Swallowed Star: Lord of Original Sin

The author always likes to add drama to the Blood Demon King. To be honest, it is really unnecessary. I hope there will be no drama about the destined villain. Ten epochs later, the protagonist at least breaks through and becomes the Lord of the Universe. Not to mention that the Blood Demon King can exist as a villain, and his realm has also improved. That is the most disgusting. He should learn from the original writing method of Moro and be killed instantly.

I feel that the secret techniques practiced by the protagonist are too complicated and there is no need to redeem so many. It will be of no use at all when the level of laws is reached later.

Don't overdo it when writing this kind of fan fiction with big hooks. You designed such a big hook, thought it was upgraded too quickly, and added some secondary settings that you couldn't even explain, just to force readers to run away. There are so many clones of the protagonist. It can be said that the protagonist follows the path of Hunyuan Chaos, integrating all the ultimate paths. Each clone follows a path of fusion laws. We can compile different identities and experience plots for the clones, which can last for a long time. Of course, the author's writing skills are insufficient, and he can't make up something different from the original work, so he can only downgrade it, so bye bye

Can a blood demon king give his subordinates the starry sky beasts to seize their bodies? It's funny, only those who have 10 times the genes are the Invincible King or the Venerable. The original Chaos City Lord also said that Luo Feng's chance to seize the body is a medium chance. In the eyes of the Lord of the Universe, a medium chance is worth a lot of treasure.

The author of this book has fallen into the strange circle of other novels of the same type. No matter what tricks the protagonist plays, he always follows the same content as the original work, with a large amount of content such as understanding the rules. The most novel theme of this book is that the protagonist uses the skills and magical powers of the heavens to fight against the original. Fighting with the characters in it, as long as your battles are wonderfully written, and you maximize and detail the supernatural powers and spells of the heavens, it will be very interesting. Now the protagonist has been cultivating the divine body and then comprehending the rules. It has the same content as the original work and other fans.

Crazy suppression of the protagonist's level, fabricating some inexplicable secondary settings. The fourth level of the Fire and Sky Beast God, the universe master's understanding of the law, insists that it will not teleport, strangle or block. There is no space for the law of fire and space. Can you read the original work a little bit?

The entry limit is waived, and it is estimated that not many people will watch 🙂

Crazy suppression of the protagonist's level, fabricating some inexplicable secondary settings. The fourth level of the Fire and Sky Beast God, the Master of the Universe's understanding of the law, insists that he will not teleport, strangle or block. Not one of the three major space branches can be mastered, and the space law can only be crowned as a high-level king, and the fourth level of fire and air is forcibly set. SB😅😅😅

It's very boring. The beginning is full of original plots with original characters, and there is no sense of immersion. At the beginning, it's resurrection to seize the body, or Orochimaru's undead reincarnation, which is a rubbish method. Then he inexplicably trains to the planet, and there is a slave crisis in a very clichéd way. There are a lot of inexplicable plots crowded together, and I have a question mark on my head.

I just made a comment in the chapter comment area and you deleted it. Why didn't I complain about you in your book review area?