
Travel Through the World of Martial Arts with an Invincible Hero
带着英雄无敌穿越武侠世界
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- Myriad Worlds
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Shennong is dead
Wow, so awesome. If you choose the profession of Necromancer, how will you beat the opponent? It is known that you have Skeleton Soldiers, Walking Corpses, Ghosts and Wraiths What will you choose? Yes, the protagonist chose to strengthen himself with magic power and went up to do it, but was pierced through the heart by a sword. I have never seen such a heaven-defying thing.
One of the most common mistakes made by current authors is to try to sell things like sheep before others. If you have given such a big cheat, then don't suppress the strength of the cheat. Because you wrote it in the introduction, readers will have psychological expectations when they come in. If others click in and find that it is not the same thing, they will 100% scold you If you don't want the pace to be so fast, then don't give it such a big deal and just write a weakened version. So it's not unreasonable to say that many authors are desperate
Just like some MC writers, there are obvious tricks that allow the world to adapt to you instead of you adapting to the world. It just happens that the left and right brains are fighting each other, overwhelming the protagonist and cutting off the golden finger.
A big lump
The whole text is the author's personal soliloquy. This book gave me the feeling that it was somewhere between AI writing and pseudo-human chattering, without any sense of logic and expression of a normal adult.
Each and every one of you is responsible for the survival of these authors.
What kind of invincible sheep head is there? They suppressed both combat strength and intelligence, and persuaded them to retreat.
There is no hero who is invincible if his life and death overwhelms his combat power.
There are restrictions everywhere, and 90% of the whole article is talking about your ancient nonsense. The funny thing is that it is so stingy. The head of a family that was second in the founding of the country and has been passed down for hundreds of years can only use bamboo strips to scrape in the toilet? Not to mention someone washing it for you, why don't you use cloth or silk yourself and then someone else can clean it? It can only be said that the author and the protagonist, the rich young man of the modern Xie Dynasty, want to buy something and need to take a taxi to the nearest chain supermarket to see if they have the book and sit at a table together.
Advice to new readers: "Just run away."
This author always says that he is not satisfied with his writing, and this is indeed the case.
Can you imagine! Out of the first 6 chapters, almost 4 chapters were skipped at a glance, and only half of the chapters were related to the title of the book. Others are basically how to eat, how to drink, how the Zhuangzi's house is, how the housekeepers and servants are, and how the differences between the common people and the powerful are. It feels like a primary school student's diary. I wake up in the morning and open my eyes, then get out of bed, put on clothes and pants, and then go to the bathroom to wash my face and brush my teeth. After finishing, I went to have breakfast. Breakfast consisted of this and that... How many bites did I take of this and how many bites did I take of that! Then there are a bunch of descriptions of the feeling of eating! ! ......... I can't stand it anymore.
Very bad
The title of the book talks about Invincible Heroes and the World of Martial Arts. When I read Chapter 15, there was no entry into the world of Martial Arts, and the Golden Finger has never been used. It's all about writing trivial matters
I feel that if the Golden Finger is a cemetery, it was a bit too big in ancient times and could easily be pushed sideways. If it is paired with a death-type artifact and a corpse witch comes in, it will be even more impossible. But it doesn't matter if it's about, um, all the worlds and heavens.
I gave up the book after enduring twenty chapters
1. No focus. Sometimes martial arts, sometimes magic, sometimes farming, sometimes doing business, sometimes taking imperial examinations, I don't know what the protagonist is going to do. 2. If the plug-in is turned on, it means it is not turned on. If you hold back 10 bone dragons, the emperor will immediately write a Zen edict. Moreover, the invincible heroes also have four-dimensional attributes. They directly transform into the people of the motherland. What are you talking about here? They start with death ripples and turn the whole city into skeleton soldiers 3. The author has been popularizing science about life, society, and what are the big principles. Reading is like reading Baidu Encyclopedia, and it is like you have been in a class for 20 years in a big city, and you are fighting with your colleagues every day. When you go home during the New Year, your seven aunts and eight aunts who have been farming all your life will pull you and teach you how to work.
While saying to be cautious, he dared to do the salt and iron business when he just met a woman. I think there are enough Nine Tribes, right?
How do you keep reading? The crying of water makes my head hurt when I see it
I can't understand this work. In the first few chapters, it is said that the protagonist traveled through time, but something went wrong. He was given a golden finger and it was disabled. It said that there was another golden finger and it was disabled..., It reminds me of a dialogue format. I have two trees, one is a fruit tree and the other is also a fruit tree. One is lost and the other is also lost¬_¬~ It must be written together. Written separately, what I can say is that it is fully functional, and I have to turn around and mutilate him, which is very tedious. Then I read Chapter 5. The protagonist does not practice magic or martial arts. He is discussing the problems of the ancient social environment, class politics, and inheritance, and may also involve intrigues. I feel that this kind of golden finger to improve combat power is superfluous to you.
This author wrote about Li Jiayu in the last book. Li Jiayu understands everything. I can't stand this kind of American zzzq article.
6 Ah, it's totally different. Those who read Heroes and Invincibles usually focus on the development of arms and territorial hegemony. If your template is disabled, you should at least tend to write in the direction of developing new arms through basic undead. Watching martial arts generally focuses on spiritual chivalry, pursuit of progress, and overthrowing the decadent era. What did you write? The elements of Invincible Heroes are not well written. The martial arts elements went straight away the moment the witch appeared. I predict The next step is to open a harem in a routine, the road to invincibility regardless of logic, and the combat power is soaring.
Is this a piece of shit written about?
At the beginning, the protagonist sells iron and tea with people he doesn't know, and he still thinks he is very smart and awesome. It seems that apart from rebellion, there are few crimes more serious than this.
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How could such a novel be published in Sanjiang?
He kept nagging and saying something. Don't dare to open up the massacre. That place is in a country. You can just go abroad and kill all the foreigners outside, and no one will care about you.
Deceiving readers, the writing is rubbish and even the AI admits it
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Jin Tianzhu, your only chance to make a comeback in writing a book now is to write about female martial arts heroes and bring them into the harem. Do you know that you are finished writing books now? After reading your books for so many years, your current world view and background layout settings cannot be seamlessly connected even when changing maps to fight monsters and upgrades. The golden finger usage ideas do not even allow the protagonist to use the correct usage plan to force the combat power. The construction of the training system is all outdated, and the combat power hierarchy system It is still broken and backward. The writing, plot control, intrigues, power struggles, battle descriptions, war situation deductions, and battle description abilities have completely degraded. It is not as exciting as the first book. If you don't write a harem story with Liu Beiwen, you will starve to death. Do you know?
I was surprised to see so many comments about it. There is no book that everyone likes. If you don't like it, just read it. I am a 15-year-old bookworm and feel that this book is quite good. It gives me the motivation to read it. I can't say it is a magical book. At least it has the level of food and grass +, and the author still has some imagination. At least it is not a cookie-cutter book. I hope that the author can have his own ideas and not be influenced by others, and not be led astray by others.
After reading more than a dozen chapters, I feel that the main idea is not clear. Are you trying to develop cheats? Or should we develop mortal forces to rebel and become emperor? Then he inexplicably wrote a few chapters about the Flower Picker, and then suddenly started a business partnership, using a hammer here and a stick here and there. What on earth were they going to do? The writing is rather messy
Is there a Shennong? What's the situation like since it was put on the shelves? Is it worth watching?
Is there no Kyushu on this little broken ball? Can you practice 🙂
It's really not good to be able to read more than a hundred chapters. There are various mismatches between the protagonist Goldfinger and the world of low martial arts. People in the East and West began to want to use cross-border products to compete for hegemony, but the 100 or so cross-border products have no role. Then use the golden finger to compete for hegemony. As a result, the strength is invincible at first, and the power has not been developed. In order to advance the plot, a new map is opened. The result is that the new map increases the strength, and the old map with low martial arts competes for hegemony, becoming more and more fragmented.
Why isn't it over yet? Always show serialization
You've already read Chapter 10, haven't you finished introducing the social structure? Why does it look like a running account?