Mystery Revival: The One Who Emerged from Baishui Town

The introduction is such a nonsensical mess; it would have been better not to write it at all.

I don't deny the importance of showing off, but showing off for the sake of showing off is just stupid. One of the reasons people read fanfiction about resurrection is because of the story of struggling in the apocalypse, getting stronger, and then showing off.

How did this author manage to prevent piracy so well? None of his books have been pirated.

After reading the first chapter, I felt it was written in a somewhat comical and ridiculous way. The tone and atmosphere of the dialogue felt strange, as if the protagonist was being forced to stand out, causing the collective sense of idiocy to drop.

What kind of garbage is this description? Even the attempt to show off is cringeworthy.

With what you've done, you've killed more people than most ghosts.

The Lin Yuan in this book gives me the feeling that he is a ghost tamer who can revive vengeful spirits and whose consciousness is also corrupted by the supernatural power of vengeful spirits. In the original work, after Yang Jian entered the illusion of Baishui Town, regardless of all the other things, the most important thing was that the illusion had to keep Yang Jian.

The biggest flaw in the mystery is that it doesn't involve ancient times. Apart from mentioning the City God during training, it doesn't touch on anything before the Republic of China era. It doesn't write about the ancient ghosts' resurgence and suppression, as if the ghosts first appeared in the Republic of China era.

I haven't finished reading the original novel, but the level of terror of this ghost should be extremely high. Just go to Dachang City and deal with it. The precious ghosts in Dachang City include: Ghost Messenger, Starving Ghost, Wish Ghost, Ghost Chef, Ghost Mirror, Ghost Blood, Ghost Blood Ghost, Ghost Eye Master, Ginkgo Tree, and the passing Knocking Ghost, Ghost Painting, etc.

Why join headquarters? Can't you write it if you don't join headquarters? Don't you see the flaws in other people's writings about joining headquarters? And yet you still write it like this.