Swallowed Star: Lord Tai Huan

There are only a few Devouring Starry Sky fanfics that you can read, so be tolerant to novice writers. The beginning of their writing is not based on the earth line. The original plot in the early stage, except for the description of the practice, is a bit long-winded. There are no big problems. It is almost enough to pretend to be Shen Nong. What is the point of Devouring Fans with such little poison resistance?

Damn it, this place is swallowing the stars, not covering the sky. Why do I feel like I'm watching the sky over here? The protagonist is enemies of everyone in the world. Not only foreigners, but also a lot of people from the same race want to kill you. There are all kinds of conspiracies and tricks.

It's getting more and more poisonous. It's okay if the Territory Lord is released without Immortal accompanying him. Even if you don't have a teacher and are alone, you can give blood Luo Crystal to your clan members casually and return blood to your own clan. You are awesome. According to you, Devouring Starry Sky is all about blood. Immortal kills the protagonist's hometown casually. If I remember correctly, the hometowns of many original geniuses have been transformed by the company. Two geniuses of the same generation have been living together for decades and they still follow the way of the beast god. Do the top management no longer care? I haven't discovered that the clone is treating the higher-ups as fools. They are all direct disciples of Chaos. They go out and get the same treatment as the immortal disciples. . . You are so awesome. It would be great to retreat to the true God for more than ten epochs. If the logic is incoherent, it is better not to write, and subscribe to it in vain.

The increase rate of all the increase secret techniques is fixed. Why does the author think that it will decrease? Even rubbish techniques like the Nine Layers Thunder Sword will increase seven times if you use them for the realm masters.

It seems that it is gone, which is a bit of a pity. In fact, it was quite surprising from the beginning. It does not follow the original route and has a lot of original content. Unfortunately, it is a bit off-kilter. Something has been wrong since the first time the protagonist had to escape death because of a cheating technique. In fact, this cheating technique controls the time to start practicing, which is completely avoidable, but it is also understandable. But then the clone was deliberately arranged to be a troublesome clone just for the sake of plot conflict. He also forced the clone to be unable to break through immortality and had to rely on treasures from alien races. Territory Lord dares to venture into other people's territory and take risks. Where does he have the courage? Who says a clone must acquire an identity? Luo Feng only has the identity of a human when facing humans. He can practice as a clone and gain experience. He usually practices quietly. Why must he have a separate identity? Obviously the cheat is very strong, he can reach the true god even while lying down, and he can also cause life and death incidents at every turn. Luo Feng has not experienced as many dangers as you. Start forcing conflicts for the sake of plot conflicts.

It's weird that Devouring fandom uses innate magical powers. It's obvious that the original novel has innate secrets and uses magical powers.

To be honest, I don't understand the meaning of this Akiryo clone. It has no meaning at all except to increase the twists and turns of the plot and increase the risks experienced by the protagonist. The so-called finding an identity for the clone is also nonsense. No matter how special your will clone is, in the final analysis, it is still a clone. The consciousness is clear, and the understanding of the law is the same. When the clone faces a death crisis, it will also affect the protagonist. In the original work, Luo Feng has several clones, does each clone have an identity? It doesn't make any difference whether your will clone takes any life. Creating such a clone is just to cause trouble for the protagonist. If you want to find the secret book for the clone, you can find it. The protagonist has faced several life-and-death crises so far, and he has always relied on cheating to survive. To be honest, Luo Feng in the original novel was not as thrilling as you. Except for the Star Tower, which he had to carry on his own, there was no risk of death in other crises. If you write a cheating fan story and still have so many narrow escapes, even if you still have a doppelgänger, I admire you. The several death crises that the protagonist has experienced so far clearly could not have happened, and were completely forced by the plot.

Robbery and murder? It doesn't take even a second to send a message in the virtual world 😅

I also think it's weird to always rely on conspiracy to push the plot. It's different from the original feeling of Devouring this book. The plot of killing geniuses and grabbing treasures shouldn't be mainstream.

Too many people stop writing the Star Swallowing Sky fan fiction halfway through. If you want to write it, just keep writing it. Don't stop writing it halfway through.