Shrouding the Heavens: Lord of Thunder

That dream disgusted me. It's the 21st century, but there is still this old plot from the Qing Dynasty.

The author should stop writing about Zhetian, and go write about Xianni. There are few fanfics about Xianni, so just change the plot of Zhetian.

I have written three fanfics with over a million words, but my writing style has really not improved at all.

It is also difficult for you to find chapters and sentences among millions of words. It's a pity that you can only tell me some literary excerpts. What is embarrassing is that Chen Dong does not know how far a light year is in our real world, and he rarely uses light years as a unit of measurement. The interstellar distance he uses most and frequently is "tens of billions of miles". Chen Dong believes that "tens of billions of miles" is too far away to be imagined. And you have been unable to grasp the main premise. I have told you that Zhetian Universe has nothing to do with our real universe. Don't do it mechanically. The predecessor of Zhetian Universe is Jiutian Ten Earth. The predecessor of Jiutian Ten Earth is the primitive ancient world and the Ancient Immortal Continent. Zhetian Universe is the ruins and remains of Jiutian Ten Earth, and Jiutian Ten Earth is the ruins and remains of the original ancient world. This is the entire premise for your analysis of Zhetian Universe. How big was the original ancient world? I wrote it very clearly in the post. I estimated it as big as possible. An egg-shaped world with a length, width and height of up to a hundred billion miles rises and falls in the sea of ​​chaos. Later, after the unprecedentedly cruel liquidation of the Immortal King Era, a very small part of the remaining material and energy principles of this primitive ancient world formed the later Zhetian Universe. So you will find that the structure of Zhetian Universe is extremely simple, which is the simple three-level structure of "Zhetian Universe-Solar System-Living Planet". As for the colorful and extremely complex cosmic structures of our real universe such as supernovae, neutron stars, white dwarfs, red giants, central black holes, galactic spiral arms, giant attractors, and large voids, there are none. Of course, the most real reason is that Chen Dong has no astronomical knowledge reserves in this area at all. After all, he is just a writer, and he is not a professional in astronomy. Therefore, the galaxies he writes about are solar systems, and the commonly used basic unit of measurement for the distance between stars is "tens of billions of miles." As for Lightyear, I basically use it once or twice occasionally, or not at all. From the more than 20 million words of the "Zhetian" trilogy, Chen Dong only knows the word "light year", but what does one light year in our real universe mean? He didn't know exactly how far it was, so he hardly used it. Just mention it occasionally. His favorite interstellar measurement unit has always been "tens of billions of miles." If we must give a reasonable explanation, it is that the Zhetian Universe evolved from the complete fragmentation of the Immortal Ancient Continent, so every galaxy in the Zhetian Universe is a small fragment of the Nine Heavens and Ten Pieces of the past. Therefore, it is completely reasonable and appropriate to measure the distance between galaxies covering the sky in "tens of billions of miles" because they are not a natural evolution process of the universe.

Daguo, you've written so many words, but you haven't grown at all.

This author is really a weirdo. He has written a lot. I have read every book, but none of them have been finished. From Mortal Body to Yang to Thunder. In short, it was good to read at the beginning. It is a big book and it is full, but there are always some inexplicable surprises that make people unable to read even after dozens of chapters. In fact, I am very optimistic about this author. He has a quick hand. I look forward to the next book. You will be a fan of this genre for the rest of your life!

It's like writing an elementary school composition. It's so embarrassing that my scalp feels numb just looking at it.

The author must make the character clear. In the scene, the goddess turns around and recognizes the master, and his master said there that the protagonist is too awesome, so it's okay to change it to "I only have the qualifications of an emperor". Even if the protagonist is very evil, but a person who is hundreds or thousands of years old, turns around and turns into a little fanboy? Moreover, apart from the protagonist, I can't remember the image of the supporting characters, I can't establish their characters, and I forget them in the blink of an eye after reading it.

Good guy, those two mentally ill Luo Li and Qingzhu persuaded me to quit😅. By the way, are the characters of these two people a bit repetitive? They all have an unnatural servility, and they all rush to be slaves to others. It would be fine if there was one, but two in a row within these few chapters? I have to suspect that there will be more such defiant people in the future. . .

I can only say that it is average. It's a pity that the author of this book doesn't write about ordinary people. Zhe Tian is basically the reckless type. It's very different from your fan style. In addition to practicing, the protagonist is still practicing, everything is going smoothly, and whatever he wants comes to him. Secondly, there are some secondary assumptions in this book that people find strange. It is too exaggerated to say that the Holy Son of a Holy Land can be compared to the Son of God and the Goddess. All 11 candidates for the Holy Son can cause thunder disasters in the Four Pole Secret Realm. This is simply off the mark, and it is comparable to some supreme talents. Also, can this Zhetian fan please add a series of fighting elements such as Medusa, Luo Li, and the Poisonous Body of Ernan? When this is added in, people will be dazzled.