Secrets of the Past

It always sucks, and even if you write some good books next time, no one will expect anything from you.

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After Jintian, the book is full of literature, awkward chatter, and stinky parallels. I feel that Gezi likes to read foreign works. The writing style of the whole book and the characteristic of not being able to speak human words are very similar. This book is still not very good, but it is not particularly literary, and the language style is very suitable for my identity.

Thousands of years ago, a thousand years later, this is a very classic linguistic mistake It should be a thousand years ago, now The baseline of the timeline is now, so when we say a thousand years ago, A thousand years ago, a thousand years later, if the baseline is now, wouldn't it be the future?

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It becomes a bit cliche later on, it lacks a sense of weirdness, and the story develops a bit slowly.

I'm going to plant a potato plant here

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Looking forward to Brother Gezi's book

Gezi, I am an apprentice 🙂

It is basically abolished What a big city, several major forces, in reality it is just a few NPCs revolving around the protagonist. The so-called conflict between various forces is more like a cricket fight waiting for the protagonist to give orders. It was originally supposed to be World of Warcraft, but you said it was Warcraft, and finally it was DOTA🙂 Normal process: Secret Realm-cultivation of the protagonist, laying out the world view, setting up conflicts-Secret Realm-refining the world view, developing conflicts-Secret Realm-resolving conflicts, expanding the world view-Secret Realm... Loop I think it is a secret realm that does not require logic, so it only needs settings. On the outside, the characterization is too pale and boring.

It can't be as bad as the previous one 🙂

Boss Gezi, why don't you write down the story of Bueqin? At least I have drawn hundreds of people. It would be a pity not to use it.

Read the guide above 👍

Seeing now, I can clearly feel that Gezi has not learned much experience from Jintian, or that he has not made much progress. Grid's writing style is okay, there's nothing wrong with it except for being wordy, but the plot is just a joke. Writing a book in Gezi is like writing an essay in my senior year of high school. The only remarkable thing is the great beginning and title. The first is to use the layout flow rashly when you only have half a bottle of water and are not proficient, and then the classic way of reducing intelligence and losing B-squares is quite common. Secondly, since the author himself knew that there was a big problem with his outline, why did he take a while to sort out the plot outline? Writing a book is not an essay. There is a time limit for essays, but is there a time limit for books? Finally, I guess that Gezi is not very social, or he is simply stubborn and unwilling to listen to other people's opinions. This became obvious after Jin Tian. This piece of shit is so smelly that even a normal person can't stand it. Didn't anyone read it before it was serialized? Or is Gezi still stubborn and serving up this mess? If Gezi wants to write well, with a beginning and an end, then I suggest you stop reading immediately to collect your thoughts, communicate with other authors, and deal with the plot properly.