Traveling Between Two Worlds: From Photosynthesis Talent to Child of Light

These last two chapters?! Author, are you out of your mind?! Writing like this could get you a real-life lecture! Wow, I'm waiting for the book to be banned in a few days.

The historical world hierarchy is getting higher and higher.

I thought it was a game of reselling items from different worlds. Turns out it's about teaching people Qigong. I wrote fifty pages of practice exercises. So boring.

It's a strange feeling. Even though the protagonist's life has been going smoothly, there's always a sense of depression about being dependent on others.

You've written too much about cultivation; do you really intend to teach us to cultivate?

There's not much of a plot; the whole thing is about teaching martial arts. Those who love martial arts might want to check it out; maybe you can even learn some techniques. 😁

Bro, honestly, you should write more of the story, and then use your special ability or perspective as a turning point or to drive the plot forward.

You've written a lot, but it's not to teach readers how to cultivate. There's no need for that. It's too complicated, and besides, it's all information that can be easily found online. Focusing on advancing the plot and developing the characters is the real priority.

After reading some of the content, it felt familiar. The core ideas are exactly the same as "The Memory Palace." Turns out it's the same author. The section explaining "cultivation" using scientific theory, especially the visualization of light frequencies, is identical—not a single detail changed. Some people like theory, while others prefer plot. How far this book will go is hard to say.

Smoking is harmful to health, but billions of people worldwide are washing it away, and the incense offerings to Buddha and Taoist masters have never stopped burning.