator, as the name suggests, is a profession that investigates and records the time-travel situations of time-travelers. It aims to let observers (that is, readers) in all worlds know in advance the time-travel situations of time-travelers in this world, and volunteers to provide observers with quick time-travel information query services If there are any fallacies, I hope to correct them ——Wanling Feast Zhenjun Stay on November 26, 2025

As title. The author should be a novice, and there are many inexplicable plots.

After your abilities have improved a bit, you will hide here and there and lie all day long. If you don't want the protagonist to answer, then don't let others have the opportunity to ask questions.

It is very important to read the new book every day. I hope those who think this book is good can read it every day. This is a matter of life and death for this book. The young author updates two big chapters every early morning. I urge you to read more, thank you!

The author is not young, and the work reads a bit old-school. It feels like I'm back in high school, when Internet writers didn't have that many techniques. But it's not bad, I personally like it quite a lot.

The monthly vote has been voted too water, "the sea"

The story is really well written, but it's a pity that the writing is not very good. Some descriptions seem very immature, and the writing skills need to be improved. I sincerely hope that I can write better and better.

It's not that I don't want to vote monthly, but that there is a limit on monthly votes.

The 400,000-bit point is really good and worth a look.

Three to support 🙂