Uncle Infinite Is in Another World

It is more like a manual than a novel. The author is accustomed to and focuses on explaining everything. In the absence of an overall system plan, his explanations can contradict each other wherever he wants to explain. Not only the power system, but also the terrain and maps can contradict themselves. Why did you write such an article? Are you satisfied with designing a world by yourself?

The subject matter is very good, but it looks really awkward. First of all: a protagonist who has transferred to Templar, learned super serology and mutated hard qigong can't beat an ordinary veteran. I really don't know what to say. Although combat experience is very important, when I can kill you with one punch, it is useless no matter how much you do. Don't say that if you have power, you will not have speed. That is pure nonsense, unless you are King Kong Barbie. Second: You have used all the cheating methods mentioned above, and you still lied to me about not exercising too hard. According to the standards of people on earth, muscle damage is miscellaneous. So how do you, a knight from another world, exercise? With your standards, the most you can train is just a gym trainer, so why should you talk about breakthroughs? Third: Explanation for half a chapter of the novel. This is the most embarrassing thing. It doesn't matter if the progress is slow. After all, many novels are basically exciting in the first and middle stages but then fade away. But you are basically explaining what the hell it is, and you are all explaining it with earth thinking. It feels like there is a layer of cling film on the article, and there is no sense of substitution.

It looks dry. Marvel and Heroes can make a fool of themselves. The author can...

Who is the heroine? Isn't it just an uncle farming in another world? How boring!

The content and setting are pretty good, but unfortunately it's a bit dry. I want to read it but can't. It also has a lot of words. I recommend dividing it into more paragraphs.

One chapter a day is not enough! ! !

All readers like a protagonist whose IQ and ability are online. The butt determines the head. Naturally, if you are on the protagonist's side, you don't want him to be useless. Do you know how you feel in front of others? It feels like others can raise a dragon but you can only raise a pig. There are so many plug-ins that have to be raped by passers-by. What do you think?

The plot of The Variety Witch is like feeding people like flies. You can't control the half-crippled witch, but why should you first give her a favor to help her regain her youth? And then I can't even control myself. My persistence has always been like a joke.

I saw that 870,000 words of yours appeared in the Fantasy Weekly Recommendation, and I knew your book was a hit.

The story is a good story, but it is limited to a story. The author neglects that this is not a narrative, but a novel that needs to be enriched by the dialogues of various living characters or the thoughts of the characters. After reading hundreds of chapters, although it is a farming novel, it cannot be described in the form of a narrative. After all, those who read novels nowadays need a sense of immersion. This is my personal opinion. If you don't like it, don't criticize it.

Maybe I can use the portal skill to return to the earth in the future. Think about it, to bring the Cloud City back to the earth, first a hymn comes from the sky, and then the Cloud City appears, then the little angel, the archangel, the shining angel, and the Hao angel appear in sequence, and then the protagonist appears again. This is awesome

If the witch didn't assassinate the protagonist, why would she write so many explanations and say that the goddess is also a woman! If the direct description of her strength does not match, just turn around and leave. Later, when her father dies, a few words will be very convincing! If you explain blindly for a long time, it will only look fake.

Suddenly I realized that when I was a child, every time my Chinese teacher looked at me with helpless eyes, this style of writing was really not suitable for reading.

It's boring, it feels like I'm watching a black and white film with no other colors

This book was basically a hit. I guess the author is a newbie, or the author hasn't written novels for a long time, and he can't keep up with the current mainstream.

It feels okay from the front, but as you get to the back, the author's writing becomes more and more floating. He basically doesn't need an oar when rowing, and relies on the waves.

The idea is good and the thinking is good, but I feel that the writing is too forward-looking. Sometimes when I read it, I feel that the content has been lost.

If you go all out, it's really not as good as others just doing it casually.

The subject matter is very good. Although some things are not very clear in the early stage, the overall flow is good. But later on I didn't like it very much. Just write the fourth natural disaster. Not to mention your previous golden fingers, the Empire and Invincible Heroes have been transformed into useless golden fingers. And the Central City of All Realms made me feel like I was on the verge of becoming a god. You can't do this on a bad street. And I always feel that the author writes with a salty fish mentality.

I really like the subject matter, but I can't praise the writing style. I hope the author can write better and better, so I'll go ahead.

What the hell is this thing written? There is no highlight at all, and the whole article is boring.

The character of the protagonist written by the author is always so diaosi, childish, and wants to have sex with women whenever he sees them.

I had no feeling in the early stage and there was no need to take a look.

What a subject, written like a primary school student's anecdote, with too many useless descriptions, nothing exciting, and the cowardly and low pig's feet are really speechless! ! !

I'm also speechless. There are so many professions, and the protagonist has to choose a certain faction. Demon hunters are obviously disgusting and have to learn.

It's well written, but I didn't like it when it was later changed to an advent game.

Persistence is not victory, and the same goes for writing three million words without progress. Instead of insisting on updating, it is better to improve the writing style, set logic, and techniques. Otherwise, if you write so much, it is really better to just do something else, which will be more profitable.

Haha, such a clichéd name. You can tell the cliched plot of this novel just by looking at the name.

The most ridiculous thing about these warriors, knights, magicians, etc. Is the intelligence setting. You can say whatever fighting spirit or magic value you want. What intelligence they have, it just looks nonsense. You don't recognize it and you think it's for increased command.

Cover: Main: My wife——M Left: Mordred, right: Bediwell