90-Year-Old Swordsman

This is the Wei Yi I want to write about.

I think Mr. Yu Chenghui is very murderous, and he is also Wei Yi

Can't you add an eye-catching point to the protagonist? Write about a protagonist who is 90 years old and can still spin the wheel, nicknamed "The King of Wheels"

The writing is great at the beginning, and it's okay later on, but you have to deal with the logic issues. How can the plot be smoother? It's just a matter of rhythm. Of course these two points are quite difficult, but if you are a novice, then what you write is indeed the best among people. Among novices, you will be the best among people. You will have to write more and practice more later.

Roll it up. If you want to be popular, don't take the usual path 🤓

Every character has a personality, which is good. The fight was a mess. The structure does not look confusing.

Ask everyone, if you have anything that makes you unhappy, feel free to bring it up.

I've seen the final chapter. It's so exciting. I'll update it soon.

Everyone says it's pretty good. Let me taste it.

With so many things going on, can't you just keep having fun?

It reminds me of the nameless character in the storm, full of blood and playing the erhu, but with residual blood mixed with the whole picture 🤭

You can write it, I am a swordsman. It has to be either close combat or long range combat.

Isn't it good to create your own training system? There is a supporting character who used the Martial Saint to reversely kill the Star Refiner (Foundation Building-Golden Pill) and create his own internal training.

How should I put it? The combat power of martial arts fluctuates greatly. At the beginning, it is difficult to defeat the foundation builder, and later it is said that the golden elixir is also difficult to defeat. Later, as the incarnation of the god Remnant Soul Ye, he is amazed by a blow that is comparable to the heyday, hitting the spiritual world barrier. This floating combat power is not clear, and can be changed at any time, so it is not rigorous.