Across the Myriad Worlds of Manghuang: Starting in the Ancient Pangu World

😥I don't understand why it still starts on Earth. Since you're doing a dual transmigration story, wouldn't writing about a primitive, ancient world be more appealing than Earth? Earth-themed stories are all the same; I'm tired of them. Unless you write something new, how can you keep readers engaged?

Unfortunately, it's not the case that the Wilderness is stronger than Devouring; the Controller isn't even on the same level as the Lord. Personally, I don't really like this setting. Even disregarding public opinion, just looking at all the data calculated by netizens on forums, the Ultimate Supreme can defeat a Lord, and after Devouring II is released, its prestige is even more overwhelming.

Spiritual power is equivalent to the primordial spirit; both are derivatives of the soul.

If mental power and mental strength are the same thing, then what are divine thoughts and divine consciousness?

Or perhaps the myriad realms, the desolate era, or the swallowed starry sky.

It lacks any originality, fails to attract anyone, and the plot is a mess.

The controller is still only an ultimate supreme being in terms of realm. It's just that his combat power is infinitely amplified in the universe. But once he leaves the universe, he is about the same as other ultimate supreme beings, although he is still a little stronger. As for Desolate Era and Swallowed Star, they are two different worlds and two different cultivation civilizations.

It's alright, the writing is so-so, the dialogue feels a bit awkward, and Luo Feng's personality is supposed to be as steady as a rock, but you wrote him as a brash, overly dramatic character.

Another eunuch's fanfiction of Desolate Era

The cheat is too powerful; it's incredibly awesome to use. It's a typical example of a laptop with amazing capabilities that's only used for writing novels.