Swallowed Star: Life Choices System

These types of choice systems all share a common flaw: only one option (deliberately set by the author for the protagonist to choose) offers the best return. There should actually be two ways to write it (the more common version): First, each option is quite average, with similar difficulty and rewards (all things the protagonist needs).

Author, you need to provide three options, and each option should have its own advantages and disadvantages, making it difficult to choose between them. For example, if your second clone is so powerful, then the first two options are just for show; if you know everything, choose the clone.

Was the previous book's overpowered abilities too much, so this one is too risky? "Devour the Grand Stage, Don't Come If Your Power Is Small" is no joke. I've never seen a Devour the Grand Stage where the protagonist only gets to level 6-1; I think this one is correct. Also, I've seen a lot of discussion about the Jianmu clone.

Can we skip the "annulment" trope at the beginning? It's outdated.

The Jianmu clone is utter garbage. It boasts a tenfold gene boost in the early game and claims to be able to improve itself. What's the point of self-improvement? Can't others improve it by spending money? At most, they'll spend more money. Unless it's designed to be an incredibly cheap upgrade, like how ordinary immortals can achieve thousands of times the boost, it's just pure waste.

Did you laugh when you wrote the premise of "The Unimaginably Strong Tongtian Jianmu" with a starting gene level of 10 times?

This annulment of the engagement has so many chapters? Look at how many chapters Doupo has! Are you aiming to surpass Doupo's pacing with more filler? I can't imagine when it will end without several thousand chapters. Are all authors this shameless these days, starting with thousands of chapters of filler?

In my opinion, the current options are not very meaningful; the protagonist has chosen option 3 all the way through. Because it's categorized by difficulty. The more difficult the task, the higher the reward. But since you've written it out, it's definitely something the protagonist can do, so you'd obviously choose option 3 without thinking—it offers a higher reward and some conflict that can…

It's awkward. On the one hand, the rhythm is chaotic, sometimes fast and sometimes slow. On the other hand, it's not bad, but it looks okay and can relieve boredom. The author has some talent, but not much.

The synopsis is so confusing that I didn't want to read it at all. It doesn't even make sense of the basic timeline. The original story of Koti is set many eras earlier than Lianluo.