Zhe Tian: I Created My Own Heaven-Swallowing Demon Technique in the Age of Mythology

Nowadays, most new fanfics start by going through the Enlightenment Tribulation. There are not so many things in the early stages, so you can watch the protagonist show off. If you can write out the protagonist's strong character, the results should not be too bad. After all, Zhetian fanfics want that kind of energy.

So far, the writing is okay. Don't make things happen suddenly like those previous books, just have a sudden nervous twitch, and don't make a bunch of clones or anything like that. The biggest problem at the moment is that the Dao-proof weapon does not become an immortal weapon. You have been saying that the immortal weapon is not strong enough, but it is not enough for you to design an immortal weapon that is so difficult to become. What is it like when a mirror in the void shows signs of evolving immortal weapons? They don't follow the path of devouring. Their utilization rate is not as high as yours. They don't have that much immortal gold. They don't have as many supreme blood ancient souls as you do. There are only a few. How about you who follow the path of devouring? How many times more blood and bone souls can you swallow than others? Look at what you wrote yourself. All kinds of immortal gold are constantly integrated into the knife according to the formula. There are already duplicates in the knife, and you have to keep integrating them according to the formula. The nine immortal golds are complete, engraved with immortal runes, and the power of faith has been instilled for ten or twenty thousand years. The blood and bone soul of the Supreme has swallowed almost more than thirty people, right? See for yourself, think about it, are you decent? I tell you this, an emperor's body can forge an emperor's weapon, what do you think? It's just a drag, it consumes so many resources, and it doesn't show the power of the knife at all. Co-authored: Is this a gold-eating beast? It's a pure waste. Will the Bronze Immortal Palace be ruined next? It simply consumes the most resources and produces the lowest output. Let's see what you write? After hitting you, you still have to use your fists. Is it wrong? Then why do you plan to eat up the Immortal Palace? Can't you change it? Get him a new soldier soul? Even if you are dissatisfied with the shape, changing it into another shape and recasting it will be better than swallowing gold and breaking the knife! What broken knife? !

There is too much reading comprehension. Don't write in piles. Insert a paragraph from time to time. If you write too much plot in one page, you will be impatient.

It's so speechless, and I don't know what the protagonist Sister Li is doing at all. Torturing the Immortal Emperor, he originally thought it was to get rid of the evil, but instead gave him the scriptures of Tianzun, and then let him transform, killing the sun and taiyin. Immortal gods are similar to flowers, and they also send scriptures to Tianzun inexplicably, but do you have anything to do with them? The character is a cold and ruthless Demon Lord, but he madly sends scriptures to the Dark Lord and kills two human emperors of his own race. He has no idea what the protagonist is doing. For a normal time traveler, even if you don't build a heaven to cultivate talents, you should at least cleanse the Dark Supreme. Bad things like the Immortal Emperor can't just be shot to death. Why are there so many messy plots? I found that since the beginning of The Immortal Emperor, the plot has been extremely ugly. It's like forcibly creating difficulties for the protagonist and then distorting the normal plot. It's not like there are no books like Zhe Tian Wen with an invincible protagonist. I remember there is a copy of it that I have ordered. Don't you know how to copy someone else's template? It's really speechless that you have to do this kind of poisonous thing.

You didn't even understand the original work and wrote a Jifei fanfic. Where did the divine ruins come from in the mythical era? The ancient heaven has not been established yet, and the Emperor has not yet appeared.

Does this old body have to be treated like this? Isn't it better to just put it in your own restricted area? Do you have to deal with it? Really, sometimes I think about it. No wonder when I read the book review, even Xiaofeng Residual Blood said that you can't understand the author and the book.

The writing style is a flaw. To be honest, the writing style of an experienced author with tens of millions of words is still like that of a junior high school student. I really am not suitable for this kind of rice!

I feel like the protagonist doesn't have the majesty of an emperor, and he always gives his hand away. When he saw this, he looked like a martial arts warrior, and what happened to the protagonist's family, I don't understand. If the protagonist abandoned the protagonist, then the protagonist ran back to help them up, which is a bit..., And when others asked some questions, the protagonist replied yes, and felt that the protagonist did not have any majesty of the emperor, just like an ordinary person.

It was said before that those who could not become the Red Dust Immortal in millions of years are trash. It took more than 1 million years for your fourth life. Isn't it even more useless? It's not because there was no Red Dust Fairy in Ye Fan's time. The grass is really poisonous.

No wonder the results are not good, the method of transforming into the Holy Spirit lasts for a million years. Other fanfics have reached the pinnacle of the Red Dust Immortal, which is simply too weak. If I change to another fanfic and travel to the mythical age, to TM to the World Waves, it is simply too weak. The time traveler knows that the Red Dust Immortal has so many transformation methods, but he insists on choosing the Holy Spirit method, which is not cost-effective. I am also drunk. Is it because I am tired of living and want to take a nap? Anyway, I gave up after seeing this and looked for another book. Ye Fan said that a pig can become an immortal if it lives for a million years. It takes a million years to transform into a lifetime. Haha, everyone knows that there is a plateau and a million years of time can be wasted. The author is really talented.

I've written two or three fanfics, but I haven't made any progress at all, even though I've learned hydrology.

The protagonist tortured the imperial weapon of the world that covers the sky... And then got the scripture? Do you know the imperial soldiers? And the author probably hasn't seen Zhetian, right? All nonsense

The more you write, the more reading comprehension you write. Don't keep adding more. You all know that if you want to earn two steel coins, the more you add, the more you will lose. If you can't stand it, you will run away. There is also the Immortal Emperor, which has been strengthened too much. He was deprived of immortality, lost his body twice, and can restore the original form of an immortal and phoenix. It is simply outrageous. You can't describe other villains. When the Emperor is gone, Immortal will be the backbone.

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I read that Immortal worshiped him as his teacher, and even if he didn't accept it, he would accept other people's blood origins, delete their memories, and throw them away like garbage. As a Heavenly Emperor, his strength fell to the ground. I feel like it can be accepted and cultivated together to fight the darkness, weirdness and foreboding.

Many places use the setting of Ye Fan's era to write about the Age of Mythology, which feels nondescript.

Without the pressure of the penalty area, the emperor really won't be very strong. The sky itself is a training ground 🙂

Give me your opinion. The protagonist's behavior in some recent chapters is a bit too out of character. It's really cheap for those below the supreme level to show their holiness in front of others. With the protagonist's current strength, Tyson would definitely beat Guo Jingming. It would be shameless to win. My personal opinion is that if I really want to write this, I can write it from the side, just like the latest chapter. It can be written that the protagonist's aura touches the cauldron and sweeps away everything. The current description of the protagonist acting secretly and including other weapons does not feel satisfying. Then, because of the presence of the protagonist, Immeasurable Heavenly Lord's strong character is gone. It seems that if the protagonist were not there, the tripod would be suppressed and unable to fight back. It's normal to want to find things for the protagonist to do, but the things you do must not be inconsistent with the protagonist's identity. At present, the protagonist is so strong, lives a new life every time, and has such a long lifespan. It is really necessary for the protagonist to find something else to do. In my personal opinion, the protagonist can jump out of the Zhetian universe, travel around chaos, and explore other worlds in the chaos. After all, the Zhetian world is inherently broken, and even fragments of the fairyland are found. It is written as a pseudo-astronomy, and the framework is still the Zhetian world. Then, the description of the main universe is interspersed, emphasizing that the protagonist is not in the universe, and the universe is full of legends about the protagonist. When it's time to live out a new life, the protagonist returns to the main universe, and upon his return, he encounters certain plot points from the original work, such as the Battle of Gods. The protagonist appears to be showing off, and his stronger strength shocks a wave of those Dark Supremes.

It's so powerful, I feel like I can directly destroy all the Forbidden Zone Supremes, and then it's over. I'm either killing the Supremes, or I'm killing the Supremes. Most fandoms attract readers like this, saying ruthless people are ruthless, and the fans are so ruthless. There's no reason. It's just that it's fun to kill the Supremes. If you kill them in the early stage, you don't have to read them anymore. Whatever else he writes, he kills them all.

The idea is very good, but the writing is really a bit poor, it looks very bland, and there is no overwhelming style. Nor has he developed his own style. Reading is okay, after all, you can skip it, but listening is really a torture.

If you don't know how to write about mythological topics, why don't you write about mythological topics? Dare to appear so blatantly in front of everyone in the mythological period, it is no different from seeking death. Do you really think that all the supreme beings won't join forces to kill you? I just want to ask where does the confidence come from?

The heroine was created by the author himself, and she is from the original drama, such as the Immortal Man, the Ruthless Empress, and the Queen Mother of the West.

I have read the entire book, and I have not seen the child of the protagonist and the empress. I originally wanted to see him crush Emperor Ye Tian and maintain a 50-50 split in the final stage. That will definitely be the most talented descendant of the protagonist (three-level emperor level)!

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Starting from the author's fifth life, is it necessary to write so superficially? I have written hundreds of chapters, but the most valuable one is that the eldest son enters the immortal realm and kills the immortal emperor. I just want to skip it when I look at this table of contents.

In the author's book, the elixir is also called the magic medicine. The elixir fruit matures once every four to five thousand years, and after taking the elixir once, it is still useful to take several different elixirs.

Speed ​​up the plot a bit, this section is too watery, please write more about the protagonist.

Ye Fan's standing pressure was too heavy. If the cylinder had these skills, the chaotic body would have been beaten out. In fact, the original half-saint limit can beat everyone. I don't know how many saints were killed in the first two levels of the Starry Sky Ancient Road. Many of them were killed. There are several words in it. It is recommended to change it.

I just read the beginning. The writing is not very good, not as good as other fans.

Who doesn't know that the Kirin Magic Medicine Seeds and Columns are in Ye Fan's hands, and the daughter of the Kirin Emperor wants to trade them back. At that time, Ye Fan didn't agree, and he didn't see anyone asking for it from the Great Sage. And now that Ye Fan has the confidence, how could he be willing to hand it over? Is there anything more precious than the Kirin Seeds? If people like An Yefan don't have close friendships in the future and dare to buy and sell unequal things, will there be a good end in the future?